1,676 2016-06-07 21:49:47
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
1,677 2016-06-07 13:35:21
Re: Places to Find Reference Reading II (19 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Yeah, there is some self promotion in MGC. Isn't self-promotion every writer's responsibility?
Charles, Freer also notes that L'Amour maintained a single PoV, rigourously. This argues against lack of craftsmanship, and for the idea that L'Amour had a different sense of what is done well and what is done ill.
I can enjoy Beethoven's Grosse Fuge, and have enjoyed it immensely. I also enjoy the music from Les Miserable. It's not the same craftsmanship and art as Beethoven, and the composer made a big change of technique, building the whole work around the interval of the fourth instead of the fifth. The musical fate of that interval tracks the fate of the protagonist.
That more people rather than fewer can enjoy a thing, and will pay for it (giving up the fruits of their labor in trade for it) should not be taken to mean that the thing is a poorer piece of work. The Grosse Fuge is a greater work than the score for Les Mis, but this is in spite of its difficulty, not because of it.
1,678 2016-06-07 09:38:10
Re: Places to Find Reference Reading II (19 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
From today's Mad Genius Club, By Dave Freer:
So: what did L’Amour do right? Besides appeal to a lot of people: why? I over-analyze everything – I looked L’Amour and the cowboy genre in general when I was setting out to be a writer. Several stick out points, stylistically, are worth noticing. Sentences are generally short, shorter on action. There is a lot of action, non-action is often covered by narrator-style ‘telling’ rather than showing (the books read well aloud. You can almost imagine parts as a fireside yarn). The books themselves are short – often as little as 130 pages or less. They’re usually single point of view (trust me this is actually hard to do well). The successful authors had distinctive ‘voices’ – some of which I pinned on dialogue choice.
(Italics mine ---NJC)
1,679 2016-06-06 23:25:56
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
So dey ain't no dry bones? Whooo, I didn't see that, no I didn't.
Troll's still there and he don't care, with the bone that he boned from its owner.
1,680 2016-06-05 12:08:57
Re: Places to Find Reference Reading II (19 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Everything the man does is YUUGE. Eversomuch Moreso.
1,681 2016-06-04 20:27:05
Re: Places to Find Reference Reading II (19 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Worldbuilding, guest article on Sarah Hoyt's blog.
1,682 2016-06-03 18:11:23
Re: Places to Find Reference Reading II (19 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
In defense of the adverb--what the durn'd things ARE good for. From The Passive Guy.
1,683 2016-06-03 13:00:59
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
So those hundreds of notes are collected (mostly; new ones arrive daily) but not yet organized. Notes I have, up the wazoo. In fact, I'm gonna need a new wazoo soon.
But I may be near the point of progress on Maurand, Day Two.
1,684 2016-06-03 06:04:23
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
There should be a payoff in Yunker putting all he knows into use at once, for good or ill.
You do know that you'll need to plan a boxed set, right?
1,685 2016-06-03 04:07:04
Re: The Colorless Dragon Thread (354 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
You shouldn't be a techie. You should be a manager. Managers get up early so they can boss us around. Techies stay late trying to figure out how to do what the bosses want--and they prefer to work after the bosses go home because the bosses like nothing more than to keep the techies tied up in meetings stroking their nefarious egos.
/2.718... . (That denominator is the limit [as n goes to zero] of the nth root of ( 1 + n ). A most wonderful number.)
1,686 2016-06-02 02:17:37
Re: The Colorless Dragon Thread (354 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
It gets better after a few days####weeks#####months######years.
1,687 2016-06-02 02:15:50
Re: Strongest Start-Review Replies (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I hope things get better, Dags ... and please don't treat his as pressure--unless that helps!
1,688 2016-06-01 05:41:23
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Meanwhile, what have I been doing? I'm supposed to be working on Day 2 of Merran's time with Maurand's family. Instead I've been (starting on) getting my hundreds of small thematic and plot device/structure notes in order. I'm also thinking about what has to happen shortly after Merran and Jamen leave with Pausonallie.
