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And what is it about Morse that made this so popular? The novels are simple, direct, engaging, but I think Dexter tapped into the Homles/Watson type magic very well. Lewis is in many ways a dunderhead, but oftentimes he supplies the extra mile or insight that gets the case solved.

I'm also thinking that single men of a certain age and high intelligence see themselves in Morse, in his need for mature and intelligent female companionship, for the refinements an advanced culture is supposed to offer those who can appreciate the best of the best. But,  are all those women attracted to Morse, or is that Colin Dexter of wishful thinking? Or, am I missing the attraction the Morse character has upon women?

In real life, when the people who are suppose to be the best of the best commit murder it really sparks up my curiosity, gets my juices flowing and becomes intriguing... as it does many people. Special people murdering other special people, this requires a detective with a special insight to solve it oftentimes. But Morse says he just bumble or stumbles into answers, solutions... Perhaps that is what we all do, and because we are all bumblers and stumblers, we follow Morse as he stumbles along with questions (and women), but then there is that special insight that Dexter applies to turn a story's complexity into a shining moment of pure insight and action for Morse. Ah, the writer's craft at work, Watson!

I'm doing my homework... as all great detectives and next big writers must do, lol. And what fun I'm having, while losing myself in reading and detection. Always that big question mark about death for me now, the never-ending WHY???, the riddle of WHO was this person really, the details of HOW, the zeroing in on WHEN...

Ceridwen... I want to go to your library to study and drink coffee with you someday.

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Mike Roberson wrote:

I'll have to try Inspector Morse.  I got hooked on Foyle's War a while back and watched them all. 
Mike

Foyle's War... I want more, and more Morse.

But John THaw (Morse) passed away. However, there was a continuation called, Sergeant Lewis, and a depiction of Morse at a younger age called, Endeavor.

Definitely adult fair of the intelligent,  witty and investigative cat & mouse varieties.

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Ceridwen wrote:

Morse is my favorite as well... ever read 'The Wench is Dead'? Interesting premise.

How'd you know? I'm reading that novel in paperback right now.

Congratulations! ms. you were at the core of the dabble. Next contest, can we have an Adam & Eve Dabble?

I've just come to realize that my favorite character in fiction, Inspector Morse (with Sergeant Lewis) are incarnations of Holmes & Watson.

I'm reading Colin Dexter, watching the Inspector Morse series for the third time... Something will come of all this. The desire to jump back into writing must wait until I've done my research.

Reinventing ... yes, we all do it

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Yeah!

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pamlajj wrote:

I can only quote Laura Nyro for comfort - Time and love, nothing cures like time and love. Take all the time you need, and may the love of others be abundant in your time of trial. Peace to you - Jane

Thanks Jane.

A memorial tomorrow:
http://us4.campaign-archive2.com/?u=c82 … 1bd&e=

And then another memorial at my home on Saturday... And then I move on.
I'm moving from Hawaii to Washington State by the end of the year. Forty years here, I've had enough.

I look forward to writing again.

max will return

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You're reliving your original inventions of person, place or thing. The remembrance of a past creation still resides in the neural net and you're pulling it up again to reactivate and reinforce short term memory centers. However, I found that the first time is still the best, gives me the best cry.

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Tenured university librarian, graduate of Sarah Lawrence college, NYU and Pratt Institute. I was so proud of her... a truly beautiful woman, so full of life, loved by so many.

http://www.donationto.com/Lisa-Sepa-Memorial-Fund

Yes, I'm Steve. I'm going to write under my real name now.

But believe me, severe depression is a serious disease, a disease that should be renamed because it is far beyond anything that most of us will ever experience when things go wrong when we're a little down. WIth Lisa it was a life-long battle of constant panic attacks and a profound fear in her that I fought with her for 25 years.

I won't post more on this thread, but I had to share a picture of the woman I loved so much.

Again, thank you so much for your wonderful responses, they really moved me. I will survive this tempest to write again someday.... but it is still upon me

Life is all about love,
max/Steve

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The reality and the responsibility are upon me. Of course, I will be back, but until I find myself I've turned off all email notifications.

