What days?  If Amy's up to it I might be able to join you for a day.  (Amy, I want you and Janet to have a whole day together.)  (And if you're not up to it, I'll understand.)

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Over the last few days I have had a creeping BFO*: I need to pay more attention the weaknesses of characters I'm going to bring in than to their strengths.  I have to figure out just how to work with this.

*Blinding Flash of the Obvious

Tazar speaking moreut  around Airen?  I was wondering about that.

http://www.girlgeniusonline.com/comic.php?date=20111019

And, just for the punchline, http://www.girlgeniusonline.com/comic.php?date=20111024

Gee, Janet, I hope your dad does okay.  That's a real rough spot.

"It was the best of times, it was the worst of times."

And the comma joins independent clauses, too!

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Oh ... and I went down t NC for my sister-in-law's father's 90th birthday.  I stood on line for 25 minutes to get a card ... with just four people in front of me--including the one at the register.  Did my back no end of ill, then two days later I drove home and less than 24 hours later spent several hours leaning far forward in a chair with one hand stretched out on a shoulder-high powerr supply knob and the other poking controls on my scope.  The next morning my back told me plain what it thought of all that, and it's not right yet.  I'm getting around with naproxin and a cane.

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Sounds like your vacation paid you for the time and effort, if not for the lucre.

I've been chasing some distractions, and learning more about how electronic components behave at low current levels.  And under other interesting circumstances.  I spent four days trying to figure out WHAT was happening and HOW it could be happening ... and then remembered that MOSFETs have a Miller capacitance too ... and learned that it's a sneaky son of a so-and-so that gets LARGER as the device turns on and SMALLER as it turns off ... with interesting consequences.  (Look up Miller Effect.)
I've also been wrangling some network problems, soon to be fixed, I hope.

On my problems with Pausonallie: She's changed since I invented her.  I just had the idea of her being the True Heir of G-Aunt Maugram, just now coming into her own.  Have to think.

Have (metric) tonnes of reviews to catch up on.

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Been away on Family.  My sister-in-law's father is celebrating his 90th birthday, so I was down in NC to celebrate.  Sister-in-law choked up when she thanked the NY contingent for coming down.  Brother got his birthday present a week early.

Errands tomorrow, suit to cleaners.  Back to breadboard ... and modding my kit pwer supply.

Sleep now.

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Where is NJC t?  What is he about?  Whither dost he wander?

Side projects are popping up more side alleys than any sorcerer's nightmare.  I need, eventually, to get to project A.  But it will help to do project B first, both because having B will help with A and because if I don't get B outt of the way, it will be in my way while I work on A.  And then ...

In thinking about how to test B under severe-but-realistic load, I've been thinking about project C.  Which started small, but quickly became interesting.  I spent most of yesterday filling pages with algebra to understand the non-linearities of parallel-series combinations of fixed and variable resistors (both as potentiometers and as rheostats).  My bladder woke me overnight and as I took care of business it occurred to me that I could (probably) finesse the problem with current sources.  Looks workable, but will be ten hours or more of lab work.  LATER.  I just now thought of a useful mod for project B.  I'll try to do it.  And project C has a detail to be worked out using an RC network to drive a MOSFET to provide a brief, fast reset current to the timing circuit on each side of an astable multivibrator.  (The MOSFET's gate may be approximated as a capacitance that depends on the voltage on its drain terminal.)

I've got a circuit layout for project B to breadboard and test.  I need to do a clean drawing of the layout, and I need to test it in parts: Current source, three-way current mirror, and voltage source.  The voltage source first with only the voiltage output, on the circuit board, and then with the power block (not complete yet) including both the voltage output and the current bootstrap transistors.

And then I need to test it.  Unfortunately, I passed up the chance to stock up on 5- and 10-ohm 10-watt sand-cased power resistors.

And, oh, yes, The Rockpile.

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"I shall turn his balls to gunstones."  Find the mocking scene and mock away.

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You  -have- heard of the Darwin Awards?

Any good advice and practice in English composition will help the writer.  There are some differences between essay and narrative, but they are small compared to topic order, divisions, and the use of grammar (as a tool, not merely a study).

If the story is good enough, the 'bad' style might be accepted as good, at least long enough to garner a slew of imitators.

Depends what you need to improve.

But I'd put Matt Bird's =The Secrets of Story= near the top of the list.

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Post in a group with points and reciprocate when you get reviews.  Look for one of the fantasy related groups to call home and start a forum thread.

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What, alligators Get No Love?

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And you have to make the reader fall for it

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Trying to work on The Rockpile.  Of course, now is when plot notions for the next two books come into my head.

At one point, Kirsey should have occasion to say "When an adventuring sorcerer gets into trouble and tries to get out of it, it's like falling out of a tree onto a rotten roof, which breaks, dropping you onto the rotten floor of the attic, which drops you down into the second floor.  But that's rotten, too, so you fall through into the first floor.

Which is when you fall into the kitchen where the lunatic cook is sharpening her knives.

That's when her pet alligator gets you."

I also am imagining a chase scene out of =A Funny Thing Happened On The Way To The Forum=.

Sigh.  I've got a couple of chapters to finish, if I can.  Why do the ideas come now?

I'm starting on Suin's [Surviving Fifteen.  Reviewed Ch's 1 (re-revised version) and 2.

Chesterton to Shaw: To look at you, anyone would think there was a famine in England.

Shaw to Chesterton: And to look at you, anyone would think that you caused it.

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A few edits to the scene in The Rockpile.  I hope to get a couple of earlier scenes into it in the next day or so.

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It's sbout 4 years old.  I don't think it's backlit; it looks like an LED screen.  Or OLED?

The megavolcano is the most likely scenario.  If you want MASSIVE irony, let it be triggered by an attempt to bleed off the heat (hope to delay the eruption by 10,000s of years) and use it for carbon-free geothermal.

https://wattsupwiththat.com/2017/10/30/ … edictions/
https://wattsupwiththat.com/2017/10/29/ … ntarctica/
https://wattsupwiththat.com/2017/10/27/ … old-kills/
http://notrickszone.com/2017/10/23/400- … 9jAb3.dpbs

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One (1 !) scene up in The Rockpile.  It's 1357 words, and that's about 600 too many ... though I'd settle for 1200.  But let's see what you have to say.