yes, neflix. and, a second season may be coming.
276 2015-06-18 03:54:31
Re: best police drama... I ever seen (4 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)
277 2015-06-16 14:04:11
Re: Critique groups (10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Cool, John! Good advice, good article, good blog. Go, go, go!
Now, with $42K of IgG each month (240 grams !), and constant swimming, I've stabilize my CIDP (somewhat) and with luck I can concentrate on writing again. Three years of deterioration of mind and body; now I fight hard to climb back to the place I left off.
You're an inspiration to us all here. And, soon, I expect to see a movie deal coming your way.
Speaking of media, HAPPY VALLY, a Netflix production, is a work that I recommend highly in the M&C genre.
~max
278 2015-06-15 06:06:15
Topic: best police drama... I ever seen (4 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Happy_Valley_(TV_series)
Happy Valley.
This crime writer knew HER Shakespeare. Hands down, this is the best plotting I've ever watched in an episodic TV series. Tight, tight, tight and the bad guy is a Robert Redford type in looks, but an animal by nature.
The British do it again!
279 2015-06-14 18:44:48
Re: The task for a literary-fiction author. (6 replies, posted in Literary Fiction)
Thank you Charles, you've enlightened me and I've enjoyed reading your definitions of LF. Yes, the written excellence and acceptance of ideas of a generation can be the measure of good LF. However, that they are passed on, generation after generation, gives these ideas profound, sometimes lasting and perhaps international repute and reverence. However, I do have very conflicting thoughts about Ayn Rand as a meaningful author. I think of her as Bill O'Reilly in drag. And, towards end of her life, she lived on Social Security provided by the government, the government that she thought was the shark character in the movie JAWS.
I would support the idea that Steinbeck (The Grapes of Wrath, etc.) will always be held up as an example of LF for passaging generations, because, he drilled-down to the root of human suffering and the human condition. The world is every man's oyster and Steinbeck opened up the oyster for the struggling to see no pearls exist for every man and the everyman. He was a marine biologist and oysters were his reality, his truth. And, I believe this particular book was greeted as a LF of merit and awarded, by those knowledgeable of such things, with a Nobel Prize. However, they did award Obama that prize somewhat prematurely with the hope that he would eventually equal the status awarded to long-lasting LF, etc. Even matured bodies of humans make mistakes, but we shall see if his legacy holds up after Hilleary is elected.
One year I did nothing but ride my Harley-Davidson motorcycle, work in a convenience store in a turbulent Negro neighborhood and read the classics. Not the classics of antiquity, but the Nobel Prize winners that I could fathom, get caught me up in their prose/beauty and that appealed to me. Alas, it was not an organized dive in to the humanities that LF often personifies.
Again, my favorite was a short volume of profound simplicity called HUNGER by Knut Hamsun. That a character who wanted to write down every thing about the world, to capture his reality of a small town's myopic generation; and yet in his utter poverty ate his pencils and notes out of gnawing hunger (consuming the tools of his self-imposed and somewhat mystical worldview), always struck me as the metaphor for the depths that a LASTING literary fiction could and should impart on a reader.
Simple and of a generation, and yet for all generations is the book every schooled person is required to read (and many say "YUCK" to it), and that is, THE HEART of DARKNESS. Luckily, I was allowed into a master's level class at UofH taught by a Scottish professor on holiday here in Maui to dig into this book (and many other classics). Of course, it is the classic example of the generational; of the whitish man's inhumanity to every color of man, and yet Conrad himself was caught-up in the shortsighted generational attitudes and convention of the time; so the book is not a crystal-clear distillation of the universal themes of greed and hate and exploitation, etc. However, I was so impressed by the root structural ideas that I spent several months trying to convert the story into a science fiction of the distant future, not too unlike the pseudo-documentary, DISTRICT 9.
So...My concept of the LF novel is the peeling away of a generational onion, of a stratified society’ evils, and sometime its purported best qualities to expose a universal truth. I reckon that human beings everywhere are capable of finite possibilities,understandings and actions, and at the end of the day, and to me, there is a quantifiable essence to humanity that an artist can touch upon once, be burned to the core of their being/thinking by this cosmic touch into the human condition (and beyond), and then, with imagination, inspiration and lots of perspiration, toss an art form out to a gnawing and hungry world who will then say, "Holy Shit, YES! That is what it is all about! This author made everything appear so simple!" It is then branded a generational LF. And yes, your idea of 'generational' has caught my thinking.
I did read bits and pieces of your novel, R&R, found the prose and especially snippets of dialog interesting, and, you'll probably hate this, somewhat like dialog from, THE SUN ALSO RISES, by Ernest. The dialog and exposition that I read was direct, simple, and yet I realized it possessed strong forward thrust of character and purpose.