I am at maxkeanu@gmail.com if you want to contact me. (not max.keanu@gmail.com... mistake)

Thank you again from the bottom of my hurting heart.

max

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THANK YOU SO MUCH MY FRIENDS.

Your words brought me to tears, but they are tears of healing and renewal now. Tears of sorrow flow over my cheeks, tears reach my mouth and in remembering tears of past days came the joy and love and grateful tears that flowed on that very special day, twenty-five years ago, when I married this incredible woman... Lisa.

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such a tragic event happened in my life, my dear wife of 25 years passed away. i am so devastated, so destroyed... well, even typing this brings me to tears. the light of my life has gone out.

i know that when my senses return to me I will be a new man, I will write again, I will survive, I will dig so much deeper into the writing craft to try to move the emotions of other people.

five years on this site... oh, my friends it has been a lifetime of learning how to write better, understanding how to look deeper into the souls of myself and all the good people here who pour their hearts and souls out.

i am so destroyed. i know that when i find the strength to return to writing you people here will be my collective anchors... because oh my GOD, the tempest is upon me!

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For two years (2012-2013) Kaiser befuddled me with prescriptions for cataract surgeries, for both eyes, but could not / would not allow me to travel to Oahu to see a neuro-ophthalmologist to rule out CIDP related optic nerve axon damage. I was blind for two years, to a degree. Finally, after switching insurers (&%*(%!!!) I got appointments with knowledgeable doctors and proceeded with surgeries. I now see like a hawk, circle high above the Kaiser clinic, while waiting for a doctor/target to poop upon.

AND, foresight is better than no sight.

Take care.

m

Kittens & Genocide... WOW, a new genre. Think of the possibilities!
NOT!
But that is what is great about this site, that genre could be a group... With Mr. Bell as the founder and only member. Only kidding, Chucky.

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Site needs micro points. Hundredths of a point should be awarded for a funny, insightful, philosophical, writerly, grammatical insight, ETC. For comments form all writers... these micro points can be awarded in the forums and in to written/posted works. Why shouldn't a fine piece of writing or forum post be rewarded?

I'd love to write the code for this application...lol, think of the juicy math involved!

Go to Scribophile to see what I am writing about here.

And, Sol, can you somehow place the amount of points accumulated on EVERY page? I'm tired of clicking to find where I'm at, how long till I can post. THANKS

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Endurance point, no, real money!

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jack the knife wrote:

Where would Clive Cussler's novels be without prologues?

How true! His next novel: Raise the Prologue!

As to CObber's point about Star War's prologue, animation will be added to eBooks and we'll all be able to create compelling opening visuals to compete with well-written prologues or first chapters. Mark my words,

Writing is s fine art, an art of words to pull in the readers and keep them in the grasp of the art. Like all arts the first impression is the most important; be it cover art, back-cover spiel, or images of torn bodices or rippling muscles on a blond Adonis, or compelling words that present a platform to invite the reader into a story vision... It all goes to style and craft.

In the lute suites of Bach, a prelude precedes the dance movements: gig, sarabande, gavotte, minute, Bourree (my favorite) etc... The prelude tells the dancers that it is time to pick a partner, get into dance formation and prepare to kick up the heels and reveal more cleavage... And a prologue, to me, should do the same. As in, get ready reader, this prologue is an invitation/invocation to the dance.

In music:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xi2gbTyGBnw

And, to me, a prologue can be an invocation... A tableau of thoughts, possibilities, eventualities that quickly call out to the inner demons, fears, loves or genre spirits of the reader or listener.

I like the 3-D, holographic aspect to the site. I can reach in and actually touch the words and tickle or smack the writers. As to Herr Hitler, well because of him, Dad met Mom in England during War-War 2, and the rest is my history.

I'd like to see "Bumpy-Dumpy Points" added to this and other forums. By Bumpy-Dumpy Points, I mean that if any post to a forum is exceptional, the poster/originator gets itty-bitty "Bumpy" points added to their review point totals, as do all exceptional responses. Conversely, if the RESPONDER is a dullard or argumentative or just plain moronic, "Dumpy" points are deducted from their review point totals. These point are provided by the members, in variously named checkboxes, under ALL posts. Such as: Exceptional [], Superlative [], Writerly [], Moronic [], Dastardly [], Odin would be proud of you []... etc.

