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(10 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

This isn't a "craft" piece of advice, but the first thing I'd tell any new writer is: Find a good critique circle.

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(28 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

oh my god, how could I forget?

Lady Hawke

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(28 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

I loved The Princess Bride.
Another one of my all-time favorites is The Last of the Mohicans.

Others I've really enjoyed:

Sleepless in Seattle
Hitch
Silver Linings Playbook
Dirty Dancing (the original)
When Harry Met Sally
Once
Howl's Moving Castle
Several musicals, including West Side Story, Grease, The Sound of Music, Singing in the Rain
Wall-E (We can include robot romance, right?)

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(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Cool. smile

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(5 replies, posted in Fantasy World Builders)

I belong to both the Premium group & some of the free groups. As far as I can tell, posting to free groups does not affect the points earned by my reviewers. If I use points to post my chapters (e.g., through the Premium group), then reviewers will earn points to review those same chapters. For example, the medieval fantasy group is "free", but the authors I've reviewed that belong to that group all have points attached to their chapters.

However, if we make this a 'free' group we may get members who post chapters with no points attached. I started reviewing a new author in the Romance group who had no points attached to her chapters. But she was very good at reciprocating, which is really what matters for me. So I reviewed her chapters & she's been reviewing mine. Now she's earned enough points to start posting within the point system, which she does. That entire transition happened while the Romance group remained "free". 

Of course, I may be wrong about how all this works. Quite a bit of confusion has been generated by having a point and a no-point system. Maybe this is a question that needs to go to the Premium forum for clarification. I think I'll head over there & check out their thread on the point system.

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(5 replies, posted in Fantasy World Builders)

Lee, I think you're the moderator for this group, so I wanted to ask you: Do we need to make this a points-based group?

Everything I post on tNBW is points-based anyway. I would like to post my work to this group, but the way the current system is set up, it costs me double (since I also post to tNBW Premium). For that reason, I haven't shared any of my work here. I'm not sure if anyone else is in the same situation. At the moment, I don't see a whole lot of posting going on.

This is just a suggestion. I'll keep participating whether we need points to post or not. I'm enjoying the discussions here.

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(20 replies, posted in Fantasy World Builders)

Nicholas Andrews wrote:

Personally speaking, I wouldn't use a famous painting as my cover because I would want people to associate the image with my story, rather than associating the story with the image. Using a painting whose idea spawned from someone else's imagination and is intended to show some other event or story wouldn't feel like it truly 'fit' my book. Though perhaps using the painting as an inspiration for the cover might work out.

I felt this way back when I published Eolyn; I wanted original artwork for my original stories. That's still, to an extent, my preference but I've come to recognize it's not necessarily a good marketing strategy. The number one job of a book cover is to grab the reader's attention.  Original artwork, tailored to the story, isn't always the best way to do that.

It's also true that no matter who the artist is, the cover art will always be a product of someone else's imagination. The scene portrayed in the cover of Eolyn never happens in the novel. The Naether Demon on the cover of HIGH MAGA looks nothing like I imagined it when I wrote the book. This wasn't  an issue for me, because as I've said, the number one job of a cover is to capture the reader's attention. I do think it's important for a cover to communicate the essence of the book, but it's unrealistic to expect any artist to produce cover art that reflects my vision and my vision only.

Maybe not unrealistic, but unfair, in my mind, to clip the artist's creative wings any more than we would want them to clip ours. It was really fun for me, for example, to see how Tom developed the idea of the Naether Demon through his own artistic expression, even if his Naether Demon looked nothing like the one I would have painted if I had the ability.

In terms of the classic artists, I take a special delight in finding classic art that fits any major theme of my work. Imagination, for me, is a shared endeavor; timeless and free of personal boundaries in a lot of ways. From my perspective, the fact that Edmund Blair Leighton hit upon a theme over a 100 years ago that connects to the mood of my 21st century fantasy novel is pretty darn cool.

Again, I'm still hoping for original cover art for Daughter of Aithne, but I'd have no problem using classic art if it (1) succeeded in catching the reader's attention, and (2) communicated a major theme of my work.