I am consumed by an illness that limits my mental processes, my time (in many time frames), however your R&R novel intrigues me and if I can I will find the time to dig in.
280 2015-06-14 05:45:33
Re: Networking in the arts (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Well, I just read the article from the link you shares and now my head is spinning. I had no idea there were that many social media sites, although now that I've read it I suppose there are even more. My question is how in the world does one keep up if they have a regular job, or serve as care giver to a needy member of your household, or are engrossed in writing or revising your novel, or ... You get the idea. I rarely log into LinkedIn and have difficulty learning Twitter. I try to post a blog at least once a month, but even when I posted weekly I had few readers and no comments.
Is social media really that essential?
Write On!
MzP
In the past agents were human social media. now that they have been replaced with computer programs, one is either in the virtual world of keywords and buzzwords or one has to pay the remaining agent/agency to do the virtual dirty work for you.
Having something on Amazon, or other virtual/brick market place is the first priority, other social media only advances this. Also knowing/having a specific target to market to helps.
Luckily, I have a degree in computer science, but very rusty in the bits & bites departments after lying low for four years. And, I can only type 15-20 words/minute, but improving, especially when my dander is up.
281 2015-06-14 01:19:19
Topic: Networking in the arts (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Like the people in the famous scene from the Life of Brian, we creative types love to think of ourselves as individuals, but in reality we’re part of a crowd. Or as Mark Earls or Seth Godin would have it, a Herd or a Tribe. Feel free to ignore that fact if you’re happy to starve in a garret, undiscovered by a Philistine world – but if you’re serious about getting your work in front of an audience and reaping the rewards your work deserves, then here’s why networking is essential to your success.
WORDS OF MARK MCGUINNESS
from LATERAL ACTION:
http://lateralaction.com/articles/socia … creatives/
I've been stuck in my garret, a deep hole of illness and pain for two years and networking has been the furthest thing from my mind. With discoveries like this site I hope to cast a bigger net, thereby learning and offering up my writings in a competitive manner by using the advanced tools of the internet.
Although, this page is two years old, it is a start and I'd like some recommendations for other ways to enhance creativity and take part in creative subcultures with other professional wordsmiths.
Thanks - max
282 2015-06-14 01:01:18
Re: Can we improve the list of posted threads on the home page? (36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
There is something similar to what you are all requesting that is already in place. Ex: if I want to see what is new and yet to be viewed on my current group list, I will go to Medieval Magic and Fantasy, and then about five selections pop up to organize the listed posts. If I click 'Forum' then the new posts appear with a dark blue box next to the left of them. Once viewed, the box will disappear, indicating that they have been reviewed by me.
This system isn't perfect. It only keeps track for about 12 to 24 hours. Then I have to go back and scroll through each to see if there is new material. However, since these are organized by the most recent, I can guess which ones are new.
The only thing I would find helpful is to have the most recent commenter listed after each topic. We used to have that on the old site, so it might not be a big deal to change. That way, if it isn't my name, I know to check out the post.
I did investigate this, Amy, and I am very impressed. I started four groups, but only because I felt the site needed them, and I wanted to make some cool graphics. I'd really like to hand off all of them, except HORROR. My illness is unpredictable and usually cuts my time short. I want to develop one active site and I will definitely take cues from your excellent example.
However, a main forum page that is exceptional, and uses the best aspects of WWW2, might put tNBW ahead of all the other writing sites that are the competition, thereby gaining the population of aspiring writers in all genres, not just medieval/fantasy types. The other aspects of this site are real hum-dingers, but without a growing membership that can gather, ruminate and prognosticate in a main forum, about their future best sellers and fabulous wealth, of dreams and glory, well, only an encompassing community forum can foster that.
Seeing your page almost temps me to dig into a medieval plot of murder and hand maidens and mayhem. I am descended from a Viking marauder of a great name and fame and fortune and of course romance.
283 2015-06-14 00:30:01
Re: Can we improve the list of posted threads on the home page? (36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Is the forum all we can talk about as a community? I find it tiring and if so I'm leaving this group. I mean, aren't there a million other things more important? The last four chapters I have posted don't have a single review and all we can talk about is the forums?
Hey cobber. You're a great reviewer, and it would be a shame if you left... but reviews and forums aren't as separate as it might first seem. You see on the original site, the forums were our only way of interacting. Anyone who paid for the old site conditioned ourselves as that being the priary means of discussing writing... therefore it was our primary means of connecting, and therefore building reviewing relationships.
