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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

You were the guy who sat on the dorm porch with a slingshot, lighing firecrackers off your cigar before you let them fly ....

3,102

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I've probably soldered 5,000 connections, and desoldered maybe 800, and I've never had to put a fire out.

Part of the credit goes to the electronics industry and the safety standards they meet with self-extinguishing and flame-retardent materials, but the point is made.  Landlords should forbid deep-frying chicken, not low-energy hobby electronics.

3,103

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Deep frying any food in a pan.  You're heating a pint or more of flammable oil to within 70 or 80 degrees of its smoke point.  (That's for new oil.  Used oil has a lower smoke point.)  Then you're putting food in that contains moisture, resulting in bubbling and spatter, and the spatter will land a few inches from an ignition source.

3,104

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

What I'd like to argue is that nothing I have or do is as dangerous as frying chicken.

3,105

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Fire inspectors, it seems.

3,106

(36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I just looked at Rosebud Lives by Adrian Langford.  I opened the first inline review (mobile interface).  About the first half of the items showed up with expansions.  The others I had to click on.

3,107

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Mobile interface: I press the menu button and enter a title in the searchbox.  I touch on the magnifying glass and get buttons for writer search/posting search.  I click on posting an the background color of that buttons changes.  I get a listing of writers, no postings.

3,108

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

KHippolite wrote:
njc wrote:

By the way, I did put up a rather bland 'chapter' in Book 2, called 'A Missing Copper'.  I'm not sure where this will happen, or whether it will go exactly this way, but it does give some hints about character future.

Where are the non-bland and the equally-bland chapters of book 2?

What, you never saw Mr. Blandings Builds His Dream House?

3,109

(2 replies, posted in Fantasy World Builders)

Asimov was a master of naming.  The Foundation series is particularly good.

3,110

(36 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Nice.  'X' for eXpanded?  I think I'll take off my request to others not to inline their reviews.

Have the problems with overlapping comment zones been fixed?

Now, can we have a setting to put the X-display up as a personal default?

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(9 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Congratulations to Adrian.  I thought he had a strong entry.  He was in my top four.  (So was I.)

Followup thought on the last review you did for me: When you find a logic bomb or plot hole, treat it like a lemon and make lemonade.  Or make it an error a character must learn from.

3,113

(260 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

sarahniyii wrote:

Hi, I'm new and it'd be nice if you give me feedback on my novel. Mercii

Pick a few writers in your genre and review their work.  Some of them will reciprocate.

Norm d'Plume wrote:

One other idea that seems more workable in the short term is to create a kickstarter-like site dedicated to raising money for book writing/publishing/marketing. The best proposals would hopefully get the most funding.

Sol, start coding. :-)

Dirk

Kickstarter is already used for publishing.  The Girl Genuis people (Professor and Professora Foglio of Transylvania Polygnostic U smile ) use it to finance their print collections.  They've got a vid out on the GG site now for their next volume ("We must buy great big barrels of Perfect!").

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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

By the way, I did put up a rather bland 'chapter' in Book 2, called 'A Missing Copper'.  I'm not sure where this will happen, or whether it will go exactly this way, but it does give some hints about character future.

3,116

(74 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I've heard of something called something like MacKinson Triple Stout.  The fellow who described it said it was a bit thicker than motor oil.

3,117

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Book Gardens Florist owns their own building, and the proprietors apparently live right next door.  I've been trying to get a link out of GooMaps, but neither the Android app nor the Web versions on the Android will let me copy-to-paste--if they let me see the link at all.

Anyway, take your favorite mapper, give it 868 Monmouth Road, Cream Ridge NJ, switch to arieal/satellite view, and look for the 50x100 foot building.  The front 15 feet are the florist.  The rest is the book room, eight aisles the length of the space, with nooks and cubbyholes.  The number of shelves varies with the predominant book size, but is at least nine and goes to 13 in sections full of paperbacks.  8 aisles times 85 feet, times two, gives 1360 feet.  Times ten shelves gives 13,600 linear feet of shelf.  At fifteen books per foot (and the width depends heavily on the book size) ... oops, only around 200,000.

Okay, I don't have the computations I did to get 500,000.  But 200,000 is still a lot.

By the way, the original model 747 had more than 1,000,000 rivets, and the design documents weighed more than the plane.

3,118

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Another problem.  I thought the lower brightness from the yellow Platinum Dragon was due (via the workings of the LED) to the higher energy of the wavelength.

