Review done. Warning: when I review you I beat you up pretty hard. I hope some of it helps.
Thanks, njc! I really appreciate it.
Review done. Warning: when I review you I beat you up pretty hard. I hope some of it helps.
Thanks, njc! I really appreciate it.
Hey Everyone -
I could use some fresh eyes on the prologue for Daughter of Aithne. I really want this opening sequence to crackle off the page, and am working hard to smooth out the prose & make it so. The link is here:
http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … ok-3-14180
I've reposted, so even if you reviewed an earlier version, you can earn points by commenting on this one.
Thanks!
Hey Everyone -
I could use some fresh eyes on the prologue for Daughter of Aithne. I really want this opening sequence to crackle off the page, and am working hard to smooth out the prose & make it so. The link is here:
http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … ok-3-14180
I've reposted, so even if you reviewed an earlier version, you can earn points by commenting on this one.
Thanks!
Well, I think the possibilities are limitless with Central American and South American mythology. I had the opportunity to visit Peru many years back, and it's one of the most magical places I've been to. The burial site of the Lord of Sipán (a Moche ruler) inspired some of the early chapters of my second novel, High Maga. Honestly, you could put your story anywhere in Latin America at almost any point in history, and you'd have oodles to work with. I'm very excited about your ideas! Keep us posted.
Thanks njc. I'll bookmark those. I'll looking for a little inspiration.
I'm thinking about doing something that has a south american feel but the problem is....I really don't know what that means.
Anywhere in particular in South America? Have you been there? I think Central and South America would be an awesome setting for a fantasy story. (The main character of my short story Lamya of the Sea is loosely inspired by Andean culture.) There is, of course, tons of magical realism coming out of America. Isabel Allende, Gabriel Garcia Marquez, and most especially Jorge Luis Borges would be good authors to look at for Latin American-style magical themes.
Guy Gavriel Kay has done a good job of stepping out of the classic medieval setting. "The Lions of Al Rassan" is set in a world inspired by Al Andalus - technically still medieval Europe, but my impression is that Spain ruled by the Moors is not a typical fantasy setting. His new novel "Under Heaven", set in Tang Dynasty China, is on my TBR list.
Erin Morgenstern's "The Night Circus", my new favorite novel and also a title that is quickly gaining popularity, is set in late 19th century Europe and America. No swords, but lots and lots of magic.
N.K. Jemisin's "Inheritance Trilogy" is set in a world entirely of her own making. Very difficult to pin it down to a particular period or place that is earth-like. I've only read the first book, but I really enjoyed it.
Those are a few examples. For lesser-known titles, I would recommend Terri-Lynne DeFino's FINDER, set in a Mediterranean-like world complete with swords, magic, and dragons.
I haven't read Saladin Ahmed's novel, but it's been on my TBR list for quite a while. I hope to get around to it soon.
Always too much to read and too little time...
Now to put this baby on steroids!
As mentioned in my earlier post, genetic engineering of humans will be banned some time in the next few hundred years because of too many unintended side effects, including Apollo's incurable Trembler's disease. I was hoping to make the cause for the ban huge, big enough to scare the human race from ever resuming engineering on humans.
Specifically, I've always wondered if it was possible to genetically engineer ourselves into sterility that doesn't show for a few generations. Billions of people potentially becoming evolutionary dead ends. Probably the result of providing resistance against an ebola-like worldwide epidemic. The unintended consequence would be a great reason for a universal ban. They'll call it God's Law (i.e., don't mess with creation).
Can anyone envision a scenario as to how that might work?
Thanks.
Dirk
Dirk, I'd suggest looking at how "terminator technology" works in genetically modified crops. This is genetic modification that kills seeds, rendering GM crops infertile. It was intentionally introduced as a mechanism to keep GM crops from reproducing themselves. GM technology has also been used to produce sterile insects. For example, to control mosquitoes, GM males are released and mate with females. The resulting offspring (larvae) produce a toxin early in their development that results in self-destruction, thereby reducing the mosquito population. Given the cascade effects discussed earlier, I think you could build on these examples and come up with an idea as to how genetic modification in humans might inadvertently lead to sterility.
Note that in both cases mentioned (crops and insects), sterility results not from a lack of gametes (sperm & egg), but from the offspring dying prematurely. This could be a particularly nasty kind of sterility to incorporate in a work of fiction, where what the human population experiences is massive miscarriages, and perhaps some terrible side effects for the mothers, because the fetuses are producing a toxin that causes death.