You're an important part of the spectrum. Between you three (incl Flo and Tom Oldman), I see one of your reviews on pretty much any piece of new writing that arrives on this site. However this can be a two-edged sword, because new members are not yet conditioned to the recip system and won't necessarily review more than a few chapters before their membership expires and they vanish into the ether (If they recip at all).
I'm on Sol's back about changes that will encourage new members to build themselves into the economy, but until then, reviewing them is a throw of the dice.
Well put, K. I like what you're saying and I'm in agreement. Main street, like a main forum is where the goods are, the alleyways are for genre shops.... Yes, the economy functions best when an entire community is interacting in a democratic broad scope of ideas and innovation.
284 2015-06-13 23:30:19
Re: Things that's great about the new TNBW (32 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I love the ability to give harsh and perhaps demeaning reviews with the expectation of being blocked so I don't have to be tempted to give more harsh and demeaning reviews to those whom I feel might prosper or need to get a life... kidding.
Also, I love love the SPRY functionality in the main forum that allows multiple subjects to be explored at a glance. And, as I stated in whining verse and posetry in other threads, I love the verisimilitude of the truth or dare avenues to explore in the main forum.
And I love JP.
285 2015-06-13 21:28:08
Re: The task for a literary-fiction author. (6 replies, posted in Literary Fiction)
The skillful author is one who mimicks fiction to present to the intransigent the universe as it is, not how that obstinate ignoramus envisages it to be through his imprecise and distorted perceptions and self-delusions. This author will always fail but will incidentally leave behind a work of art for everyone else to enjoy.
Can you rewrite this so this ignoramus can understand what you are saying?
Keep it simple is my definition of literary fiction that can impart the most knowledge or profundities for the most people, have the most profound effect in the long run and for the most good. Although, even I like a monster of indulgence like, Under the Volcano, 'I, Claudius' or the novels of Robertson Davies.
Simple with a profound message: Of Mice & Men
Simple with a profound political message: Animal Farm
Simple with an edge: Slaughter House Five
Simple with comedy: The Wilt Series by Tom Sharpe ( a writer everyone else seems to enjoy)
Complex, meandering and for an audience dealing in their own specialties of self: Anything by Donald Barth, E.L. Doctorow (The March), Richard Yates, John Updike, Ayn Rand, Henry James, F.S.Fitzgerald, Cormac McCarthy and Jonathan Franzen (all), etc, etc, etc...
Thanks
286 2015-06-13 20:44:41
Topic: A few cartoons... (1 replies, posted in Je Suis CHARLIE)
A few cartoons to keep your writing dander up... As it should be, unless you've laid your pen down thinking that the world is once again that perfect illusion of religious heavens for all living in perfect harmony....
287 2015-06-13 20:13:39
Topic: Spies, gangsters, bad guys... the cream of the crop (0 replies, posted in SPY FICTION)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ADX_Florence
Here are some templates for your novel's characters. And with pictures and profiles.
Harold Nicholson, what a happy looking spy he is!
288 2015-06-13 20:03:30
Re: How much truth do you put into your writing? (12 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)
THE THATCHER HEAD - I have a personality disorder and I put that truth into the MILES TODD/NIGEL DICK character. Although, my true character is more like Roger McCray.
APHRODITE'S RAINBOW - In this novel, I wrote what ever popped into my head at the time I sat down to write. Again though, my personality disorder involving my dual personality problem emerged as CloneDroids.
THE SWIFTNESS OF THE SEA, let me explore my feminine and somewhat perverse side dealing with my disassociation & detachment from the surf&sun&body culture of Hawaii.
BEHIND THE HEDGES, explores my extreme delusional thinking brought on by CIDP, my $42k/mo treatments and severe physical pain.
THE FAMILY SLUGS, explores the realms of truth and lies of an unrequited love.
And, I'm just getting started in this novel game again. Thanks for asking.
289 2015-06-13 19:43:28
Re: Weekend writing prompt (1 replies, posted in HORROR AND THE MACABRE)
All my neighbors are millionaires and they're all creepy in their own ways. I usually base my novels on my neighbors, good or bad.
This fellow lived about 10 mansions away from me, but now lives in a federal prison. Ego as big as a black hole. Still insists he's innocent.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Noshir_Gowadia
But the creepiest neighbor ANYONE could ever have is Fred and Rose West. Luckily, one committed suicide and the other is locked up and will die in an English prison.
Submit this idea to SolN for a contest.
290 2015-06-13 17:53:25
Re: Can we improve the list of posted threads on the home page? (36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
cobber wrote:The problem with this site is the strict overview, the reviewing system (karma ?), member karma allotments, the trolls and the maturity of the members, young & old. Also ,I felt that the monitors and site policy about or concerning religion/politics had a very limited worldview.
