Read =Albion's Seed= by, I think, David Hackett. Before the 19th century in the Appalachians there were places with names like Tickle C*** Branch.
2,926 2015-07-17 20:53:06
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
2,927 2015-07-17 19:41:15
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
More likely Big Sky and Bitterwater. Though someone might name pocket worlds after his daughters. (Or after his hounds.)
2,928 2015-07-17 18:41:04
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Yes. I actually explain this in the story. It was people of one world who first discovered how to move across the sundered worlds, and they gave most of the world names in the style of their own place-names. I chose Slavic, and in particular Russian, as my prototype.
But there should be a few worlds that are exceptions.
2,929 2015-07-15 23:22:59
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Once again I have received emails about new writing posted (by Rebecca Vaughn, 3 instances) before the postings are visible on my home page.
2,930 2015-07-15 23:20:08
Re: Eye trouble (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Now if you were a flying pig, that experience would be soooo much more satisfying!
2,931 2015-07-15 17:00:22
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks for letting me know.
2,932 2015-07-15 16:57:51
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Get it down on paper#######in ISO-646, fer heaven's sake! Don't risk losing it.
2,933 2015-07-14 02:50:02
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
amy s wrote:OK. Keeping the fight with Griffon. Yessir!
I haven't read it (soon), but so far I have to agree with this - keep the fight (I could be bias wanting more Alda air time). I understand where K is coming from, but I don't think there is anything wrong with some of the threat already being eliminated - the threat of the Horror's creator is in my opinion the biggy, so if I've read about that "in a book", I'd say it's taking the easy way out.
(I could also misunderstand this whole thread ... it's never beneath me to be totally confused and clueless)
The fight is with a training master to see whether Alda has the fighting skills to accompany Jaylene on the next stage of her mission.
2,934 2015-07-14 02:48:30
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
njc wrote:I got home from picking a few things (well, a few boxes of things) from my mother's effects at 04:10 and found a message on my answering machine. My apartment nightmare has just reawoken. I had a re-inspection by the landlord today, and I left word about arriving late. It's been moved to tomorrow.
I may be toast, and I need to get more sleep now.
What do you mean ... toast. It doesn't sound good at all njc. Is this because you have extra boxes around from your mother? Speaking of your mum, I can't type my exact thoughts regarding the timing of this re-inspection ... honestly, consideration and understanding are really scarce these days. Will a month or so really make such a massive difference? Your idiot landlord is on my list of people I don't like a lot as in don't like AT ALL.
No, it's not good. I lost four or five days with my mother in HER last days over this. The LL will say I should keep things neater and throw more out, but the part with the State of NJ was a snipe hunt.
Still working. I'll get no sleep, get reamed out and need to call a lawyer, and have to drive into the city as well.
2,935 2015-07-13 14:47:16
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I got home from picking a few things (well, a few boxes of things) from my mother's effects at 04:10 and found a message on my answering machine. My apartment nightmare has just reawoken. I had a re-inspection by the landlord today, and I left word about arriving late. It's been moved to tomorrow.
I may be toast, and I need to get more sleep now.
2,936 2015-07-13 09:01:11
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Skylight.
Behira and Alda.
Alda's fighting technique.
Alda's dislike of serious fighting, and the fury that will follow when she is forced into it.
That's for starters.
2,937 2015-07-13 08:49:05
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Don't even think of removing Alda's qualifying fight with Griffon. You've already set up the skylight bit in it. Use it for other set-ups, and to reveal info (like Tazar and the catacombs).
The only reason to consider removing it is if it actually contradicts something.
Anyway, would Jaylene have let Alda wear Airen's robe down into the tunnels?
2,938 2015-07-13 07:51:35
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Credit Rex Stout. But your ordinary mooks still say 'phooey'. It's only Kha or Geron who 'pfui', and never on cue. Or ... maybe Airen or one of Saundon's retinue?
I like the bedbug idea, though. I may use it sometime.
And, as The Great Schnozz would remind us, co-inky-dinks do happen! (Evverrybody's got ta get inta de act!)
2,939 2015-07-13 05:07:53
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
KHippolite wrote:Hah, well surely you see why I wasn't running parallel to charactrer logic.
I picture myself getting off the bus with a date... a couple pssts at me from an alley. "Hey guys, wanna swap clothes?" "Why?" "We commited a minor felony in ours and the cops might be looking for us"
...
Here's my thought process before turning to my date and saying "hell yes!"
1) This is pretty shady to start with.
2) I don't even know these people. What if they have bedbugs riding them.
3) Do I want attention from the cops?
4) If they're willing to deceive the cops, they must also be willing to deceive me as to the nature of the crimeIf the answer to all these questions is "don't care" then I will probably agree. If they fail any single one of these, I turn tail and run.
