Topic: Aphrodite's Rainbow

I'm rolling towards the end of Aphrodite's Rainbow. I need reviews of the grammar and spellng and the 'you've screwed up, max' type. Most chapters are under 1000 words, many shorter. Probably will be 30-35 chapters all toll.

http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … nbow-20949

After this novel comes THE THATCHER HEAD rewrite... what a mess that buggar is, was, might still be, lol.

Thanks, thanks and thanks!

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Re: Aphrodite's Rainbow

I await the final chapters, Max, with baited (sic) breath. This is one crazy, acid-trip story and I love it.

~Tom

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Re: Aphrodite's Rainbow

Okay, I'll do it. But you owe me.

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4 Reply by max keanu (edited by max keanu 2015-05-21 15:58:59)

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j p lundstrom wrote:

Okay, I'll do it. But you owe me.

I'll worship the feet you walk on...er, or is it the ground you walk on? Okay then, I'll worship both!  And, both of your novels are terrifico!

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