Well done, Dags!

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I prefer option number one. Simple but very effective.

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Many congrats, Janet!

Completed a review of Suin's 'Being Fifteen', chapters 15 and 16.

Completed a review of alkemi's 'The Souring Seas' Chapters 14 and 15.

Completed a review of Jube's 'The World Of Phyries" chapter 19.

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Yea

Two different publishers informed me that writing sites such as Scribophile and TNBW don't fall into the category freely available on the web since they both charge a subscription fee. I can also use snippets of my work in my blog as long as I don't post entire chapters as the snippets are considered promotion.

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Many congrats, Jack!

Completed inline review of Cobber's "State of Vengeance', chapters 82 and 83.

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I forgot about those. I had planned on doing chapters for everyone this month. I think I have two more of Cobber's and then I'm caught up with him.

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Apologies to everyone. I've been a bit remiss this month but it's been caused by multiple trips to Michigan State University's Veterinary Training Hospital (six-hour round trip) with several overnights for me, without my laptop. Our seven-year-old boxer, Tyson, has cancer. He had his first chemo treatment on Thursday, brought him back home on Friday. He'll be back again this Thursday for another treatment, but it's a day visit and this time, I'll make sure I take my laptop.

In addition to the problems with Tyson, we've been taking our FIV-positive cat, Shadow, back and forth to our local vet (an hour away). On Thursday, he was euthanized as his FIV crashed. 

Hope to catch back up with my reviews over the next week.

Completed inline review of Cobber's "State of Vengeance', chapter 81.

Completed inline review of Cobber's "State of Vengeance', chapters 79 and 80.

I haven't seen anyone in the group with bad writing. Sure, we can all find things to improve, but let me tell you a story.

In the beta group I was in, one of the members was very proud to have finished their first novel. The sent out 100 submissions and received 72 rejections. After reading the first page, I could understand the number of rejections and assume the others who received the work just tossed it away without responding.  Absolutely horrible! Misspelled words, incorrect words (example there vice their), run-on sentences, poor punctuation (even worse than mine), and changed one character's name before the end of the page.  I did an inline review of the first three chapters, and took two months before I received a response. So, I think this is a great group we have here and I'm certainly happy to read/review your work!

To the other item discussed about providing a plot outline or such upfront. Maybe the answer is somewhere in the middle? Any member can just ask if someone is willing to review their plot summary for another pair of eyes to look it over? The member can then arrange to email it to those willing to help and take a look. This keeps the plot off this group forum so as not to spoil it for those who want to continue reviewing without spoilers in advance. What do you think?

I understand what you're saying. I guess I'm looking at it from the submission process where a synopsis is required when submitting to an agent or publishing house. Of course, they could be using those a bit differently than we do here.

When I've been a member of a beta read group we were given the synopsis up front which didn't detract at all from the intent. Guess things work differently for different people.

That's why I liked the concept of this group- sticking with it until the end. Maybe it might be helpful if once we've posted our last chapter, we follow up with our "intent" and the rest of the group can speak to whether we reached that goal, or if not, what we can do "plot wise" to accomplish it? Just a thought.


Shouldn't the intent be covered in the synopsis, which should be made available before we begin reading?

Completed inline review of Cobber's "State of Vengeance', chapters 77 and 78.

Good points, Rhiannon. I'm working on my short stories, too.

Hey A.T.,

I didn't submit to agents, but to small publishing houses. I used the information contained within: Rock Your Query: A Simple System for Writing Query Letters and Synopses (Rock Your Writing Book 3) by Cathy Yardley as I wrote my query letter.

Signed a contract within two months. 
Regards, Randy

Completed inline review of Cobber's "State of Vengeance', chapters 71 through 76.

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Ann Everett wrote:

Ron Carlson's Alphabet Exercise: Write a short story of 26 sentences, the first beginning with A, the second with B, and so on.

Sounds like a good contest to me!

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Many thanks! Look forward to doing the same.:)

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Congratulations, Janet!