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(20 replies, posted in Fantasy World Builders)

Oh, I'm so glad 'The Accolade' caught your attention, Jube. I really like that painting, and it actually fits well with the theme of the novel. I've thought about asking my publisher if we can use it for the third book, but I don't know if the style would be too sharp a break from what we did for 'Eolyn' and 'High Maga'.

Which brings up another point about covers - if you're running a series, the covers have to tie together somehow. So choose that first design carefully, as you might be stuck with the same concept for a while. When I wrote 'Eolyn', I didn't plan on writing a sequel, much less two. So the first cover was put together without any thought given to the overall 'cover design arc' (so to speak) for the series.

Of course, if you have the time & the means, you can always go back and redo the covers for earlier books. A new cover for 'Eolyn' is part of my wish list for 2015.

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(20 replies, posted in Fantasy World Builders)

There's some great information in this thread. 

My case is a little different because my publisher chose the artists, although I was allowed to work closely with them in determining the cover art. The artwork for 'Eolyn' was done by Jesse Smolover; 'High Maga' (front and back) was done by Thomas Vandenberg. I was especially pleased with Tom's work and hope to snag him again for 'Daughter of Aithne'.

The cover for my Kindle short story 'Creatures of Light' features a painting by 17th century artist Claudio Lorraine. I think it's useful to trowel through the classic artists when considering your cover art. They may not have dragons or elves in their paintings, but often the themes and settings are period-appropriate for fantasy. They lend a very professional look to your cover. AND many of those works are public domain, so you can use them for free.

When I started posting 'Daughter of Aithne' for critique on tNBW, I put together a quick-and-dirty cover using the artwork of Edmund Blair Leighton ('The Accolade', 1901). This is a public domain work too, so while I intend this cover only for internal use on tNBW, it could probably be adapted for an ebook as well.

But, like I said, I'm hoping to snag Tom again for some original cover art when the time comes.

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(4 replies, posted in Fantasy World Builders)

My characters motivate me, especially the sexy/dangerous/complex ones. I'm always looking forward to getting back to them and figuring out the next stage of their journey.

I get a lot of motivation from feedback & critique groups, whether positive or negative. Just knowing someone out there is reading the story keeps me going.

Getting outside, and especially into wilderness, always refreshes my imagination.

And music. Lots of different kinds of music, it just depends on the mood I'm in.

I have a very tight schedule with my work, so I can usually set aside about 1-2 hours per week to write on the computer. The rest of my "write time" consists of mulling over scenes & chapters during the morning commute, or whenever I have a moment of down time.

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(10 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

I'm working on Daughter of Aithne, which is the 3rd and final installment of a romantic fantasy series. I'm working toward a late 2015 release, but we'll see.  I'd appreciate any feedback you all have to give. If you haven't read the first 2 books, no problem; I'd like to see if this one can stand on its own.

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(13 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

claddaghdragon wrote:

I have question. What if a person could be in love with two people at the same time? Not lust or sex, just truly in love.

Let me recommend: 'The Lions of Al Rassan' by Guy Gavriel Kay.

To your question, I would say 'yes', but it has to be managed with care when crafting a story. And also, as Janet T pointed out, sooner or later a choice often has to be made.

I think this will be a fun discussion & look forward to seeing that thread. smile

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(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

If I delete a review from the My Reviews list, does it disappear altogether?

Yes, if you delete it, it is gone. There is no function right now to remove something from the list without deleting it.

Thanks, Sol. That's good to know. I will keep my fingers off that button, then.

And in that case, I second Norm's request for a little check box somewhere. Thanks so much for following up on this.

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(6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Actually, this was exactly the concern I had when I asked about the delete function on the "My Reviews" page. It occurred to me that I could use that delete function as a way to remove from the list reviews with edits that I've already incorporated. But of course, what I do NOT want to do is delete the review entirely from the system. Hence my question:

If I delete a review from the My Reviews list, does it disappear altogether?

(I will go back & remove that other thread I started, because the two questions are linked & I think Sol can address them both at once here.)