Democracy in action, etc.

I'm thinking fractions of points, say a one-hundredths of a point, which over time slowly add up to build confidence, or become a virtual ruler on the knuckles of the offensive and become virtual wardens over the rambling dilettantes who deal in provocation and forum subversion (such as this ramble, lol).

I would also like to see direct, emailed response to reviews. Again, that "must respond" function was on the old site.

BTW Janet, shouldn't it be: Things that ARE great... etc.

Love you, max

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Can you please tell us more about layout. I assume you want a landscape view that allows branding text to be strategically placed in an image that doesn't detract from site name and links. WIll the graphic need borders to place link images or buttons in? I assume JOIN & LOGIN textareas and textfields will be necessary. Will this be a scrolling page or static page? Will you need variations for IPad, Smartphones and Microsoft Hub, etc?
Will the graphic change on each refresh, requiring multiple images? Can you give dimensions needed for, forget the word, dense pixelation... for clear viewing?

Lots of coffee today!

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As writers, we create the DESTINATION of our characters and we spin their FATES. The DESTINATION is the denouncement and the magic of the writing is prompting the reader to believe certain fates we've given to characters. And, as thinking beings we believe the concept of logical sequences towards final actions or non-actions to define... well, existence.

Destiny is a man-made idea, a philosophy of the seemingly absolute, and yet because we've created it, we can play with it, question it. And that is the fun, the adventure of writing in a nutshell. Fiction writing is the fabrication of destinies, fate is the true or false determinism of the fabrication net cast... Ah, the plot thickens!

That final destination of ideas, characters, scenarios is a quantum of choices. We label them fate, as things that are predetermined, but perhaps not in reality, since our minds look for patterns in everything, always seeking ways to outsmart or avoid painful or threatening patterns, a.k.a., our destiny. Destiny is a yearning for a pattern, for an secure, reaffirming  and all-encompassing idea derived or prompted from a fear of no pattern or DESTINATION to human life and existence.

When questioning our destiny/ our fate, I think we are questioning, seeking survival choices in the vast realms of our internal neural nets dealing with luck & chance. These neural net ideas are the culmination of our knowledge and experiences in the realms of luck & chance.... to avoid or embrace perceived destinies.

I wrote this knowing full-well that Charles Bell would take umbrage to this and therefore I used my realm of predeterminism to elicit a true destiny or a false destiny (destination), only fate will prove me right. Right, Charles? lol.

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Tom Oldman wrote:

Mr. Bell: Since December, 2014, the Federal Government has lifted the ban on medical marijuana. See the following:]

http://www.latimes.com/nation/la-na-med … story.html

~Tom

Thanks for this info, Tom. Here is another link, but without the ads or push-to-join forms:

http://www.hightimes.com/read/congress- … -marijuana

I see some brilliant interactions in this post. Like Charles, I was once very adverse to cannabis, but remembering the very few time I smoked it—way back when—  I now recall a very relaxing sensation of muscles, the very relaxation that I could benefit from now.

All I can say is that just ten minutes with the level of pain I have (at total relapse and with out pain-killers), you might sell your mother into slavery to rid yourself of it. 

But like I mentioned, cannabis is just something I want to explore. This mode of treatment was suggested by a very good friend, a trusted friend who is also a doctor and who uses an aerosol mist of cannabis for breathing & sleeping problems.

It is a good thing that we can discuss a hot-button topic like this in an open forum and in an intelligent manner to derive insights into history, the craft of writing and other member's views.  One thing is for certain, if you don't have your health, you don't have the drive to keep at it, to go for it. Man, do I know that!

