Norm d'Plume wrote:

The character, Apollo, experiences tremors in his left hand and forearm, especially when he is under stress. Tentatively, it's called Trembler's disease. There's no known cure and the only way to control it is with narcotics. By the time the story gets rolling, Apollo is already an addict.

The mental disease plays into a larger theme in the story about Apollo and his cousin, Joseph, both secretly hearing the voice of God, their reactions to him, and the consequences for the galaxy.


RE: experiences tremors in his left hand and forearm, especially when he is under stress. GEEZ... I have this disease, it's called CIDP. There is no known permanent cure, however there are treatments. I received a REPORT TO MEMBER (Blue Shield) recently, concerning the treatment, the cost for one month: $42,970. I've had 25 months of treatments, and need these treatments for the rest of my life.
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I can't stop the treatment (IvIgG) or I revert back to a whining garden slug who can't take a breath or shit or escape the pain. The tremors are called fasciculations and they look like snakes continuously crawling under the skin (24/7/365), or sometimes a single snaking twitch that travels all the way up and down a muscle system for days on end. ALS has the same fasciculations, but these can't be stopped or cured. With treatment my fasciculations calm down to become tiny little earth worms crawling under my skin with no permanent damage, again 24/7/365. Still, I look like a freak with my shirt off as I have fasciculation in symmetrical configurations (from hell!) mainly in my deltoids and trapezoids and lesser ones elsewhere.

There is a rare mental component to CIDP, and I know exactly what it is and how it happens. In ALS there is definitely a mental component of the disease. Horrible beyond belief I think... BTW- I was diagnosed with ALS, but revised to CIDP.

When I relapse (about 8 days each month) I hear the voice of God telling me to grin and bear it... but I usually can't!  I take massive amount of pain killers, but the pain for those 8 days is beyond anything that you can image PAIN is or could be.

Gee, I really went off on a tirade here... guess I needed to.

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Take care of mom... Geez, I lost a close sibling recently and it hurts! Caretaking takes creative energy and patience, which you have an ample amount of. Best to you... max

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I'm reading the collected stories of Patricia Highsmith. She writes direct to the murder, no fooling around.  Her stories are about the failure of relationships on many levels. The spy or the Niccolò Machiavelli type, who, in my opinion is a failure at heart, a snoop or duper, wanting recognition or fame or money, but also wanting to escape some fault of the past or a fear of a future scenario that they instigated.

Highsmith's characters are the stuff that cynical and disaffected people are made of. Her characters are high-functioning, and this their problem. Many of them get caught up in their own machinations and regret their actions, the reactions and then regret the regrets. Her character are consumed in the vicious circles of self-destruction as they plan and execute others destruction, either in the social or the physical realm.

And many of the stories are set in Switzerland, the place of high functioning individuals, secret bank accounts and a facade of neutrality.

A big car carrying 3 passengers, wearing seatbelts of course, slams into a big oak tree at 40 miles an hour, the bumper, hood crumple, push engine into passengers ... but will the car bounce back any distance from the tree? Or will the car remain smirched up against the tree?

I'm thinking Newton's 3rd law of montion.

I need the car to bounce off the tree, but still crush and trap the passengers in the front seats.

Any suggestions?

I'm off to view crash test dummies at YouTobe

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All the newly published works in my Google mail have this header.

http://io9.com/5604801/how-to-be-a-very … asy-writer

My WIP, Aphrodite's Rainbow, is a silly science fiction based on Cinderella. I take liberties, literary licence and just write some nutty stuff, but I think it is working. I'm trying to appeal to the folks who spend long days and nights in front of a computer or inside a computer fixing, coding or hacking them.

Silly science fiction, I love that genre.

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TirzahLaughs wrote:

Nope the worst one was the one I had to make for a person who will remain un-named that involved a male appendage, a smiley face sticker and a piece of bologna wearing a blonde wig.

Did you build this from the double hernia scars picture I posted three years ago? You known, the one with the bunny.

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Tom Oldman wrote:
Gods Ghost wrote:

I liked Mars Attacks :-/ lolol

Country music saves the Earth by blowing the Martians minds? Egad! Gene Autry is spinning in his grave. lol

~Tom

I also liked "Mars Attacks", well, specifically the martians voices. Who was their dialog coach?
But you're right, my book cover does look like those martians, lol.

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Tom Oldman wrote:

I just gave editminion.com a try. I love it! It is purely non-judgmental and flags everything I though it should have. I haven't given it a really good test text, so as soon as I can devise a few paragraphs to hit it with, I'll report back on how well it did.

~Tom


editminion... fast, simple, strunky and that tribute to Ambrose Brice is pretty cool

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Mike Roberson wrote:

If I had a nickel for every comma mistake it catches, I could pay for the darn things.  Just sayin.  I did look at a review site for grammar programs and there is one which is touted to be better with a lower price.  Can't remember the name but I will fine it.  Mike

Thanks. I'm interested.