This matters because there's a lot to write downstream, and I may have hundreds of thousands of words that will depend in some measure on details I set up now. I can't get everything laid out or I won't be able to get anything written, but I need to be sure I don't close things that should be open, or open too wide things that should be closed. I also need some sense of what's going to happen in the next three to four books.
So, among other things, I'm trying to lay out what one or two non-Kirsey back entrances to the Academy look and feel like.
1,689 2016-05-30 16:22:43
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Oh, maybe you can have Petra tell Jaylene what Jaylene needs to know about emptying the souls that give strength to the Horror, either the direct fact or something Jaylene can figure it out from. That would mean beginning the next chapter within the Lance.
1,690 2016-05-30 10:24:26
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Then plan a great ending later for her, pehaps via her Lance-held soul. Let her help with a key step in this book or the final one. Maybe even let us see Behira claim her. She can be the cavalry over the metaphorical hill.
1,691 2016-05-30 03:48:02
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
How about something that disturbs the physics that your ships depend on for propulsion or communication? Maybe disturb their internal artificial gravity? Trigger infrasonics or infrasonic-modulated internal light displays inside a ship before boarding so the defenders are all busy tossing their cookies?
1,692 2016-05-29 10:35:51
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
FYI, for some part of today and maybe tomorrow, Mad Genius Club's Kindle editions are up for free or at dollar or two-dollar discounts. Several of them are start-of-series teasers.
I just read Kate Paulk's ConVent and some of the combat scenes might be useful studies for this group--very different in pacing and event structure than anything we do. (Okay, I can't speak for NormD.) Unfortunately, that's a dollar book ... limited time only.
1,693 2016-05-28 15:07:32
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
In Craig Shaw Gardiner's =Ebenezum= series, the eponymous mage runs afoul of a rhyming demon named Guxx Unfafaddo, who finds a spell that makes Ebenezum allergic to his own magic. After a volume or two, Ebenezum returns the favor and the rhyming demon is reduced to blank verse. Whenever a rhyme slips in, the magic of Guxx Unfafaddo goes rhyming-demon haywire. That's the brobdingnagian sort of wire that gets tangled in a brobdingnagian sort of hay-baler.
The likely link between the Brat (Naughty, Naughty Girl) that Airen indulges in and the irregular home in which she grew up had me wondering whether you crafted that link deliberately.
1,694 2016-05-28 12:59:38
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
In re Slow Chapters: Slow does not mean uninteresting, especially when Airen gives her opinion of her mother in very plain language. How much did Marion's character and Airen's coming-to-terms with it shape the Brat? Airen's a fascinating character and I suggest playing her a little more strongly when you can.
(And what did her Mage With An Itch remark allude to? Dr. Freud would like to know ... )
1,695 2016-05-25 04:31:15
Re: NorthernSkies or NS - Janet (213 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
amy s wrote:I plan to write alternate endings and let people pick.
I pick the one where they're celebrating at the end and then a Mar shows up unexpectedly and eats everyone.
I pick the one where the Mar shows up and Tazar and Alda execute Plan 4
1,696 2016-05-24 05:22:50
Re: NorthernSkies or NS - Janet (213 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
But ... still something remains undisclosed.
1,697 2016-05-23 08:06:58
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
A plan, I have, to Easter-egg one of the most outrageous and iconic conspiracy theories of the age. I could tell you what it is, but if the conspiritheorists are right you wouldn't be able to read ..... anyway. And not all of it will come in Book 2.
1,698 2016-05-23 01:41:42
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
A couple more days on Day 2. I do want a contrast between what Mamma expects and how Merran actually manages.
1,699 2016-05-23 00:30:49
Re: NorthernSkies or NS - Janet (213 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Actually, it's from Steelman (Green).
1,700 2016-05-22 21:25:07
Re: NorthernSkies or NS - Janet (213 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
A small (groundhog meat) correction on that Standardese quote: A =type derived by a derived type definition= may be further derived if the derived type is used as parent type in another derived type definition.