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I however, am not. Time to write and read Norm's progress.

Unless we bomb the thread. Poor Norm. Every now and then he's like, "can we get back to my book PLEEZZ!"

Feeling good and going to Chicago this weekend.Hey NJC, guess what? I got a visual and I'm going to write you the ending. Flames! Big magic'n

What chapter did you put up a few days ago?

wakey wakey!

E Free, I'm getting to ya, but my energy today is gone gone. Will try to get to a story about DRAGONS AND MORE DRAGONS tomorrow

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They are better, at least for today. Thanks for asking and your good thoughts. I think they help tip my "C" in the right direction so that I can spend more time on this book.

OK, I revised chapter 16's ending. There is a LOT more investigation of the crime scene and observations rather than passive observances. Lewellyn asks a key question. Alda dreams of peeling potatoes. Tazar proves his worth.

All reviews thus far are integrated into the master copy.

If any have time, I would appreciate short reviews of the ending. Owe you guys. (Hey Norm, I'm writing!)

aye aye

I will try to get to it by Thursday. Haven't forgotten about you folks. Been missing the website and fighting with you big lugs.

Talk soon.

Get it in print and learn from the reviews. Writing action is different from the dialogue and description you've been doing so far. Stay in the moment. Don't let the action get bogged down with detail or past actions. K, can you put up the mental K W a N scene where she is in two other heads at the same time during a stressful moment?

Credit where it is due. K does really good action. He kills off way too many characters for no reason, but that is a topic for another day.

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Day 6&7 of chemo is rough. I'll spare the details but there is a lot of nausea. New Jersey put a bow on his head and drove himself out to visit which was a marvelous distraction. (Happy bday to me) In the midst of me saying, "I gotta go lay down," there was a lot of conversation about books and freeway interchanges:-)

So we played it by ear. Today is a much better day. Helps that I slept 18 hours. This kind of fatigue is a new kind of torture. You wake up tired no matter what you do.

Good news is that I'm tolerating the chemo so will get round 5&6 and then a CT scan. If scan shows decreased tumor(which I believe to be the case) then I get referred to a surgeon again-good news if it happens.