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Is this the worst book cover you've ever seen?

http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/content … /version/0

I could't stop laughing after I inserted the eyeballs!

Have not tried it yet, but I will. If it works it will be a useful tool. Thanks

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I need all the help I can get, human or virtual, so this I will use and AutoCrit. AutoCrit gives me a heads-up when reviewing, but I 've learned not to depend on it either. These applications for writing need to be taken with a gain of salt, or two aspirin when they start driving you crazy.

I also use ediminion.com. It's fast and tells me details, such as, which words Ambrose Brice focused on, lol.

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Grammarly... holy crap! This is not only a great spell checker but it pays my bills, does my taxes and writes my probation office kind letters about me monthly (kidding). I am a notoriously bad speller and I was arrested for bad grammar last year.

Anyway, Grammarly appears to come FREE as an add-on to the Safari browser. I'm waiting for the ax to fall: max keanu, you have used Grammaerly for your trial period of XX days and now you must pay big bucks for it.

What gives? U use it? Will the ax fall?

Tanks,måx

Later, I read this:
http://grammarist.com/articles/grammarly-review/

I guess it is not as holy crappy as I thought it was. But still, I'm severly lacking in grmmatical skills. After reading this, do you think you might be also?

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j p lundstrom wrote:

Okay, I'll do it. But you owe me.

I'll worship the feet you walk on...er, or is it the ground you walk on? Okay then, I'll worship both!  And, both of your novels are terrifico!

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I'm rolling towards the end of Aphrodite's Rainbow. I need reviews of the grammar and spellng and the 'you've screwed up, max' type. Most chapters are under 1000 words, many shorter. Probably will be 30-35 chapters all toll.

http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … nbow-20949

After this novel comes THE THATCHER HEAD rewrite... what a mess that buggar is, was, might still be, lol.

Thanks, thanks and thanks!

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I wrote a complete in-line review, then hit 'save as draft' by mistake.  I could not find the 'draft'? Where might I find this?  Or, is has it been sent off to virtural no wheres? It does say 'draft' in white font with maroon backgound on the work I reviewed.

Thanks,max

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Get well Tom! Relax, renew, refresh the body, soul and mind. Meditation is the very thing for this!

I always dig down to understand, to learn the cascades of body functions.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Renin–angiotensin_system

aloha skip,

the next big writer community is always here to back you up when you need it most. welcome, good luck, keep writing and posting and enjoy.

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Congratulations!


http://solsticepublishing.com/the-since … -flattery/

eBook or hardback, I'll ask my wife to place a copy in the UH Maui library. Now that I've had double cataract surgery I'm looking forward to reading your next book.

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Aplology accepted! Get back to work!
You might try FOCUSfactor- Nutrition for the Brain

I always thought supplements were hu-hu, but this one works for me. I take six tablets each day, sometimes more. THey are available from Amazon.

Or playing the bongo may help, actually, bongo playing might help as might stopping your writing at intervals to play the piano or guitar or to take a brisk walk.

Seeing your intelligence in action I can't see why you can't divide your projects up and allocate sufficant metal engery to them. Taking a break every hour, for fifteen minutes of movement will keep you sharpe all day or night.

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http://mashable.com/2015/05/09/raspberry-pi-2-review/

Check out the R2D2 robot video, scroll down,

I use the Arduino UNO and I have access to a 3-D printer (incredible what can be done with these printers!)

THe mashable example is silly, but this technology is going to break out all over the tech-savvy world.

I implanted a camera, small arduino computer, sound receiver  in a La-La-Loospsie head... senors connect to my lap-top.

This is SPY stuff to the max!

-måx

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Film noir (/fɪlm nwɑr/; French pronunciation: [film nwaʁ]) is a cinematic term used primarily to describe stylish Hollywood crime dramas, particularly those that emphasize cynical attitudes and sexual motivations.

 duo_noir

THe noir genre extends to SPY fiction. I'm thinking of the cells of evil foreign governments, of dark forces inmplanted in your neighborhood or mine; their kids going to the local schools; a man or woman who is your dentist, your account, your chauffeur even, who suddenly one day is activated to muder and mayhem.

Anyone know of examples of these, 'cells' or similar units, in novel fiction or film?  If you are an actual 'cell' person, do not respond.

HOMELAND on Fox, is close, but I'm wondering about other examples of small city cells, primarly of  white upper-class traitors with corporate spying agendas and descrution motives. Send me their names or email address.

... cynical attitudes and sexual motivations. WOW! THis describes me when I was a young man to a T.

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Excellent! Now my paper airplanes will have much more meaning.  Thanks.

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Hey! Your entry was GREAT! CONGRATS! HUGS! KISSES! FEELIES!

-max