Janet, I tried to answer your review comments. The result is about 50% larger and maybe a little better. Maybe also more ... lurid. If you want a repub, I'll do it. Anyone else, care to take up the job after Janet?
1,176 2016-11-09 01:55:24
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
1,177 2016-11-08 20:05:00
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Bay or bow? Bow windows certainly are used on upper floors. A bay window requires an extension of the building, at least at that floor but sometimes across multiple floors. Yes, it's done. If you can get a good view of the southern facade of NY Presbyterian Hospital (formerly NY Cornell Medical Center) you should be able to see a pair of multistory bays ending (or shrinking) somewhere around the twentieth floor. The western facade also has a multistory bay. (Hospitals often have corridors ending in bays to provide visitor seating while staff is with a patient.)
1,178 2016-11-08 19:22:46
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Lost it in the first throe?
1,179 2016-11-08 19:20:43
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Got mine last Monday last week. No problems.
Do they use a different formula in Canada?
1,180 2016-11-08 14:37:25
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I should caution you: =ConVent= and the other Vampire Con stories are within the rubric of 'improving one's mind with cheap fiction'. They also show how to violate half the rules we hold dear.
1,181 2016-11-08 06:00:19
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
For AJ especially, from Kate Paulk's ConVent:
"I'm Natalia Bosting, and I'm here under false pretenses because I don't write sex, I write relationships." She tilted her head as though she was thinking about something. "Well, except for the Night Ships space opera series. Oh, and the Crowned Heart series." Another pause. "Actually, I think there was sex in the gay were-creatures books. But not in anything else." Her accent toured Western Europe before settling somewhere Eastern European but not Russian. She handed the microphone to McCloud with a smile.
(Fun read, BTW)
1,182 2016-11-06 22:46:20
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Did you get the manufacturer's updates?
1,183 2016-11-06 21:36:32
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
B2, Ch16: The Rockpile
1,184 2016-11-06 12:22:09
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Okay, 200-odd words out there, a tease in a new chapter.
I shudder to think what the reviews will look like. ((Wry grin with marmalade (NO Vegamite!) ))
1,185 2016-11-06 06:40:39
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Try a vacuum windshield mount. The key is to moisten the suction cup ever so slightly before you press it in place and flip the lock lever. With the surfaces clean and a little moisture, it should hold for three to six months.
1,186 2016-11-06 04:42:35
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
The problem with Tomtom and Garmin is that if you want to slide the map around while driving you have to change modes, and the controls change when you do. For all its problems, Magellen doesn't do that.
They all waste half the screen on what's behind you in overhead mode, which is all I ever want.
1,187 2016-11-06 04:38:11
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm trying to get the flasher project done. It keeps wanting to spawn side projects, but I'm trying to hold firm.
The changes I worked out in the hospital and just after are in and working. There's one bit of fine tuning to try. I'm getting a brighter flash and probably better battery life. I have a pageful of flash pulse data, to take again after the change. And I want to try it with the lithium iron disulfide batteries Eveready sells. Their discharge curve is high, flat, and sharp. It will be an interesting, if pricey, test.
Then finish the last test article to test the final layout and begin drilling and cutting the case.
1,188 2016-11-06 04:16:47
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm tempted to put an early version up without context. Mmmmm ....
1,189 2016-11-05 20:42:16
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Time for me to say where I've been, especially since I owe a lot of reviews.
I'm still getting myself together after the illness. I'm trying to get the flasher project done. It keeps wanting to spawn side projects, but I'm trying to hold firm. I have lots of parts to file now.
Editing of the previous chapter is simmering on the back burner. The missing chapters before are in the fridge. I've been working on parts for the next chapter. Description is slowing me mightily, and this place (various names, but i expect to call the chapter =The Rockpile=) will introduce Merran to some of the sleazier parts of the Academy. (Not nearly the most evil.)
I hope this is as parlously close to pornography as I ever get. I need a way to put the idea of brain bleach in ... but Merran isn't wise enough yet to want it.
Right now I've got fragments and ideas that need to be put in order, with more notes on description than I can use ... and I've only covered a quarter of what's needed.
1,190 2016-11-04 10:05:16
Re: The imperfect use of Past Perfect (19 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
We got a lot of smilage out of dem beans.
1,191 2016-11-03 03:59:53
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
The strength of the springy parts seems not to be standardized.
I tried a TomTom once and returned within the hour. Neither TT nor Garmin is safe to use in a moving vehicle unless all you want it for is to tell you where to go. If you want it for a quick-adjustable map, their different modes and different behaviors in the modes make them almost as bad as texting.
And I cringe when I see them in the middle of the windshield blocking a critical part of the driver's view.
1,192 2016-11-02 22:00:54
Re: The imperfect use of Past Perfect (19 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I had baked beans for dinner. ![]()
1,193 2016-11-02 19:49:43
Re: Please post here regarding a completed review (671 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)
Reviewed CJD's Ch 57.
1,194 2016-11-02 15:17:27
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
You have topic changes. Break the paragraph and compose each of the resulting paragraphs well.
1,195 2016-10-31 16:45:12
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I was hopimg jaundice would cover the color range.
1,196 2016-10-30 23:03:38
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
How does it compare with.the color.ramge of jaundice?
1,197 2016-10-29 20:06:19
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Stalling isn't the sort of accomplishment I prize.
When concrete turns that yellow tan that's not quite brown and dirtier than dirt ... what do you call that hue?
1,198 2016-10-29 07:20:18
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Amy, please understand that my slow pace now is due to your insistence on D-E-S-C-R-I-P-T-I-O-N.
1,199 2016-10-29 05:57:46
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
NJC runs screaming in random zigzags, leaving several NJC-shaped Looney-Tunes holes in the walls as he passes heedlessly through them.
1,200 2016-10-29 05:10:13
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Canada has the world's longest coastline and no means to defend it. ![]()