So, you want a site forum where you can talk about whatever you want to whomever you want, including incendiary topics like religion and politics. You want the site and its members to have to deal with all of the resulting arguments and conflicts that break out because of this. You hold another site out as an example, say you don't like it, and then say this site should become like it. That doesn't compute.
QThe thread started constructively but has degenerated into the campaign of some to make this into a forum site. Is the forum all we can talk about as a community? I find it tiring and if so I'm leaving this group. I mean, aren't there a million other things more important? The last four chapters I have posted don't have a single review and all we can talk about is the forums?There's a group for that..Fight Club. It's based on freedom of speech. You can post anything you want on any subject you want. You can invite people you have a disagreement with to hash it out there. The main purpose for Fight Club is to keep topics not related to writing out of the main forum while still giving people a place to vent. The only thing I really ask of the members is not to whine to me about posts if they get their feelings hurt.
WHERE IS THE MAIN FORUM?
291 2015-06-13 16:50:47
Re: Can we improve the list of posted threads on the home page? (36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
As to religion & politics in a writing site's forum as header sub topics-
RELIGION EXAMPLE:
Hugh of Saint Victor (c. 1096 – 1141): Influential mystic and philosopher who embraced science as a tool for approaching God. He was master of the monastic school of Saint Victor. His work presents knowledge of reality as redemptive of fallen man; and technology as source of physical relief and able to help reunite man with divine wisdom. "Learn everything," he urged; "later you will see that nothing is superfluous.
And then any discussion about John Milton's 'Paradise Lost' could yield vast perspectives to all writing, no matter what genre. And then there is Voltaire, what would the world of politics and writing be without him and Candide? And what about Mary Wollstonecraft and her politics? Without her Frankenstein might not have come into being and non-being(lol). These were angry people at the root and through political, fiction and essay writing they changed the world.
The end product of all written communication is to inform and institute change. Otherwise, we are all just fiddling on our solitary violins to hear our selves play. I like to hear angry, but intelligent voices that help me understand the world dynamic from many aspects.
Love, family, money, religion (religion is now the Internet) and politics, to me, is what written communication is all about. If I can see these topic in one place, without time-consuming searching, I feel that I am then getting my money's worth.
Without a single sit down coffee house, a place to present ideas en mass, on one page so to speak, the improvisational music of Bach would have suffered, Voltaire might never have gone to jail and Shakespeare would probably not have met his male lover and the Sonnets would not exist.
And of course, a conscious choice is made to view a sub-topic in a forum about religion & politics. We did have a sub-topic about these subjects in the old forum and after it was initiated the subjects and the hot-heads cooled down and became more focused and interesting.
We all should be angry considering that in America we are all living with a banking bubble that is like walking a razor's towards a very unpredictable future. (Devious me, had to sneak in a political imbroglio that perhaps only Janet Yellen can fix. Or perhaps we should burn her at the metaphorical stake if she capitulates furthers to the agendas of big money banking ?)
However, by mentioning big banking then perhaps some aspiring writer will see that an Economic Fiction or Science Fiction can be cranked out using the present dire financial instability of America to instigate the necessary change to stimulate personal responsibility, personal savings , i.e., to create a more stable economy in the future. To get the fires of thought and action burning, say to 451 degrees Fahrenheit.
Just sayin' and just blathering on... But in this thread we have created a topic that interests many members, a forum on one page, and that is what I think a single community forum could and should be.... Damn it! LOL
292 2015-06-13 07:39:40
Re: Can we improve the list of posted threads on the home page? (36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Here is a screen shot of the MAIN FORUM at Scribophile.com :
http://www.maxkeanu.com/ME/m.png
They have a 'READ MORE', which opens the thread up to ALL responses. These can go on for many pages and are easy to read and reply/comment to. These have individual monitors. The navigation is exceptional.
Two more categories are left out of my .png
that deal with: 1). personals/life & 2). site problems
Up in the upper right is a drop down list that names ALL the genre forums & other types of forums (probably more than 30-40). A member can join as many as they want.
The problem with this site is the strict overview, the reviewing system (karma ?), member karma allotments, the trolls and the maturity of the members, young & old. Also ,I felt that the monitors and site policy about or concerning religion/politics had a very limited worldview.
However, I still am of the opinion that the old tNBW forum offered a larger list of topics and didn't pander to political correctness or la-de-da trendy internet nonsense.
Again, IMO, a central forum creates more of a community of writers. Individual forums create a place to drill-down into specifics of craft and substance.
