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Maybe one of the healers, seeing Anver faced with double-grief, took Anver aside the week before and told him that Anda was Alina's victim?

Remember, Kha tells Anver about the twins  later.  If Anda was intact when Kha went away to Earthwound he couldn't tell the story so cleanly.

Only thing is, Anda was Anver's tutor.  Then Anver ends up her boss.  Needs to be explained?

Don't worry about payback.  I'll try to give you plenty of chances!

I've got sketches for 25-odd scenes covering Melayne and Kirsey in Sgolyabank, taking care of the mountain.  Maybe 6000 words.  I'll write them in sequence, but they should be intercut.

By that time, Merran and Jamen have got the kids, lost Shogran, and gotten into the Academy by a back route (evading Parkol and Forsa, and out of sight of the few eyes that Threkesrom can muster).  Merran will have a few adventures, and her training back home in Pazot will serve her well.

There may also be a lesson in pitching horseshoes.

I'm not sure that 'working' quite covers that contingency.

I've read the chapter.  Gotta let it digest a bit before we go on.  I speak Tazar -- Brilliant.  The part about how the Wolves work ... I've got to think through how that group adapts.  All of this is delaying the destruction of that Horcr##ror.  (Hmm.  Whattif the Gillis reacts to the Horror?  Would that fit the story?)

It's not that Andalaya-the-person needs more intro, but that her story thread needs to be rooted somewhere.  Telling us in the saving-Kha episode that Anda is Alina's victim, and then telling us that Alina is making a move on the school will build Alina as the villian you need and give Anver a wholesome reason to hate her.  And not just Anver, but everyone involved in Andalaya's care.

pal-o-mine

Amy, as I move toward the Andalaya chapters, I find myself thinking that the topic's introduction feels like an interruption.  I'm wondering whether you could mention and hint at Andalaya and her sister earlier.  For example, mention her--and maybe Alina, maybe not--when you are in the curses ward with Kha.  (Anver's relationship to the curses ward?)  Then mention Andalaya and Alina again between Anver's exploration of Alina's house and the actual trip onto the roof, letting us know that Anver would really, really like to hurt Alina or make it possible for Kha to do so.  Then instead of an interruption you have an answer.

YMMV.

Dance of the Cleanerbots (From =Fantasia 2040=)

See if you can work online on Google Docs, then.

Lupus Yonderboy

Spend X hundred dollars on a machine that may only run Window just to find out that Microsoft still doesn't know how to do thread and process scheduling, still can't keep from stalling when using backing store, and has a whole new suite of bugs requiring reboots daily and twice on Sundays?

My sympathies are with Norm.

Wll the Chromebook run Open Office?

beatitude