Looks like njc's got you covered, Dirk. Good luck!
I used Scrivener for novel #3, and am using it now for novel #4. I like it a lot, BUT I would qualify that by saying it works for me because it's set up in a way that easily accommodates my own organizational habits when it comes to writing. Also, exporting to Word, which has to happen sooner or later, is not exactly seamless. It's very important to go back through the compiled word document and make sure everything is formatted the way you want it to be.
What is the nature of the mental illness?
I saw this a while back. Too cool.
A lot of what I write is inspired by true life experiences. To some extent, my experiences, but more often than not, the life stories of other people who are close to me, particularly family members both past and present. Interestingly enough, I often don't recognize these connections until after I've written the story.
For example, many elements of my second novel HIGH MAGA were inspired by stories of the women in my family who survived WWII Germany. I don't know how I didn't see this from the very beginning, but the novel was finished and published before it dawned on me where it all came from.
A short story that I recently posted on tNBW, Lamya of the Sea, was inspired by my great-great grandmother. I never met her, but I've heard stories about her from my father. She immigrated to the States with her sister in the 19th century, and never spoke to any of her family about the life they left behind. Recently my father discovered the single link he had to her past on the internet; an estate where she lived as a girl. Why she and her sister abandoned that life and crossed the Atlantic, we'll never know. It seems remarkable to me, given the time period, and the fact that they were two young women all alone. Something desperate must have driven them forward. The mystery has always intrigued me, so I spun it into a fantasy story and "Lamya of the Sea" was born.
Congratulations to everyone! What a great selection of authors and stories.
I've been on wattpad for a while. When I really put in effort to be part of the "group" I had a lot of reads on my book. But I never knew if it translated into sales. It was a lot of effort to keep up and for the most part your not likely to get many reads unless you are willing to also join the group discussions, and exchanges. I know a few people who have had success, but then again they are willing to put in the time and effort.
Thanks penang! This is very helpful.
This report is interesting, but I interpret it with caution. The agency that published it seems to be closely associated with (if not owned by) Amazon, so it's very likely they've packaged the data to prove their own point. If the data is real, and the Big 5 didn't earn as much on ebooks as they could have, I'm certain the Big 5 will take notice and adjust accordingly. They are watching the numbers, too.
I've had the Wattpad option spinning around in my head for a while. Has anyone used it? What's been your experience?
For anyone who is interested, I'm setting up a blog tour exchange system in the Marketing Your Work group. The exchange is free and open to anyone who has a blog and is willing to host other writers. Check out the details here:
Hi Everyone!
Okay, I’ve been thinking about this for a while and would like to go ahead and try to set up a blog tour exchange for tNBW authors. The exchange will be hosted here, for the time being. Use this thread to post an announcement when you are ready to organize your blog tour.
PLEASE READ ALL THE INFORMATION BELOW BEFORE USING THIS EXCHANGE.
Your announcement should posted in this thread, and include the following information:
• Name of your tour (This can be as simple as the title of the book you want to promote)
• Promotional goal (For example: celebrate a new release, grow my audience for an existing title, run a giveaway, etc.)
• Target audience (Genre of your work and/or the type of readers you think would be most interested)
• Dates of the tour (A date range is fine; I’d recommend 2-8 weeks for a successful tour)
• Book blurb and/or links to the titles you want to promote
• Email address and/or link to a page where hosting authors can sign up to be a part of your tour (See IMPORTANT RULES OF THE GAME, below.)
• Types of posts you are interested in doing (interview, guest post, promo, etc.)
IMPORTANT RULES OF THE GAME:
• To participate in the blog exchange, you must have a blog. Just like our review system on tNBW, this exchange functions on the principle of reciprocation. If you are hosted by authors in the exchange, you must also be willing to host other authors on your blog.
• Use this thread ONLY to announce your tour. Do NOT organize the details of your tour (specific dates, stops, topics, etc.) on this thread. In your announcement, please provide an email or link where authors can contact you if they are interested in hosting. All subsequent coordination of the tour should happen through that email or link.
This is a bit of an experiment, so we will see how it goes. And we may modify things going forward to help smooth out the process. Until the exchange gathers steam, I strongly recommend that you use this opportunity to compliment other tools for organizing your blog tour (for example, your established on-line networks, blog tour providers, and so forth). Otherwise, you may end up with distressingly few stops on your tour.
All feedback is welcome. Good luck!
What Nicolas said.
