My mother made french fries that way when I was about four, emphasis on "fries." I remember to this day how impressed I was that she knew to throw the lid over the flaming pan. Have used that acquired skill several times in my life.
Dirk
My mother made french fries that way when I was about four, emphasis on "fries." I remember to this day how impressed I was that she knew to throw the lid over the flaming pan. Have used that acquired skill several times in my life.
Dirk
I wanted to share this with everyone because I believe you'll enjoy the very soulfull sound of this poem put to music.
Lord Alfred Tennyson, son and grandson of vicars/rectors published the poem in 1833. It's based on Arthurian legend, grounded in Christianity, about a woman cursed to only see the world through a mirror. The book in which it was published was so heavily criticized that Tennyson didn't publish again for ten years. Fortunately for history, the poem caught on and inspired numerous paintings over two centuries. Loreena McKennitt, a fellow Canadian, put it to music in 1991. She has a hauntingly beautiful voice that makes it a very spiritual experience, I think.
It's very long, almost twelve minutes, but worth it. I chose a video that includes the words and some of the paintings inspired by the poem. You may need to cut and past the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k0rVNQw1DQM
I hope you enjoy it.
Dirk
I'll defer to Vern, although I'd still very much like a wider Submit button.
Sol, can the technology you're using for the inline reviews handle placing the cursor in the comment box, so that we can start typing as soon as the box opens? Saves a click per comment (winks at Vern).
X-lines are great, by the way, in case I haven't said that enough.
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Tthe four buttons: add video. add picture, submit, cancel. Submit will be most commonly used. Right now it's in the middle, which requires too much "aiming" with the mouse, so we don't hit the wrong button. I suggest moving Submit it to the far left and making it wider, followed by Cancel, then the others, which I think will be rarely used. You may even want to move those two off to the right side of the comment box.
At a minimum, please widen Submit to make it easier to hit.
Thanks.
Dirk
At the risk of incurring Vern's wrath twice, I was just using the new feature to read reviews given to another author (as opposed to those received by me). In all those cases, the x-line tab should definitely be the default. I can't imagine a reason why someone would want the other view, having to click on each inline. Unless there's an issue with tablets or phones that requires it to be otherwise... It's more than just one mouse click per review; I open the review and begin to scroll down looking for comments, then when I see them, I realize I have to scroll back up to switch to the x-line tab, then scroll back down to continue where I left off.
Besides, if you change the default, I might shut up for a while and go away. :-)
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Seems like a low priority to me; you're talking one click for crying out loud. But hey, if we're trying to alleviate any effort on anyone's part, how about a respirator to breathe for me, and I can probably think of a few more things which could reduce the burning of one-and-a-half calories and save a nanosecond or two. Or maybe just link us all up to a Matrix; don't forget to roll us over so we don't get bedsores, lol. Take care. Vern
LOL. Best single piece of advice I ever received from my business counterpart while I was working in IT was, "Count the mouse clicks." I deployed Customer Relationship Management systems for call centers that have to be very efficient/intuitive/self-teaching. I extended his advice to include scrolling and mouse movements. It's a trivial change and will almost certainly be the preferred default. Besides, there's no harm in asking.
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I was wondering if I could ask the group's members their reactions to the earthquake in Nepal. I think we've all heard the expressions Act of God or God's Will. There are, of course, even worse natural disasters, like the Japan tsunami, among others. In 1931, floods in China took an estimated 1M-4M lives.
I suppose one could take solace from the fact that they are now in Heaven, but there is an extraordinary amount of suffering that arises from such natural disasters, particularly among the survivors.
My Joseph character is going to experience a moment like this later in my book. It brings him to a crisis moment with his faith.
What is the group's view of God and such events?
Thanks.
Dirk
Default to X-display makes sense.
Can you at least warn us if we're about to leave an inline review for someone who can't read it? I understand that it might be a draw for someone to start paying if they see a bunch of inline reviews they can't read for free, but I read new authors' works intentionally to get them hooked on the site by giving them as much useful feedback as I can. From what I've seen from other authors, they do the same thing, going the extra mile.
If I get halfway through a detailed inline review before realizing that they might not be able to read it (that's happened to me several times), then I either need to abandon the review, or continue and hope they see it. So far, I've received no reply from the authors, even though I've asked them to let me know if they saw it. Part of the problem is that many of us don't use regular reviews anymore, so I don't even think about using one, especially since there's only the Leave Inline Review button at the top of the posting view.
Either way, thanks for the great new feature!
Dirk
Thanks. This is a great new feature!
On a related note. Is the Leave Inline Review button disabled when we're about to review a non-paying member? I want to ensure they can read the feedback I'm leaving for them.
Thanks.
Dirk
Also, when I add a response comment inline from within the x-line tab, it doesn't show on the page unless I reload it.
Dirk
I reloaded the page and now it appears to be working.
Thanks.
Dirk
No luck. Ctrl-F5 did not nothing.
Does x-line work on inline reviews already received in the past (before x-line functionality was added), or will it only work for inline reviews received from here on?
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Dirk
I just tried x-line and it doesn't work for me. I see the inline review with numbers on both tabs.
Google Chrome, Windows 7.
