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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Kdot wrote:
Norm d'Plume wrote:

Perhaps a "blaster" with multiple settings?

1. I forgot the sunscreen
2. I'm wearing a red shirt
3. BBQ
4. Liquify
5. Reactors look balmy compared to this
6. Mushroom cloud
7. The sun is jealous
8. Sh*t, I just melted the planet
9. We don't need no stinkin' solar system
10. Big bang

You have too much time on your hands. Bzzt.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I took out the part about sentient AIs a while ago. It detracted from the opening chapter, although I hope to incorporate AIs becoming sentient spontaneously somewhere else. I thought it was cool.

Right now I'm trying to define the characteristics of flesh eaters. Something cool and violent. Can penetrate boarding suits, blow up heads, overload low-power shields, destroy inanimate objects, make people bleed profusely and/or burn flesh.

Perhaps a "blaster" with multiple settings?

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

njc wrote:

You can design the exploding shells to be mini-EMP generators, too.

What would the effect be of the EMP?

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Actually, I just remembered that the Balrog had a pure energy whip in LOTR. I knew I'd seen it somewhere.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Amy, it's fiction set 2000 years from now. Nanoids take as much or as little time as desired. Kind of like the way a blaster causes bleeding of seared flesh. tongue  Can the wound at least bubble? Or perhaps a non-searing form of energy, used specifically to cause maximum bleeding. Invented by the Professor and built by Acme.

NJC, thanks for the suggestion. I'll review all the places where weapons are used to see if I can use your gun. Perhaps I'll use a variety of weapons. I have an electric whip in mind, too, although I'm sure it's been done.

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(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Randall, your portfolio is visible.

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(1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Barcalounger in Zzz.

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(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

SolN wrote:

If eveyone finds it annoying, we can stick the menu at the top on mobile. We could also do the same on desktop.
Sol

Sol, if you move the menu to the top on the desktop, where would you put the TNBW control, the search button, and the drop-down menu? Below it? I'm not sure I'm picturing it correctly.

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(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

njc wrote:

Seems to work okay, but the saturated color is a bit distracting.

That dark blue does kind of stand out, doesn't it? I would recommend a different color, something lighter, that doesn't dominate the screen.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Thank ye, kindly. Firing bullets with one or two nanoids inside doesn't have the same story impact as a good old-fashioned head-splattering/heart-exploding blast. I could use a reservoir of nanoids that "blast" out of the gun, which then go to work at disassembling the target. Of course, that's gotta be one hell of a reservoir to use it in a prolonged firefight. It would probably "need" to be a blast, otherwise a simple nanoid-supressing bullet-proof suit would be impervious to attack. The punch from the blast weakens the boarding suit, and then the nanoids can get inside. Or, a two-part blast (basic blaster fire followed by nanoids in each shot). Meh.

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(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Nice work!

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(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Would it be possible to add Search Forum as an alternative when doing a search on the site? Currently it's only Search Writer and Search Posting.

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(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Are you excluding the new layout from the forums until testing is done, or will there be two interfaces (regular vs forum)? I hope it's former.

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(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

How do I read a work posted outside of my groups? Or do I have to join the group to read its posted works? Just curious.

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(33 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I agree with Tom. It looks good. One possible change to the home page would be to put writing from my connections before books. Also I'd love to see new reviews higher up the home page on the right, either before after new users. Shelved stuff rarely changes, whereas new reviews come in at quick pace. I always forget to look at the latter because it's so far down the page. Like Tom, I use the TNBW label on the upper left to go to the home page, but as a new user I didn't realize it was there, so Home seems like a good thing to have.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Any idea whether the gases in air are likely to be useful in a nanoid weapon (e.g., as one of the  building block for nanoids), or would nanoids have to be stored pre-assembled in a resevoir in the gun? I'm hoping to make the resevoir as small as possible and assemble the nanoids as the weapon fires.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Anybody know what some of the most common building blocks are to create nanoids? I know K is using them for healing.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

How about bolts of nanoids created on the fly inside the weapon from air molecules and/or a resevoir in the weapon? The impact of the bolt causes unprotected heads/hearts to explode, and the nanoids eat what they land on (e.g., boarding suits and skin).

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

My chapter definitely implies that it can work on anyone (Lupus, Caligula, ...). More fun that way.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Thanks. Correct me if I'm wrong, but a laser can't cause a head to explode, which I need for the Joseph's Sword chapter.

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

What is an s lazed? Are you typing willing snorting necrotic tissue again?

Thanks.
Dirk

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Flesh eaters that fire energy-like bolts, also referred to as blasts, with cool sound, and that cause serious bleeding of bodily flesh, including heads and hearts exploding. But not you're basic burning type SW blaster. Also good at blasting apart the occasional inanimate object.

Thoughts?

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Oh dear. I've been bleeding out my characters since chapter one whenever they get hit.

I think I need an asspull.

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(1 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

Very nice. Thank you!

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(1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Amy, I wanted to follow up to your inline comment pointing out that a flesh eater burn would probably cauterize the wound, preventing bleeding. If someone's skin is burned so badly that the ribs are showing, would there be no bleeding whatsoever? Do I need to pop the spleen, or is that likely to be fatal (it will take time to reach the character and get him into surgery)? I'd like to keep it as simple as possible, gory, and cool. tongue