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Lookin' good!

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Hey, that novel looks pretty good! BEST OF LUCK JOSS.

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Congrats and Happy New Year Winners!

Best Captain of enterprise... dare I write, Donald Trump? Can you imagine "The Donald" as Captain Trump of the Enterprise meeting a Klingon?.

Klingon asks " Captain Rump, is it?"
Trump, " Captain Trump, you dorky, butt-ughly Rosie O'Donnel clone..."
Klingon, " SoH Heghpu', you of hair like fairy and SO muSqu' by my kind! "

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I keep getting ads for inflatable love dolls and mule skinning 'how to' books.

Merry Christmas ya all.

bagatelle

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I now live alone in Gig Harbor, Washington. If you're nearby, email me and we'll meet-up at Starbucks off Point Fosdick Rd. Moving here was a modern version of Hercules Seven Labors and Twelve Trials... times one hundred!

Not posting new work for awhile, but I will be reviewing again. I'm keen on reviewing detective/murder/homicide/mystery with an intelligent male MC lead detective. Or, a quirky science-fiction like my novel, Aphrodite's Rainbow.

Thanks to all of you who helped me get through my Million Labors of Maui.

Scroogeamorphosis

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Thanks Vern. The world and the people in it, many have reasons and realities to be thankful for, others.... not so much.  Ah, but the best revenge on this cruel world is living well and eating well.

And, I'd like to make a toast ( I have a crystal glass of my favorite port wine) ... to all the great writers here on this site and to all the past writers on this site. "Be thankful for everything you have, love the special people in your life and be happy!"

Gunter Grass

http://www.scalingtheheights.com/helman … isfortune/

Misfortune can be managed, but can also destroy a man or make him heroic. Helman is one of my heros as we both suffer motor neuron disease.

However, the true misfortune in life is to lose it. A line from UNFORGIVEN, the Clint Eastwood movie always strikes me... "All that they ever were and ever will be is taken from them when you kill them...". I think one writes (sic) if a paraphrase.

I now know death, up close and personal. It is a real hell! I cry for the survivors, the parents, the loved one, the children, the wives of those slain in Paris. The pen is mightier than the sword, and someday the pen wielded by a brilliant writer will crush the ambitions of the barbarians trying to beat down our doors and kill us.

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You are the best of the best here and an inspiration, Paul.  Many times I marveled and was amazed at your short stories. Yeah, work... sometimes writing becomes so demanding that pasts have to be sat aside to make room for futures. The very best of luck to you!

non ergo, Norm

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Are there any GOOD series of detective fiction novels that are set in the future (say around 2400 A.D.) using a wise older detective and a rather numb-skulled junior detective partner. I am particularly interested in the interplay and interpersonal relationships of the two detectives as they solve murders that cross social and economic boundaries (rich/poor, black/asian/white/, hetro/homo, elite/plebeian, human/android etc.). 

I have no interest in hard science fiction

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jack the knife wrote:

Jeez, I just saw this post, Max. Too kind, my friend! Would that it were true!


But you see, Jack, if you were already known by all then I would not have to tell anyone. My attempt at a Yogism, lol!

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What is the name of the book wherein Holmes & Watson confront spies?

I'm thinking of a plot where two detectives are on the case of Richard Hanahay of, The Thirty-Nine Steps, only set three years in the future.

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What is the name of the book Holmes & Watson confront spies in?

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jack the knife wrote:

Predicting is hard, especially about the future, but I bet anyone who doesn't go to Yogi's funeral will not see Yogi at theirs.


Jack, you're recognized by all as a genius and I'll be the first to tell everyone that.

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You're encouragement for all of us on tNBW! Wear your cummerbund with pride! Congratulations, Paul.

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mac Automator function will read your text to you (in a variety of voices). you can record this and listen to it while running the rapids at the Grand Canyon or bungee jumping the Olduvai Gorge on archaeological expeditions.

many flaws in grammar, pacing and logic will to be heard. I recommend carrying a small whip to flagellate yourself when you hear a mistake so as to remember it.

no one ever said writing was easy and painless.

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Yogi, gone but not forgotten... and he won't forget that!

Hey... writers bullying, harassing, haranguing and generally being obnoxious (to a limit) kicked the newbie,  the greenhorn, the novice to the next level of THE NEXT BIG WRITER, thereby allowing them to understand the craft in a more meaningful way.  Loving kindness was also present on the old forums... think: Filliam.