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Interestingly enough, cannabis for medical purposes is legal in 26 states to varying degrees. I spoke at length with my neurologist yesterday and he poo-pooed the whole pot thing as a conspiracy by the NORMAL folks and pot-heads to promote the use of cannabis purely for recreational purposes and money making.  When I returned home I researched medical cannabis and read that the brain naturally creates endocannabinoid as a response to inflammations, and the phrase, "Cannabis is essentially a good drug with a bad reputation" pretty much summed up the views from neuro & psychopharmacologists. And, cannabis is non addictive. And, I, like a typical multiple slcrosis sufferer, although I am a CIDP sufferer, might be called Mr. Inflammation.

The bad rap that cannabis is the gateway drug to cocaine and beyond is a position stated by the law & oder contingents, and from their point of view that is logical, and perhaps necessary in many way, but few of which have anything to do with cannabis as a medicine. However, the scientific/medical point of view, within brain & body research and statistics, seems to me to carry much more credence then the judicial and sociological points of view.

I'm in a totally different realm of pain then most people experience in there entire lifetime. I say 'explore' cannabis, just as I would, at this point in my physical degeneration of muscles and nerves  "explore" the potential benefits of opioids. However, when I stated this to my neurologist, I was told that opioids were last resort because of the addictive effects, but he expressed more fear, and a seemingly unnatural disdain for cannabis. Was it out of ignorance, or not knowing the present state of scientific and medical investigations of cannabis? I've learned that neurologists can be wrong and they do make mistakes. Nevertheless, he may be correct in his experience and frame of reference. But Hawaii, it seems to me from living here for 40 years, has a lower and middle class work force in the tourist trade that relies on illegal cannabis to carry them through the hum-drum and limiting structures of this work environment that may have influenced his pov and professional life and times here. I mean for the majority of workers her3e who live 24/7 in a resort, how does one "resort" themselves on a very limited income, in a place that has the highest prices in America, and on a land mass of only 700+ square miles, with much of it impenetrable jungle (but the location most illegal cannabis is grown).

Apparently there are many different organic compounds within cannabis, with CB1 & CB2 being the effector compounds that either produce a euphoric sensation or reduce inflammation (and thereby reduces pain) and other body response to cellular stresses, with Delta-9-tetrahydrocannabinol (THC) being the main euphoric compound of the 70 different cannbinoids. The shame of this is that over 400 compounds exist in this plant that may contribute to many aspects of good health and good medicine.

Until I explore and experiment I won't make a judgement as to cannabis' positives or negative qualities.  I am only interested in a derivative of cannabis called CB2, which, apparently has little or no euphoric qualities, but numerous medical properties.

Cannabis regulation is a 'hot potato' subject for writers, both fiction & non-fiction because of the tremendous sociological impact and even more so, the financial impact on state government tax revenues. That the typical disaffected 18 year old male takes refuge in cannabis may change when/if cannabis become a product like alcohol for either recreation or medicine uses.

I now live at a constant 4 level pain, 24/7/365, on a 1-10 pain scale, and yet I take the maximum doses of some very powerful pain killers already. To me, the entrenched medical & judicial establishment maintains and retains prejudices that deny me a possible relief and therefore a fuller life. When discussing this topic I see fear in people's eyes and strong reactions, a shying away from this subject, and yet I am driven by my pain to find relief.

In writing a novel, or other works of art, I think a person is also exploring, searching for solutions to pains and problems of self and society. Perhaps if this were an expansive forum for progressive writers this subject might be placed in a sub-forum entitled, "What drives the artistic urge?" I say this urge to create is our way to seek relief from the pains of one's past life and to better understand and deal with the good & bad times, to pass on the knowledge of experience. And to 'explore' is as natural to me as eating and breathing and walking and typing on and on and on...

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I'll be gone for 10 days. Off to Washington state to explore medical marijuana. I'll be staying here part of the time:
http://www.anchorage-inn.com/
Also, Gig Harbor with friends  & the Paradise Inn to get inspiration for a horror novel like, The Shinning.

Is this the right place to post trivia like this? Is this the community forum?

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jack the knife wrote:

Thanks for the encouragement, Max!

Jeez, $42K a month? Yikes! You must have good insurance! I don't know that much about CIDP, but I do know it's a bitch! Some afflicted with the condition do have significant improvement with treatment, so I dearly hope you are among that number, because you're an asset to this community.

