Nuts. Several folks on my Catholic forum tell me that demons possess only the body of a person and that the soul is freed when the body dies, unless the possessed person willingly accepts the devil. That screws up my scene where Connor saves the reverend mother's soul just before her deathbed warning and physical death. Not sure how to fix that. I suppose she could be possessed to keep her from giving Connor her warning before she dies. Perhaps she learns of the warning through prayer and tells her fellow nuns that she needs to find Connor (or Constantino), whoever he is, then becomes possessed.
1,276 2020-01-16 01:30:55
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
1,277 2020-01-13 12:50:41
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Celsius. Edmonton, about three hours north of Calgary, is forecast to be the coldest place on Earth this coming week. :-)
1,278 2020-01-12 21:54:53
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Someone built an igloo in Calgary and listed it on Airbnb. :-)
1,279 2020-01-12 21:49:51
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Weather forecast for Calgary calls for a high of -27 degrees later this week. I remember now why I hate the Prairies.
1,280 2020-01-12 21:27:25
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
No, just me not using a chapter checklist yet. If I don't write it down and read it every chapter, I forget to do it. Same goes for Antonio Beneventi haunting Romano for the rest of the book. I once forgot to put God in one of the Galaxy Tales chapters. :-)
The haunting may grow old very quickly, like De Rosa's constant itching/scratching.
1,281 2020-01-12 20:43:16
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Oops. Totally forgot that two exorcists are supposed to be shadowing Connor to protect him. I figured one on duty and another off duty. I managed to slip one in without adding to the character count (e.g., the soccer game referee is also the exorcist). In the Holy Land, the tour guide can double as an exorcist, so I don't have to add yet another priest to Connor's SUV.
1,282 2020-01-10 02:52:47
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Gravedigger chase is up. I had a little fun with it. Makes the scene about a page longer.
Thanks for the suggestion, Kdot.
1,283 2020-01-09 22:53:25
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I prefer Diet Pepsi or chocolate soy milk. You know, health food. ![]()
1,284 2020-01-09 06:01:49
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I think you missed one of my posts above. It's unlikely to appear in the books, but I want an explanation for myself so that I have a set of rules to follow for consistency throughout the trilogy. My proposed rules also led to the discovery that one could have two demon-spawns each pass their demon chromosome to an offspring, probably making their child even more powerful than the parents. I don't see a use for that in the trilogy as envisioned, but it's within the rules should I care to explore it.
1,285 2020-01-09 04:24:55
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Minor correction to the above. Since one half of all chromosomes come from the mother, the demon encoding would come from only a male chromosome, not from both parents. So, if you have one demon chromosome, you're a demon-spawn with great powers. But what if you have two demon-spawns mate and the chromosomes handed down are both the demonic ones? I wonder if I can use that somewhere.
1,286 2020-01-09 03:21:40
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I may never use the demon-science in the books, but I'd like to have my own explanation beyond hand waving. Basic elements: a female human, a demon father, a tussle under the sheets, and a fetus that develops normally, but harbors something from the father that gives it demonic powers. Chromosomes and genes seem like the ideal solution. So much is unknown about our genes, it's a reasonable place to encode for superpowers.
1,287 2020-01-09 02:36:04
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
What if there is a chromosome pair in demon-spawns that is different from normal humans? Have it code for the demonic powers. The satanic equivalent of midichlorians. :-)
1,288 2020-01-09 02:18:08
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
In the Omen, Damien's blood cells matched those of a jackal, which was his mother. I assume the father was Satan.
1,289 2020-01-09 02:13:53
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
What a great question. I've been told that angels and demons in Catholicism can't reproduce, although some church fathers thought Satan could father the Antichrist. That, of course, was before knowledge of DNA, which I have now bumped up against. I need a Y chromosome. Perhaps the demon should sample a dead human (e.g., in a morgue or cemetery), which would give it the ability to assume that human's form, including its DNA. The problem then comes back to where in the child is the demonic essence and power? Perhaps a half-soul and a half-demon essence? Meh.
1,290 2020-01-08 13:19:29
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Hmm. I need a demon in human form to impregnate a woman in my story. I set it up in the exorcism chapter by giving the chief exorcist a complete human body, including on the inside. That means he has bodily fluids, including blood and semen. The tricky part is whose DNA does a demon carry? There has to be a male chromosome since the offspring will be male. It's not enough for the demon to possess a male body and use his DNA for that purpose. I need the offspring to be part demon. That's how the child will inherit demonic powers.
Suggestions?
Thanks
Dirk
1,291 2020-01-07 12:00:14
Re: Most "active" forums? (6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Such adoration from my fans. I am truly humbled.
1,292 2020-01-07 09:51:42
Re: Most "active" forums? (6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
And you, dearest, are nonpareil.
We finally agree on something. :-)
1,293 2020-01-07 06:08:55
Re: Most "active" forums? (6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
You're not interested in knowing which forums are most active? I rely on active forums to bounce ideas off other writers. One of our latest new members is also looking for active forums for her historical fiction project. Even my favorite haunt, Medieval Fantasy/Magic, is increasingly quiet. I don't want to use Premium for brainstorming threads because they get derailed too easily.
Even including the last forum posting date when browsing through groups would suffice. Saves having to drill into each group to do it manually. It's an extra piece of text on an existing screen. There's lots of room for it on the screen.
Sol could probably code it in less time than it took me to write this response.
1,294 2020-01-07 02:56:42
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Thank ye, kindly.
1,295 2020-01-07 01:40:16
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Is it just me, or is the bolded sentence incorrect? Specifically, Campagna is the POV character, but the sentence reads to me as if someone else were the POV character. Is it reasonable for the narrator to withhold information from the reader even as the POV character receives it (i.e. the details of the call)? She discloses the information in a paragraph that follows, simultaneously revealing it to her colleagues and the reader.
Inspector Campagna sat in her makeshift office in the basement of her precinct. Her phone rang. “Yes?” She listened intently for a time. “Excellent! We’ll head right over.” She ended the call.
Thoughts?
Thanks
Dirk
1,296 2020-01-07 01:14:59
Topic: Most "active" forums? (6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Sol, would it be possible to add an enhancement that shows the most active forums? Given the many groups, there are many forums that aren't used. There's really no good way to quickly find "active" forums. I leave the definition of "active" to your imagination.
Thanks
Dirk
1,297 2020-01-03 18:51:08
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Interesting. Celine Dion is worth $800M. Makes me wish I had stayed in the choir in elementary school.
1,298 2020-01-03 04:15:24
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Couldn't find the von Neuman, but the Symphony of a Thousand is decent. Not my preference for background music while writing, though. Il Divo is awesome, too. I prefer that while driving.
1,299 2020-01-03 01:27:30
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Miles who? I prefer Celine Dion and the Canadian Tenors. Home grown stuff. They're getting rich, I stream them so much.
1,300 2020-01-02 20:33:32
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,472 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Ray & Kdot, please ignore the comment at the top of my latest scene (the gravedigger) that the detectives already believe they are hunting the Antichrist. There simply isn't enough setup for that assumption yet (all they have are sightings of someone powerful and a ring). I'll see if I can work more evidence into Act II that causes them to change their minds about whether it's a demon (their working assumption) or the Antichrist. TBD.