Regarding vern's 'bad apple'. I became one, then I shut my life down on the internet completely as CIDP consumed me, flung me into a hell of anger and despair, and totally robbed me of my typing muscles. I am fighting my way back. Slowly. And, I want to get my money's worth.
293 2015-06-13 01:33:50
Re: Can we improve the list of posted threads on the home page? (36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I think a single COMMUNITY FORUM would work best.
Links to GROUP FORUMS could be on this page or there could be most recent posts to these forums, but these should be at the bottom of page.
The way the home page is set up now is fine, but it should show the COMMUNITY FORUM posts first. As it is now I only see forum posts if I am a member of that group
As to to a moderator: A vote system is easy to code and with 5 negative votes, then the posters is kaput.
294 2015-06-12 22:00:40
Re: Strongest Start 2015 Winners (15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Go,go, go! The goodies await you all!
295 2015-06-11 16:36:20
Re: 3 Tips for Writing Successful Flashbacks (3 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
And there is the —, which in a way is a flashback in computer Unicode language, also called an m-dash. However, for this text function to work the computer string language must be translatable, using an agreed upon Unicode for all operating systems. Obviously Nany Kress, the author of the flashback piece, has an operating system out of the past or perhaps too far into the future. With the m-dash, Nancy is attempting to create a bit of chronological disassociation to another idea; in a sense a flash back or flash forward to another place, time, event or idea.
Anyway, the article reminds me of the time when I was ten years old and I encountered my first —....
Hey Mike, just having a bit of nerd fun, and thank you; a good, educational read.
-max
296 2015-06-08 00:29:19
Re: Geneticist required for 4017 A.D. (29 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I think this may be easier than I thought. Most of us are carriers of one disease or another due to recessive genes. It's only when you pair up two recessive genes that you get an actual disease. Given that, I think it would be easy to create an effect with an undertested vaccine. You vaccinate the population in one generation causing recessive gene damage in that generation, leading to a pair of damaged genes in 25% of the offspring, who then have an actual disease. In this case, the disease is sterility.
How's my logic?
Dirk
Down the line a 25% decrease in the number of fertile males or females, becoming sterile, in a warring tribal society (what other kind is there?) would necessitate kidnapping, abduction, slavery or humans sex servitude from other tribes who are not infected. This would be instigated by the more hawkish members of the bad-boy tribe with a view to the long-term survival of the tribe, and of course with greed and avarice thrown in.
Gee, ISIS, Boko Harum... Did you vaccinate them? They need to be vaccinated with this vaccine or just castrated!
297 2015-06-07 20:12:56
Re: Poetry Book GIveaway (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)
Tank and more tanks. Goodreads, the seeds of success to you!
298 2015-06-05 01:54:36
Topic: Aphrodite's Rainbow (0 replies, posted in Young Adult & New Adult)
New Adult, 18-25, tech-savvy, mostly male, but might be wrong about that. I think this is my target audience. And, it is R to XX to XXX, depending on where you're coming from.
First chapter is a bit long, but I get rolling after chapter 2-3 and am now at chapter 30. Ending chapters are not yet drafted from outline.
So far the reviews and responses are pretty good.
Thanks
-max
299 2015-06-05 01:13:05
Re: market Aphrodite's Rainbow (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Max, I think I read your first chapter. I don't recall any major male characters in the story. How about a computer nerd, robot repairman, and would-be-author who falls in love with your MC. He could even be the author of the book you're writing. Don't forget to give him Harry Potter glasses held together above the nose with masking tape.
I harped on Janet TP until she gave me a male character in her latest story to identify with. Makes for a much better read, I thought.
Harley Davidson, a ButlerDroid, is a main character who appears in chapter 2. After their android sexual upgrades in Maui (chapter 4), Harley and Prunella fall in love, while dancing to the music of DukeDroid and his Hit Any Key Orchestra.
Computer nerd? How about, Captain Williard Thor Waverly? He's the captain/sysadmin of a Musk-Zeppelin that sails between Hawaii, the pacific garbage patch and LA Dome.
According to Tom Oldman, the chapters seems to get better the further you read in. Yeah, Williard is something else, lol.
300 2015-06-04 05:03:00
Topic: market Aphrodite's Rainbow (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Market it on Amazon, but to what target? I see it as a Douglas Adams, Monty-Python, Neil whats his name novellla. I'm thinking there is a YA market for this, a YA target of tech-savvy coders, systemadmins, hackers, both black and white hatted. It is definitely X-rated. Verges on the ridiculous at times.
What do you think it is? Be nice.
Suggestions, schemes, machinations, etc.Thanks
http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/content … /version/0
Where is the big forum for questionies like this?