Or Star Trek mirror universe.
1,277 2016-10-13 00:17:56
Re: Snuck vs Sneaked (186 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
An excess of long words marks the writer with the taint of bureaucracy.
"Short words are best and the old words, when short, are best of all." ---Churchill
1,278 2016-10-13 00:10:40
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Hmmm. A challenge of English Composition, I'd call it.
It sounds like AJCIII is the topic, but it also sounds like you're beginning a chapter or scene, which means that you don''t have to make AJCIII the topic all at once. You can develop the relationships and people as settings before settling on AJCIII.
Four ((royal?)) half-brothers sat ((waited?)) in the game room of Earth's Imperial Palace.
Caligula was eight; the twins Romulus and Remus were six. All three were illegitimate, so seven-year-old Apollo Julius Caesar III was Heir to the Imperium Romanun.
Or
Four ((royal?)) half-brothers sat ((waited?)) in the game room of Earth's Imperial Palace.
Caligula was eight and illegitimate; the twins Romulus and Remus were six and illegitimate. That left seven-year-old Apollo Julius Caesar III as Heir to the Imperium Romanun.
That last paragraph reads a little like Agatha Christie, I think.
Hope This Helps.
1,279 2016-10-12 23:59:01
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
They're allowed.
The danger came from the first generation of digital phones which used time-division multiplexing in the modulation scheme. They transmitted twenty sharp signal pulses a second, and the 'envelope' of those transmissions was picked up by every low-power electronic circuit for twenty feet or more.
Today, everything involves some variation of CDMA. Code-division is a modulation scheme that uses a steady stream of very-low-power pulses scattered across the signal band. It doesn't interfere with anything else except CDMA on the same band, and that interference limits the (large) number of transmissions in the band.
CDMA isn't the end of the story. The modulation scheme for 4G-LTE blows my mind, and I know a little about the subject. Look it up in WikiP.
1,280 2016-10-12 23:51:06
Re: Snuck vs Sneaked (186 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
'Snuck?' It's in there with the likes of; hound dawg, afeared, cuss, high-falutin, mom, gal, nohow, holler, yeehaw etc. etc.
These word 'belong' to different communities, but they have been borrowed. Moreover, their meanings differ. 'cuss' as a verb does not have the same meaning as the noun in "He's a sour old cuss."
If I wanted my character to come across as articulate and intelligent, they'd see you sneak or would report that you sneaked.
If I want my character to appear less educated or less articulate (or a US hillbilly/Trailer-trash/redneck), you would have snuck.
I might sneak out of here, and you might have snuck away; no matter because I'm not challenging its validity as a word, merely noting that to many, it sounds dumb. It signals dumb; telegraphs dumbness.
To many people, 'dumb' is a near synonym for 'not like me'. Chesterton somewhere has Father Brown say, "When a scientist talks about a type, he means his neighbor, and usually his poorer neighbor."
I remember a phone conversation with an HP support representative: "It reports Error number ((whatever)). Error number ((whatever)) is listed as a Floating Point Exception. Well, there ain't no floating point in there!" It got a laugh from the other side, but it also drove the point home.
Yes, our speech tells people things about us, but if that's its purpose, we're misusing it. We're putting ourselves ahead of the message we bring. I don't think that says anything good about the character of the speaker. But then, maybe I don't know much about the subject.
1,281 2016-10-12 03:43:00
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Not sure if this will help you: https://accordingtohoyt.com/2016/10/08/research/ .
1,282 2016-10-12 02:54:43
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm thinking more of the rogue e coli.
WikiP says that MRSA can be vulnerable to doxycyline.
I expect and intend to pay double for double washing.
1,283 2016-10-12 02:49:40
Re: Snuck vs Sneaked (186 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
What you call irregular I call fully inflected. I take delight in knowing the proper past tense of 'sh*t', and in the branch of fandom that makes the plural of 'fan' 'fen'.
Where would You're a Mean One, Mr. Grinch be without "Stink, stank, stunk!" ?
1,284 2016-10-12 01:28:41
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm home. (I've been home for over an hour now, but I had to start to unpack, and to take the first doxycycline, and to take some phone calls.
Tomorrow I have to get some stuff early to the laundry and cleaners. The laundry will have instructions to wash hot with double detergent--and what can't be washed hot will be washed twice. Now I need to rest and do some very minimal cleaning. I also need to make follow-up appointments.