That anyone else might think differently would fascinate me
Agree wholeheartedly. Except:
5) Same clothes, different faces and other physical attributes (that should count for something?) "Surely mr. Policeman, it wasn't me, it's just a coincidinc (sic) that we are wearing the same clothes. We were waayyyy over there minding our own business when this hideous crime you are referring to happened."
6) We prefer some minor attention from the cops rather than the attention we're getting now ...Then again, in fiction, it doesn't have to be possible beyond doubt, just possible even if very unlikely ... To me, it was just waayyy too easy to bump into two people who wanted to change clothes, but I can let it go on the basis it's very unlikely, but possible.
Just my 2 cents.
In that neighborhood, there might be a dozen couples looking to swap! But these two either never went to bed or woke early from fear. Don't assume a 20th-century law enforcement model, either. Or even a 19th century model.
Merran and Jamen aren't on a date. They are on a journey, and they are improvising###########making it up as they go along. Sometimes they'll take risks.
Anyhow, Merran and Jamen are making themselves scarce. Shank's mare is a Standardbred in this case.
Still about 3 hrs from home. I'm 3 hrs late because of construction and drivers who don't understand, or don't care, or don't care to understand, how their actions affect thouands of other drivers.
To quote Nero Wolfe, 'Pfui!'
2,940 2015-07-12 18:41:39
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Sol, ths one's for you and the team. Amy, don't change this until Sol's seen it!
Go to Amy_s`s new Chapter 17, Dictates of Faith. Start an inline review. As the FIRST comment, go to the second paragraph, first two sentences beginning with 'this', the second one italicized. Try to capture the first sentence and the first word of the second sentence for the comment. You will find that the machinery captures the whole of both sentences. Cancel the comment and try again. You will find that you cannot start a new comment until you reload the page.
I suspect that there are at least two bugs at work here, both probably design errors. My distant guess is that there's an XHTML or HTML representation and something is jumping over a -span-. If that's not it, it doesn't matter; it is a bug, and might reveal a lot about the other glitchen people are hitting when selecting text.
The second one, I am guessing, has to do either with cleaning up on the cancel or with something that confuses an empty set (however represented) with no set. Again, distant guess.
Please have a look at this frustrating mmisbehavior. Thanks ....
2,941 2015-07-12 18:25:54
Re: Wishlist Cont. (212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
When you list recent inline reviews on the home page, with their authors, please consider listing the reviewer as well. When I have a review from someone new, it can help me to read another review or two by that same reviewer to learn what the reviewer looks for and what special betes noir haunt that reviewer.
2,942 2015-07-12 16:20:35
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Merran can deal with bedbugs. She's a sorcerer.
She and Jamen can't deal with notoriety, although they'll get some as they go along.
She and Jamen are skipping town anyway, fast. Nor do they look like the pair in question. And the little bit of story checks out, sort of.
What Merran cannot do, unlike Amy_s's Katerin, is reweave her clothing with the wave of a wand.
2,943 2015-07-12 04:06:20
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
You declare your sturdiness, but you haven't responded to my last couple of reviews. Am I pounding you too hard?
2,944 2015-07-08 04:40:55
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
You've got at least one place with both olde and nuiw text, a big section.
2,945 2015-07-08 04:07:07
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
WordPerfect here. Characters come out fine but paragraph breaks come out as question marks. I guess the ASCII gods had to taketh from somewhere
Not ASCII. Word processors use extended character sets which should fit somewhere under, I think it is, ISO 646.
2,946 2015-07-08 01:26:03
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
It may be a character missing from the local copy of the character set. It might be an ambiguous coding, which is supposed to be illegal and should be removed to prevent security holes.
Also, MicroSlough uses some characters illegally, including 'smart quotes'. (They also violate the rules for HTML in their HTML encodings.)
2,947 2015-07-07 22:30:24
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Each gets its subset, except in the case of Unified Han. Chase the WikiP links.
2,948 2015-07-07 19:50:52
Re: Site Bugs 2 (342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Word processors and such work from a standard palette of symbols. There are three basic levels: the 7/8 bit set, the 16 bit set and the 32-bit set. The difference between the 16-bit set and the 32-bit set as that in the smaller set (Unicode/'Basic Multilingual Plane') a number of languages have to share characters in a pool with the Chinese languages ('Unified Han'). There are also ways of coding the longer sets in varying numbers of bytes.
Just about any modern word-processing system should support all the Roman-derived characters as well as Arabic and several other writing systems. (Also Greek symbols.)
I don't recall all the names offhand. Look up Unicode on WikiP and chase links. This is big-time International Standards stuff.
2,949 2015-07-07 02:50:54
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Well, start with the 'Fishing in the Catacombs' chapter. After you read that, even with the review, you'll owe the author!
2,950 2015-07-07 00:42:17
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
How do I get you to review 14 chapters? Holy moly! I'll buy you some American wine:-)
Get them hooked with a few of your best chapters, like Fishing and the chapters around Alina's duel and Katerin's promotion..