My publisher Hadley Rille Books uses Lightning Source. I had a brief inside look at LS a year ago when my editor had a stroke and many of the final tasks of getting HIGH MAGA to press fell to me. LS is a pain, and they screwed us over in a major way through mis-communication, just as we were getting up to the deadline my release. As a last-minute solution, we printed the book through Create Space. I found them very user friendly, but all I did was upload the formatted and edited document, and the finished cover. We also had the ISBN ready to go; no need to purchase through CS. In other words, as a printing option it works great, but all the other tasks of bringing a book to press - editing, formatting, cover art & design, etc. - are probably best handled through other channels.
My editor still strongly prefers Lightning Source, as he believes it doesn't carry the "self-published" stigma of Create Space. But in my mind, no one who buys the book is going to care where it was printed. Book stores look to distributors (such as Ingram), not to the printer, for their purchases. LS does have a wider distribution than CS, but since most of my paperback sales have been on line anyway, that's not a big issue for me.
I think reviews are the single most important factor in convincing a reader to by a book. All kinds of marketing tools can drive the reader to the purchase link, but what convinces them to BUY is the feedback of other readers.
All reviews help, even bad reviews. Most bad reviews, in my experience, are not "this was a bad book", but rather "this book wasn't for me because (fill in the blank)". Oftentimes, what one reader doesn't like (e.g., too dark, too happy, not romantic enough, too weird for my taste, etc.) another reader will drink up. So, ALL reviews help because they tend to capture the kind of reader who is right for your book. AND the more readers you catch that match your target audience, the more likely they are to recommend your book to similar readers (and write a good review of their own!)
Soliciting reviews is extraordinarily frustrating, but it is well worth the effort. Be aware that most of your solicitations will receive no response or be rejected. That's just the way it goes. You can solicit through book blogs, but I've also seen authors do an open call for "beta readers" through their networks on FB and Twitter, and give away free advanced reading ecopies to anyone who promises to provide a fair and honest review.
If there are print copies of your book available, you can also do a Goodreads Giveaway. Winners of the giveaway will often write a review.
Other excellent sources for reviews: Your critique partners on tNBW or from your other writers groups. And friends!!! Don't be afraid to ask. Many of your friends might not do it, but some will, and every review does make a difference.
Sol, in your FB ads did you link directly to the Amazon page for the book?
I may have to try FB ads again. I used them years ago when my first novel came out, but was never quite convinced they were working. One thing that's been hard for me is to connect any particular marketing effort directly to a spike in sales. I try to do some marketing all the time, and always an extra push leading up to and during the release.
Kayleigh & Susan - Happy to see you here! I remember I got a lot of sound marketing tips out of the old forums, so I hope we can get something similar going here.
Everyone - remember to invite all your connections to join the group. The more the merrier!
Hi!
Finally caught up with this thread again. Here's my comment copied from the Writing Tips thread (as promised):
I've used several tour companies: Bewitching Book Tours, Orangeberry, and the Masquerade Crew. All of them have had their strengths & weaknesses. I think it's really important to pick a tour option that will connect you to book blogs frequented by your target audience; otherwise, you'll be paying for a lot of exposure to all the wrong readers.
My favorite tour option for my fantasy series has been The Magic Appreciation Tour. This is not a company, but a network of magical fantasy authors who are willing to host each other for blog tours. You do some of the legwork yourself in terms of lining up dates & sites, but it's free of charge and in my case, hits just the audience I'm looking for.
In the context of the new marketing group, perhaps we could set up a similar exchange among interested members? Just a thought. I regularly host many of the authors I've met through tNBW on my blog, and would be happy to host more.
Congratulations, Madison! I remember the early drafts of this book. I really enjoyed it! I'm so happy for you and for all the readers about to discover your work. Hugs and sparkles!
I'll repost this comment when the conversation is moved to the new marketing group.
I've used several tour companies: Bewitching Book Tours, Orangeberry, and the Masquerade Crew. All of them have had their strengths & weaknesses. I think it's really important to pick a tour option that will connect you to book blogs frequented by your target audience; otherwise, you'll be paying for a lot of exposure to all the wrong readers.
My favorite tour option for my fantasy series has been The Magic Appreciation Tour. This is not a company, but a network of magical fantasy authors who are willing to host each other for blog tours. You do some of the legwork yourself in terms of lining up dates & sites, but it's free of charge and in my case, hits just the audience I'm looking for.
In the context of the new marketing group, perhaps we could set up a similar exchange among interested members? Just a thought. I regularly host many of the authors I've met through tNBW on my blog, and would be happy to host more.