Dill and I went around and around, but that was 2 years ago. Now I've grown to understand my faults and virtues, mostly  through the old main forum, faults which were pointed out many times by dags and others.

Strong personalities like Sharon Thatcher, Filliam, dags, need a place to duke it out. I would not be writing today if it were not for Filliam (Bless her).

I fell down to the pits with a rare disease, progressing  insanity of a spouse and should not have been using the forums to lash out at the world. However, having a place, a community where I could lash out, ask for help, plead for help, helped me tremendously. Nevertheless, I realized through some great people here that I should cool it.

Real writers are voices that condemn, complain, cajole, criticizes, demean, denigrate, attack, but also elevate, separate, prognosticate and even masturbate with great words and ideas for the final ejaculation that spews revelations and lofty ideas into the heads of the uninitiated, the insulated, the deflated, the writerly conflated, and may then give insight to the robotically inclined masses whose intelligence is wholly overrated.

That brilliant minds can come together in an open forum leads to great things. Of course, some idiots like Anger Red Mark or the old max keanu can come in and upset the didactics of the master writers; the intercourse between individuals who strive to make a valid point, and that is very sad indeed. Trolls will be trolls in every forum in our Universe.

The open forums were a spectacular stage where probing minds freely expressed ideas, where thoughts and questions spilled, then were either healed or killed or thrilled. I was healed of ignorance many time, however, I was also killed any times because of my ignorance, grammatical handicaps and naivete. Such is life.

I've been on writer forums sites with 5K+, 10K members. The sub forums do not work there for the big picture, as they do not work here. One open forum is needed like the old forums at tNBW.  The big picture is what we all strive to see and understand. Tid-bit forums will not satisfy a writer's crazy drive and curiosity.

Go there,  to the old forums, poke around and it becomes very obvious that the new tNBW site is inferior to other writing sites because of a lack of a solid community feeling and the building bonds of friendship and understanding between ALL writers and in very genre.

I am fighting my way back to sanity and writing... it's a VERY long haul for me.  I thank this site, its members for the helping hands! On the old forum everyone would see this gratitude of mine expressed... and that is what community is all about.

"RELEASE"... made me think of Englebert:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6S9ecXWCBCc

All novels are love affairs and at some point you gotta leave them, let them go... Oh, how we all know that!

Best of luck!

max, a closet Engelbert impersonator.

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THE RED JAGUAR, the classical Oxford education, classical music; all of these attributes of Morse go against the stereotypical gumshoe who usually learned from the school of hard knocks, as Lewis did.

Holmes/Watson & Morse/Lewis... difference of character and worldview allow Doyal & Dexter to cover many aspects of the crime in abstract terms and then give readers a simple explanation of a master mind's actions, notions, utterings, quirks and divergent methodologies through Lewis/Watson.

This dualistic formula for mystery writing has been hammered out many times by some great writers. In a way it seems similar to 'right brain thinkers' and 'left brain thinkers', where one side of the brain is intuitive/artist, the other coldly rational and dogmatic. However, together, the magic of understanding and full perception yield results.

I'm blathering here, but also working at being a writer again... perhaps they are the same thing.

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Ceridwen wrote:

Morse is my favorite as well... ever read 'The Wench is Dead'? Interesting premise.

A historical dual narrative, with clues of two time periods is one tough bugger to write. John Fowles pulled one off with THE FRENCH LIEUTENANT'S WOMAN  as did RObert WIlson with, A SMALL DEATH IN LISBON.

THE WENCH IS DEAD, which I'm reading at the present time, and have seen the PBS production of the same name thrice.. Well, the book is better IMO.

Did you know John Thaw was one of the most popular entertainment persons of the nineties in Britain? There is something about putting the upper class in its place that propelled 'Morse' to recognition. In America we had CSI and the constant metaphorical extension of bastardized American ideals, the money motive to mirror the Las Vegas mindset and the 'greed over conscious' class.

Murder and death stop time in its bloody, stinky tracks. The victim only has a past... but no present and definitely no future, but the good detective must extrapolate and create futures.  The murderer may inherit the victim's future in many ways; planned or unplanned and I think that is where the good detective drills in to find the answers. Who profits from death? I bit like chess...

Just thinking out loud... like many of us use to do on the old forums where lively threads furnished answers, camaraderie and brought writers closer to completion.