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Hello everyone,

I've been fortunate to have Ann include me in her 'Five on Friday.'

http://www.anneverett.com/2017/07/07/ra … on-friday/

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Just read/reviewed chapter one. I like the start with action rather than background but need to read more to be able to help.

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Hi Ryan,

I can give it a go, too. I have 20 chapters posted of a thriller, Dangerous Alliance, with more to follow.
Regards, Randy

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Welcome to you both!  TNBW is a great site--plenty of helpful people and good stories to read, too!

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Welcome Peony. I have a couple of military/intel works underway. Twenty chapters are posted for Dangerous Alliance and nine for A Cartel's Revenge. Will check out your postings.

Completed inline review sof alkemi's 'The Souring Seas' Chapters 20 and 21.

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Love the dragons!

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Glad I read this thread as I was going to respond to Nyx and welcome them to the site. Many thanks to alL!

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Suin wrote:

Hi,

I wanted to share this creative writing course on Coursera - Creative Writing Specialisation. It covers the basics of writing like crafting characters, plots, settings, & etc. in a very brief & engaging way.

You have the option to pay and receive a certificate at the end, but you can also just audit the classes for free, which means you can download the videos onto your phone/stream on your computer and watch whenever you want (very useful while on trains/planes).

I found it really helpful, maybe others will too.

https://www.coursera.org/specialization … ve-writing

Many thanks for sharing, Suin!

Many congrats, Janet!

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The site already has a section under Help for reviewing work and providing feedback, so it would probably be easy to add Suin's suggestions.

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Congrats, Janet!  Make the pen be with you and hope you get plenty of clients!

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Gacela,
The same person left the following on ch17 of Dangerous Alliance: I know I have only started reading this story from Chapter 17, but I really got into this, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. It had me on the edge of my seat and if it had been a book, it is what would be known as a real page turner. I am going to start reading the rest soon.

I did read/review the first chapter of his posted work and he thanked me and said my remarks were very constructive, but there's been nothing further from him since. Regards, Randy

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Hi MzP,

I should be able to help you out.:)

Regards, Randy

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Welcome, Jonathan. If you like adventure/thrillers, check out my work. I'm open to any and all suggestions. While I'm sometimes bogged down, I do return critiques.  Regards, Randy

Completed an inline  review of Jube's 'The World Of Phyries" chapter 24.

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Just went on JP's profile and her portfolio is visible now.

Many thanks, Janet!

Many thanks Denise!

Many thanks Bill and Jack!  You're support has been greatly appreciated!

Many thanks Dagnee and Ann.  It's a great feeling.:)

Don't know about selling a billion, but I'd settle for a few thousand.:)

Thanks again!

njc wrote:

Wonderful review!  Congratulations.  It was an honor to watch the story develop.

Many thanks, NJC!

Moonshine Cove Publishing, my publisher, just linked the review of TKC in the newspaper to their website. Here's the link:

http://moonshinecovepublishing.com/publ … views.html

A great first sentence, too: Randall Krzak's novel of the Kurd's struggle against Turkey, THE KURDISH CONNECTION, is so relevant that it reads like today's headline news.

Many thanks to all TNBWers who made this novel possible!

Sorry to see you nipped at the post. I tried to vote more, but the system only allowed one per 24-hour period.:)

Been voting each day. Can't vote again until this evening but will do so. Good luck!