Dirk
I think it depends on which you care more about - the reception from your readers or true-to-life characters. Obviously, it's a spectrum. My Joseph character says "freaking" at times as a curse, except on one occasion where he's extremely angry, then he drops the f-bomb. Since my target audience is late teens and up, Joseph's cursing is more about the character and how he would react given his upbringing. And since he's very religious, it's at moments of extreme stress that he takes the Lord's name in vain.
One other idea that seems more workable in the short term is to create a kickstarter-like site dedicated to raising money for book writing/publishing/marketing. The best proposals would hopefully get the most funding.
Sol, start coding. :-)
Dirk
I always wanted to program a story generator, but time and skills were lacking. For better or worse, I'll probably be dead before I'm obsolete. Would make for an interesting Kickstarter campaign, though. You could reduce it to bite-size chunks (e.g., start with a sci-fi short story generator).
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Thanks, all. My "two" Gods are intended to have somewhat different personalities, just enough to keep the reader guessing, although not enough that you would notice in the span of one chapter (God only has a few lines of dialogue most of the time). I toyed with giving the two Gods different names (e.g., Dieu and Dios, from French and Spanish), but that made it seem like they were definitely two different entities, which is not an impression I want to give.
I'll probably keep with one POV and one God at a time. I have a number of dual-MC chapters still to come, so more opportunities to experiment.
Thanks.
Dirk
Hi. I was wondering what other authors suggest for the following POV scenario. I have two MCs, each of whom hears a voice in his head claiming to be God. I alternate between the two MCs, chapter by chapter. As long as there is only one MC in a chapter, the voice of God is obviously talking with that MC. The God heard by these two MCs is giving potentially conflicting advice, which is part of the mystery in the book. In other words, is it the same God talking to both, or are the two MCs simply mentally ill?
The problem with the above comes up when the two MCs are finally together in the same chapter. Since I'm using third person limited, the POV is only ever with one of the two MCs at a time, even when they're together. The "God" speaking to the MC in those chapters is always the one associated with the POV character. I currently use that to toy with the reader, leaving him/her wondering what God is saying to the other MC at the same time as when He is speaking to the POV MC.
I'm told that limiting God's dialogue to just the POV MC is sometimes confusing. The argument is that since God is in the scene, the reader should hear everything God says in those scenes, regardless of which MC he is talking to. I should add that most of my reviewers didn't have a problem with limiting God's dialogue to just the POV MC.
If you followed all of that, the question is: should I write those chapters from the POV of both MCs (i.e., switch to omniscient POV for those chapters) and show what God is telling both MCs at the same time?
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Dirk
Good article.
I think there will always be some market for printed books, probably for those that don't fit the e-book model. For example, I have a large book about the Roman Empire, 8.5" x 11" and one inch thick, weighing over 2 lbs, and filled with hundreds of large images and maps. While it may be possible to format that for a large tablet, it will never fit on a smartphone. I only bought it because I need it for my research. Everything else, I would much rather read on my phone while lying down to relax. I'm reminded of Captain Picard, who loves reading physical books in the 24th century, where printed books are collectors' items.
However, the shakeout in the publishing industry is far from over. Their monopoly over what gets published or doesn't is gone. Aside from self-published books, there are already online businesses that an author can use to help publish AND market books. Full service publishing "packages" paid for by book authors will be an increasingly viable alternative to traditional publishers who take on most of the publishing risk at their expense. The latter are too few in number given how many people are trying to publish books.
One area that has yet to develop fully is successful authors lending their name to new authors, just like real estate agents who work for other real estate agents (a business within a business) in return for a small cut of all homes sold under the leading agent's "brand."
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Sol, what's the latest with regard to how membership works? I think I read that all new members get a free week of Premium. Is that right?
I ask mainly because I just spent an hour doing a detailed inline review for a new member and want to be sure he/she actually gets to see it.
Do you disable the Leave Inline Review button for work by members who can't read inline? If not, that would be really useful.
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Thank you, Mike. Very helpful.
Dirk
Thanks, Mike. This is terrific. You're exactly who I wanted to hear from. I've had enough spiritual experiences in my life to believe in a hereafter, although we probably differ on some of the details. Makes for more interesting discussions that way. :-)
In answer to your question about the character, there are actually two main characters in my book, both of whom hear a voice in their heads claiming to be God, starting from childhood on. One MC grows up on a fundamentalist world, but eventually grows to doubt the reality of this God he has been talking to most of his life. The other is an atheist who increasingly finds reason to believe the voice may really be the Christian God. It's a three-book story that will span about ten years. The last book will reveal whether or not the voice is that of God, and how the boys come to terms with the answer. Either way, the fate of the galaxy rests on their shoulders.
Karen (or anyone), please don't hesitate to weigh in.
Thanks again.
Dirk
Thank you, Mike.
What happens to those who don't turn to/believe in Christ? The majority of the world doesn't believe in Him, including an increasing number of atheists. It seems like the more right-wing the Christian, the more convinced they are that the rest of humanity is going to Hell. Personally, I don't believe in a God that would allow that. That's reflected in my character's struggle. He's a fundamentalist Christian who comes to question all of his beliefs.
And what about those who suffer at the hands of evil. Plenty of children, even babies, suffer greatly in this world (e.g., from diseases and starvation). Technically, they may be sinners by virtue of the simple fact that they are human, but why are they made to suffer in this life?
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Dirk
No rush. Thanks.