626

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Whilst I srtuggle with the simplest of scenes, I also see that I've got to rethink the ensemble I plan to introduce.

627

(3 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Dan, all problems I've had myself.  When I find more I'll be able to write about them!

628

(3 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Welcome!  You can get the attention of our sometimes inattentive regulars by reviewing their#####our work.  There's a very wide variety of style an subgenre here, and of course you can review anything you can see.  It's an invitation to recip(rocate), and if you feel you can't, perhaps because of gemre, it's polite to say so.

In this group we tend to each name a forum thread for our own use and stay with it.

Or go without the contractions but drop the 'for you' in the second case.  In the first  'but I am following'.

630

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Yes, and all in between and at the extremes.  But here the selection of events to advance milieu, character, plot, theme, and thesis.

631

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Whazzup wit' NJC?

Well, I've reached a point where I see how my work isn't good enough, but I'm groping blindly for better.  I need to push on through this.

I also need to renumber chapters ... which suggests I also need to manage structure better, to do more in less, to give each item more roles to play.

I give myself 'til midnight Friday.

632

(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

If pre-law is 'define ____', does law school begin 're-define _____'?

"You've given me a lot to think about  I need to understand why you've suggested these changes and how I can use that within my own style."

I sometimes push hard in reviews, but I try to explain.

Adam and Eve--smash em!

The glitch seems to have disappeared.

Hmm.

I went to look at an old review on my movile and found the review body and tabs on a dark grey background, with the type light.  Is this intentional?  I find it hard to read and the close-set light-dark border makes it harder

"The Secrets of Story" by Matt Bird.  Maybe a bit more foundational than the others, but very good.

Hardly, though the final comment is an eight-lb. striking metaphor.

Read my comments.  Nine and sixty ways.

She is a skilled writer.  It's not her characters' character that is in question.

Romances somtimes switch PoV mid-sentence.  They're like the circus equestrian standing with each foot on a different horse.

You're a dear!

The right word is economical.  It delivers great value to the reader with minimum interpretive effort, and no distraction from a need to assemble a picture from multiple words.

You write a story.  The story you write isn't the story you want to tell.  The story you write tells the story you want to tell.  But that isn't the story that keeps the listener reading.  The story that pays the reader is told by events in the story that have effects the reader cares about on characters in the story (including characters not shown, eg. everyone who will die if that nuclear bomb goes off), or sometimes on things, if the reader is convinced to value those things.

"Romance is divine and I'm not one to knock it, but  ..."

646

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Great to watch.  Nightmare of traffic.  It was the day every university in the South had their students move in.  And going home ... the evening rush hour is always twice as bad as the morning. More details if you want them, but ... I was away from home for about 62 hours.  39+1/2 of them were on the road, half or more in stop-and-go traffic.  My car decided it wanted an oil change with less than 2k miles since the last one.  I left for home at 13:30 on Tuesday and got there at 04:30 on Wednesday.

A murrain 'pon those who don't bother to notice that their response to traffic congestion is to make the congestion worse!

There are standards for handling this, but there are also variations that various people/organizations use.  The canonical response to a violation of the standard is to drop the suspect character, because if two different readers interpret it differently, the difference might open a security hole.  What you're seeing is not a drop, but a translation of the character to a question mark, though even that might open a security hole.

Unfortunately, Microsoft is not known for strict adherence to standards.  I don't know what library TNBW is using, but it too might decide that non-latin characters (including the barred symbols used by some latin-character Slavic languages) are unsafe.

I suspect that the transfer is made using HTML, which should be unambiguous even though Microsoft violates the standards left, right, east, west, in, out, and six times on Sunday.  That means that TNBW ought to be able to handle it.  But depending on how well the code base is organized by separation of concerns, it might be a hellacious fix with lots of problems introduced mid-flight.

Could it be done via the tooltips mechanism?  Of course, there are rollover traps to avoid, but could it be done?

649

(26 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Trump has a virtue that may yet save him.  He learns from his mistakes.  I cannot see that in any of our currrent crop of politicians, for too few have had to pay for their mistakes.

650

(3 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

If the thread title isn't a book title, it should be.