John

Thanks, Jack. I do have great insurance, so far. Improvment, well, I'm back to the keyboard after three years of just staring at my fingers. This really is a good community, ain't it! LOL. You've renewed my interst in M&C.

Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

I really got into True Detective last season on HBO. New one coming soon.

Okay, I've been hovering around that, now I will use the viddies to viddy (I’m a Clockwork Orange fan, and btw, Anthony Burgess wrote some other goodie-good little novels)

HAPPY VALLEY

Sally Wainwright is the writer.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sally_Wainwright

SO, I think this gem should be taught in film/lit school as a classic plot for this day and age.

To me it is SO Shakespeare. Two kings (of business & wealth): Nevison Gallagher is the good king, but he is gruff and tough and demanding, and the other king, Ashley Cowgill, is the king of property development & a drug dealer; a sinister fellow if there ever was one. Catherine Cawood (MC), a police sergeant (and former detective) is placed between these kings when Cowgill/Royce/Wippley kidnaps Nevison’s daughter. The bad guy and henchman of Cowgill's is Tommy Lee Royce, and he is definitely a really bad guy! The dupe is Kevin Weatherill, accountant for Nevison Gallagher, who is of a weasely and weak constitution, and caught between the two kings in a stroke of character writing genius by Wainwright.

However, and as in a Shakespeare play, it is fiction, always needing a story arc, so I accepted the coincidences of plot and character associations, waiting to see if these coincidences & associations would help or hinder the plot

Tommy Lee Royce, as the antagonist, raped Cawood's rebellious daughter, who then commits suicide, leaving her grandson in Officer Cawood's care. However, the father of the boy is Tommy Lee Royce... So the plot spins tighter and tighter and thicker, and Cawood is drawn into the kidnap of Nevison's daughter... A kidnap involving Royce as a paid minion of Cowgill. Who then rapes Nevison's kidnapped daughter, as he did to Cawood's daughter 8 years previous and for which she sent him to prison for.

And there are some really juicy minor characters: Lewis Whippey, a weak, but humane bad guy; Julie: Ashley's wife... She is a classic, the wife of a bad king caught up in his crimes and machinations, and what a queen she is when mad! Nevison's wife is the good Queen, whose daughter is kidnapped, and who with her terminal cancer, drives the stake of tragedy deeper into the heart of the audience/viewer.

Kevin Weatherill, the weasel of both Neivson & Cowgill, is a character that at first evokes sympathy for his blunders, until  he morphs into a character of sociopathic dimensions in his myopic view of himself and the world. His actions instigate the drama/conflict, the murder of Kirsten McAskill (a police officer), thereby elevating the plot and bringing his disabled wife to a fateful decision to help this well-written weasel. This is heartbreaking as Weatherhill's wife is so good at heart, crippled with MS and you soon realize her blunders doom her (written with excellent dramatic irony) and you can't help but thinking she will crash and burn (with her two children) in tragedy.

The orchestration of the kings, their wives, the minions, on both sides of the protagonist/antagonist battlefield is slowly investigated, developed and held together (fiction wise) by Cawood's obsession into her arch-enemy: Tommy Lee Royce.

The ending, featuring Tommy Lee Royce against Cawood, is filmed on a canal, using a riverboat, and to me evokes the old England that I want to visit (lol). But for all of Cawood's justified hate and revenge towards Royce (a man who desperately wants to be a king), she comes to a moral decision to spare his life, instead of igniting him using gasoline and a cigarette lighter to create a great coflagration consuming her, her grandson and Royce, and thereby regaining so much of the humanity she'd lost in her quest for revenge for impregnating her daughter, seemingly causing her suicide, the shame involving the death of her novice subordinate, and generally making life for Cawood a total misery for almost a decade. (wow, what a sentence, mybad!)

I wrote this long review so I could better understand why I enjoyed this drama so much. In doing so, I now see how Sally Wainwright balanced the MC, the minions, the good and the greed of a small town's, its place in the world of international drug dealing and its insular community nature through the powerful character motivations of Cawood.