Well, the flasher on the compact, first-try-at-real-life-packaging board isn't putting out pulses.  It's trying to hold the LED on for the full 7+ milliseconds, which it cannot do because of the high-pass filter which ensures that the LED isn't held on for too long.

And I have no time to fix it now.  I have to put together a variable-voltage power supply driven off little batteries.  It can be done with one or two transistors in a voltage follower, but if you set up the resistances to prevent overload well you limit your voltage range.  I have a design that switches one of the transistors to its complementary polarity and adds two transistors in a current mirror.  It -should- work but it needs to be assembled and tested and the topology makes a decent layout hard.

I haven't finished going through the financial papers.  I'm about two-thirds through, and I'm getting about 20% that I have to keep because it's IRA/401K.  Of my own papers, I've declared so far that I'm going to keep an inch or so of the two and a half feet I've gone through.  I should have taken the electrical and electronics parts to recycling today, but I got a late start.

The cavernous fire-hazard-in-the-farmland used book store that I hope will take a lot of stuff that I'm comfortable parting with is closed on Monday and Tuesday.  I may need to rent a minivan.  I figure I'll have at least 300lbs of stuff to take--all stuff that I don't mind giving away (except on the principle that I shouldn't have to).  But I'll probably face a demand to dump another 200 volumes, including hardcovers.  I've probably got another 600 lbs of stuff to carry out, and I haven't even looked at clothing I have to move to make room in my closets.

Tuesday I have to paint 15 shelves.  They'll get one coat of gloss black spray, top and bottom, and the knots will stay as they are.  (White pine is cheap and strong enough.)  The electrical recyclables have to go to the township.  The stuff the super recommended to get the soap scum off the plastic tub sort of worked.  It will need at least two more passes, and I'll have to use a brush.

Read the last verses of Burns's To a Mouse.

If you're ever in south-central NJ, you should find Book Garden Florists in Cream Ridge on Rte 537.  (It's southwest of Great Adventure, and in the vicinity of Fort Dix/Naval AS Lakehurst/McGuire AFB.)  My rough estimate is over half a million volumes, categorized but uncatalogued, on homemade shelves in a huge space with many narrow aisles.

3,119

(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

The bedroom gets inspected, too.  If I have the time (doubtful)  I will put together a power supply to run it from a string of AAA batteries.

Apparently the State of NJ is at fault here too.  Another techie is facing the same problem with another landlord.  NJ is treating landlords the way that some towns treat people who drive through: as a revenue source.  And since the inspectors have government pensions, they have a strong incentive to safeguard those accounts.

As far as I'm concerned, birthday candles are more dangerous than my little lab.

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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

I've dropped off the face of the earth because of two pressures.  One I'll keep to myself.  The other is my landlord, who is afraid of upcoming county and state inspections and believes that having a good library of books and a collection of interesting technology is a threat to them.

In fairness, there are some overdue things to be done, but nothing I can say seems to convince them that my little electronics lab isn't going to set the whole township on fire.  If I have to move that completely out of sight, I may have to rent storage for it.  That I have a four-year degree, that electronic parts are among the most fire-retardent things made, and that the UL-listed power supplies are protected against short-circuit seem to make no difference.

There is a discredited approach in programming called Brute Force and Ignorance.  It has a much bigger cousin called Brute Force and Bloody Ignorance.

And they would call the Hope Diamond and the Magna Carta 'clutter' if they were in their living rooms ....

Don't feel you have to follow TW's lead in eliding 'that' or dropping a comma before every new phrase or clause.  She's doctrinaire and rigid on the matter (says the guy she blocked from reading her work).  Trust your ear.

I don't hammer the same points of grammar over and over, nor do I put an iron case over what should be supple and flexible rules.

3,122

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

The new site lets you write a second review.

3,123

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

On a regular review, if you inadvertently type a carriage return/ENTER in the subject field, the entire review is posted, empty or not.

This is probably not expected by the user nor intended by the web designer.

3,124

(342 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

It would be nice if, when reading an ILR, the ESC key would banish the box so you didn't have to click on that tiny X.  Of course, touchscreens, which suffer most of all, don't have an ESC key.   Having the 'present' or 'next' block highlighted so you could move with arrow keys or tab/backtab and open the comment with a space would help, too.

Take a power moment you have planned for your next chapter and write it down, over and over, until you can enter the MF/M competition.  You have just under ten days.