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(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Hey there, stranger! Missed you!

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OK, I just put together the magic and can see the end battle for Dictates. Took long enough, didn't it?  That's what I get for writing without a template. However, the magic is AWESOME.  Can't wait to put down those words. Then I only have to figure out how to get the characters to a HFN point in the story. (I may end it with Lewellen and Petra getting together...we'll see)

I also took Acts (first half that ends at the duel with Alina) to my camping vacation and dared to leave it on a table...quite nerve wracking, I have to admit. Feedback was good. Of the readers who took the time, there were some interesting suggestions. I left the book with a beta reader who will mark it up with red ink. I'm still awaiting her opinion.

I queried a publisher about the autism stories. I'm still waiting to hear back. He is one of my first choices for a dream publisher, because he does High Fantasy as well as Blog-to-Book.  I don't expect much, but it is nice to hope and I'll hold out until my (first!) rejection notice comes in. Then I'll tape it to a bulletin board and throw darts at it every couple days. (maybe I'll make it into a drinking game and get a beer if I hit the publisher's name) Hmmm. 

Still doing twitter. Still doing Facebook. Still overworked at work. It is still summer and I'm surrounded by injuries that follow weird patterns. Today's Soup Du Jour is eye injuries. A globe rupture and a different patient with facial fractures.

Later.

A

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I have a mission...

Lets see what I can carve out of my evening at work tonight...

A

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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I finally had time to read that bit about your charger project. Yes, I did read to the end :-). 

OK, exertion triggers a fever? I think you likely mean sweats and chills, rather than a measured temperature? Am I right?  Or is this a fever from the muscle weakness you described to me earlier? I'm not entirely clear.

Antibiotics with a steroid are a potent combination. Be careful. The steroids can mask an infection by muting your immune response (just as they decrease inflammation so that your sinuses can drain.) Double edged sword. Amox/Clav is usually a twice daily med (pretty sure on this) and great for skin flora (which are usually in the sinuses) but resistant bugs can develop since you've been taking antibiotics like some people take tylenol.  (I think of this as the problem rather than the half-life of the amox/clav.)  If you see the doc, consider asking if they can make a referral to ENT or if they think a culture would be beneficial. This keeps coming back and it isn't getting better. Another question is when a CT scan of your sinuses would be indicated. I don't do sinuses usually, so your PMD is going to have a much better idea of what the next step would be.

In other words, the antibiotic option is failing you. What is the next step in dealing with this issue?

Hope this helped.  I'm back to work for now.

A

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

K.

Impressed by char(cough)...acter development.

From the man who wrote an entire book so he could get a character pregnant and bring the child into his plot-line. As said by a man who defines all humanity in terms of D&D character alignment.

Norm, take the compliment and run. Make sure to get a screen shot the next time K forgets and picks on you for LACK of character development. He's rather fickle, our K.

I agree. I'm going to tweet it because I said something wise that would look great on a Tshirt.

Royalties?  Doubt it. Chops for being truthful?  Absolutely.

Sorry for the silence, folks. Nothing puts a damper on creative thought more than an asthma flare up and fighting Human Resources to straighten out a health spending account.

Too much reality. I gotta write more.

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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I've been swamped at work. That is my only excuse. I can't wait until winter. Or for help to arrive. Or for one of my old compatriots to come back into the fold...

534

(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Three, I bekieve

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

My head hurts. How do you remember all of this? All I can say is that you are smarter than me.

Elishiva,

I am proud:-) One more way to better understand your peeps.

Ernie, I can't take you anywhere without a well-meaning pun!

I'm the one who owes you a review. And it's the summer, so work isn't helpful. But it never hurts to try…we'll see what tonight brings…

A

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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I recently tweeted about being locked in bed as if I was outlined by crime scene tape.

I understand. Nothing replaces sleep. Nothing.

I have today off. Just one day. Time to make it count. I've got a knife to Petra's throat and I left her there to taunt the character. Time to stop being mean to characters. Time to break a Horror.

This is always the hardest part. I can think of a dozen different threads that could splinter off and extend this puppy into the next century. Come on, Amy. You can do it. End the damned book.

NJC,

Tazar was a street kid, which is one of many reasons he never learned to read. He pays his winnings to Fadie and she helps the woman who got Tazar off the street. No one knows who the benefactor is. Tazar doesn't want the credit.

Sil would eat food off the ground
Kha would drink too much
Airen would wind surf
Alda would trip
Anver would disassemble something magical or mechanical
Buy a house? Tazar. He supports a home for orphans in the city.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Just keep writing, writing, writing. (In Dory's voice)

Big clarifier...is the environment pressurized? Running out of air can mean out of oxygen. Then NJC is right, the heart will stop in about five to ten minutes and fibrillate (twitch without effective beats). A heart can be revived after this if it gets oxygen.

The bad thing isn't the heart. It is the brain. Brain tissue can't sustain life for more than 5 to maybe 8 minutes of anoxia. Then there is permeate brain damage. (Think of drownings or strangulation/sleeper holds).

In a depressurization scenario. The material I read implies that the body becomes anoxic quicker because the blood barriers transfer O2 out instead of in.
No one can hold their breath in low pressure because it would rupture the alveoli.

What I would do? Suggest a red shirt sacrifices themself and plugs the hole. Then the body drifts away when the pressure equalizes. That way, the last vent of pressure exits as the rescuers enter. They slap the kids into big baggies and repressurize the cocoon with air. This way, the kids were only completely anoxic for a few seconds.

Make sure the kids have the physical signs of decompression. Ruptured blood vessels, etc.

543

(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Months, K.  Months :-)

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

You need to read this article. It will be helpful in making your decisions. http://sitn.hms.harvard.edu/flash/2013/ … uman-body/

Also look up info on decompression sickness. It normally happens to divers, but the loss of pressure in the cabin would make the kids susceptible to this as well.

I'll give you a quickie course on reviving someone from near-death, but I don't have the time at work right now. Give me a day or so and I'll be glad to oblige.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Kdot wrote:

I don't have an equation and Amy's right... a small planet cannot sustain planetary rings however there's no reason some moon didn't have a collision and get powderized, forming rings that only last 2-3000 years


Okey Dokey. I got a screen shot of K saying I'm right. He can't delete this, either. Life is good.

546

(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

You guys got big brains and that is kool. 

K said I was right. I got it in print. AGAIN.

547

(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Yeah, I saw that episode of Aliens Resurrection.

Thanks for the help, NJC. Norm's review is in the pipe, 5x5.

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OK, help here?

I worked for an hour on Norm's chapter, "Caligula'. I saved a draft of the work because my pager went off. I'm trying to continue where I left off, but I can't hit the 'draft' icon and see my comments. I did this before to check and see if the work had saved, but this time the material isn't there.

Ideas? I went to the site instructions and there isn't a place (that I can see) that explains the ins and outs of using the drafting tool. I really don't want to have to repeat the work.

Anybody got the answer?

A

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

six minutes before pass-out should permit the ship inhabitants to reach some sort of air solution. Unless they are in such high G's that they can't move. Haven't read that part yet. I'm getting there. I promise.