1,285 2016-10-11 23:53:42
Re: Snuck vs Sneaked (186 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Watch out for earthquakes and tsunamis. Charles and I agree!
1,286 2016-10-11 21:45:21
Re: Snuck vs Sneaked (186 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I'm the New York variety of hillbilly and I grew up with 'snuck'.
1,287 2016-10-11 17:46:32
Re: Snuck vs Sneaked (186 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I prefer 'snuck'. The vowel change is easier and clearer than two successive stops.
1,288 2016-10-11 04:10:55
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
To answer some questions:
No, I'm not home yet. Tuesday, for sure. (Really.) I should have been discharged today, but the various doctors and paperwork didn't mesh to get me out at a reasonable hour.
Yes, it was serious. It started with what was probably the nasty strain of e coli in the digestive tract, which allowed an opportunistic staphlococcus aureous (correct my spelling, Amy) deep tissue infection in my right leg. The fallout from the e coli made it hard for me to get to the hospital, and I got there just as the staph infection was increasing explosively.
Of course, they echo'd the leg to be sure it wasn't a blockage. The sonagram looked good until a vascular surgeon took a look. He found that the flow rates were not changing with my breathing, a sign of partial venous blockage. He went in through right interior jugular with an ultrasound probe and found May-Thurner's syndrome, the result of one of the femoral arteries squeezing down the left iliac vein. (All this is in the pelvic area.) The vein was 70% occluded. He used a balloon catheter, then put a stent in. There's also some occlusion on the right, but not enough to justify intervention now, and maybe there never will be. I have to see him in two to three weeks.
So, the vancomycin is over, I'm on ten days of doxycyline (Amy, my spelling) and I have to clean up the mess left in my house by the e coli infection. There's a few other loose ends, but I'll not bore you.
Oh, and I'm a horrible vein stick, especially if you want to put a catheter in. My veins are like angel hair pasta al dente swimming in alfredo sauce. They move when you poke them. (At least two nurses here have endorsed that description.) I must still have a nice fat layer under my stiffening skin. I've coined two phrases: vein angel (the nurse who always gets her vein) and 'no pain, no vein'. The staff on the floor like them (but I'm sure they'll keep the second one to themselves).
I've got big purple splotches around some of the failed vein sticks.
1,289 2016-10-11 02:48:41
Re: Matthew Abelack's novel, Krudges: The Girl Who Lost the Earth (22 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)
Got it.
1,290 2016-10-10 22:34:46
Re: Titles in The Pendragon and The Beast of Caer Baddan (206 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
njc wrote:Draigh?
I'm not sure you need to change Orson. Maybe change the second vowel, or double the 'n'?Not sure.
"Draigh" looks too Anglicized (Germanized?) to me (like my name last name "Vaughn") strangely so does "Orsonn" (although there are double "n"s used in Brithonic).
Then I vote for Draich and Orsius. (I take it the latter name is to be of Latin origin?)
1,291 2016-10-10 18:30:26
Re: Discussion of Jube's novel, World Of Phyries (49 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)
I just added a comment or two to my last review.
1,292 2016-10-10 13:01:15
Re: Matthew Abelack's novel, Krudges: The Girl Who Lost the Earth (22 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)
Matthew, I'm going to do a couple chapters of your book next. Do you want me to review the first two chapters, or to start somewhere else?
1,293 2016-10-10 01:25:03
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Abccissa and coversine
1,294 2016-10-10 00:39:15
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Santa Klaus (Wolfenbach, that is.)
1,295 2016-10-09 11:34:54
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
1,296 2016-10-08 23:31:57
Re: Please post here regarding a completed review (671 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)
State of Vengeance, Ch's 46 and 47.
1,297 2016-10-08 22:40:13
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
1,298 2016-10-08 01:27:25
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Mystery meat word. http://www.girlgeniusonline.com/comic.php?date=20090914
1,299 2016-10-08 01:21:10
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm up to it and have nothing better to do except the reviews lined up ahead of you. Problem is, I don't have a keyboard. I'm working on the phone's touch screen. I'd hoped to get that fixed today, but there's a good chance it can happen tomorrow.
1,300 2016-10-07 22:46:57
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
This time it's Vancomycin. The ER added Nosym, but the ID specialist dropped it.