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(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I've run into this problem too. I get notices for new reviews before they're actually done, and then if I open up an unfinished review, it disappears. I hope I did not erase my reviewers work by doing this! Until the bug is fixed, it occurs to me that it might help to avoid opening up a new in-line review until the closing comment is displayed - indicating the review is finished.

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(19 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I LOVE the in-line review option; for me it's probably the best feature of the new site. As a reviewer, it makes the process go much faster since (as Mariana already pointed out) I don't have to copy and paste every little piece I want to comment on. As a writer, it facilitates so much more valuable feedback from other authors. 

I wholeheartedly agree we should probably have a mechanism for excluding in-line reviews, if an author does not want them. I will always do an in-line by default; I would hate to waste the author's time and mine by using a review format they will not find useful.

A print and/or see-it-all-at-once option would also be useful, but until now I haven't run into any issues taking advantage of in-line reviews as they are in order to revise my work. 

Thanks, Sol, for setting up this great new format for reviewing!

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(4 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Hello PByrd - Just to answer your question, yes most of the edits I found were in the first part of the chapter. The only comment I had on the last part was the general one about the final dialogue between Jarad and Ethan; that it took a little more work than I like to put in as a reader to recognize who was saying what. I think you can fix this with simple dialogue tags (shy away from the choreography of what they are doing and just use he said/he said), and maybe developing subtle cues in the language of each character that will help the reader tell them apart.

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(12 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Hi Everyone!

My name is Karin. Once upon a time on tNBW, I was known as Rita. Some people still call me that.

I write fantasy heavily laced with romance. I love writing about LUV! I'm very excited that a Romance group has started and I look forward to getting to know everyone's work.

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(24 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Wow! It's getting warm in here.

I don't particularly like explicit sex scenes, but I do like stories that incorporate sex as an integral part of the human experience, and especially as part of amorous relationships.

When writing a sex scene, I tend to gloss over the details and focus on the emotional experience of the characters. I figure the reader's imagination can go places I might not, so I'm comfortable letting them fill in the blanks.

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(24 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Hi Amy! Your reviews are really helpful, especially since you haven't read the first 2 books. You help me keep track of what needs to be explained for the newcomer. I am a little ornery when it comes to receiving reviews; my first reaction is often to argue almost every point. But the arguments are more about me working through the logic of what I want to do & how best to do it, then any real criticism of the review itself. I always find a way to change what I'm doing and (hopefully) make it better, based on what the reviewers flag. So, I don't think it really matters if you see my comments on your comments. I worked up some new edits on Ch 2 based on your feedback, and posted those today.

I haven't put up chapter 3 yet, but should in another day or so. I will probably be posting once a week from here to the end of the year; more often once we get into January/February.  I'm so glad you found my feedback useful. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

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(24 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I guess I should add that I can't really have Ghemena do this alone, as it would violate the culture of the magas and strain (perhaps even violate) the limits of their magical system. Magas are social creatures; they run and work in packs whenever possible.

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(24 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Good points, Amy. I've tried to address this in the current draft posted this morning. The maga's names are: Ghemena, Nicola, and Ireny. The princess is Eliasara.  "Nicola" replaces "Giana", which I have thought for a long time is much too similar to Ghemena.

Ghemena and Eliasara are characters established in the previous book, so for returning readers they'll only have 2 new names to keep track of. I do maintain (or try to maintain) a strong pov inside Ghemena, so hopefully that will help as well.

Really appreciate your feedback.

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(217 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Hi Sol!

I don't seem to be able to send messages to my contacts.  When I click "send a message" I get a blue message window, but there is no place to write the message. If I click "send message" the window closes & nothing seems to happen.

I LOVE the in-line review feature, by the way. That is working for me without a hitch & makes the review process go much faster. Overall the new site has been a lot of fun.

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(24 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Hooray! My own thread.
Amy, I really appreciated your very detailed review of the prologue. Already incorporated some of your edits & suggestions this afternoon. (Normally I'm not that efficient, but had some unexpected time on my hands...) I'll definitely look forward to any additional edits you have.

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(26 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Thanks, Janet & Amy.  It's nice to be here. smile