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(1 replies, posted in Close friends)

Is it only me or the premium group disappeared?  I received a message from the hacker (whoever they are) reminding me they're still around and the premium group disappeared from my dashboard.

Did it happen to anybody else?

Kiss,

Gacela

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(5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I'm afraid Tomo joined the contest the wrong way. He's not a member of a group, not even the premium. The systems shouldn't have accepted his entry, I believe it's a bug. However, even if the entry was accepted, it can't be viewed for he is not a member of the premium group.

On the other hand, it might have been because of the hacker who might have deleted Tomo's membership. Dunno.

Kiss,

Gacela.

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(18 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I wouldn't bother with trolls infesting our forums. It's happens everywhere and, for some obscure reason, there's people who enjoy trolling forums (or, should I say fora?).

My suggestion is that we simply ignore them and their account is closed, as it has already been case this this Dallas Wright, whomever he'd been. On the other hand, good discussions sometimes move away from the original topic and it doesn't mean they're bad discussions.

If you people don't mind, I'd like to go back to the place where the discussion was diverted by a troll and keep on with it on friendly terms.

Dirk B. wrote:

Dune, the best-selling sci-fi novel of all time used omniscient/headhopping. The author and his son have written well over a dozen books in the Dune universe. Movie, two miniseries, another planned movie, etc.

Just saying...

Sadly, Herbert's son prose, and even plots, is/are quite inferior to Herbert's own, meaning his sequels and prequels pay poor homage to Herbert's work. Even the way he explains the events around the Butlerian Jihad is kinda poor, if you ask me.

On the POV subject, I'm a fan of head-hopping, even though I don't use it myself because, currently, YA readers don't expect it and don't like it (the current fashion, in 20 years it might be otherwise). One of my favourite authors, Alexandre Dumas, used to head-hop a lot and his stories wouldn't have worked had he done otherwise. Head-hopping in a short story, within 2500 words, it's not impossible but requires a great amount of dexterity, which I think anybody around here may achieve. It's just matter of trial and error.

Kiss,

Gacela

PS. Sol, would it be possible for you to remove Dallas Wright's posts from this thread so people may continue the discussion without them annoying us?

Kiss again,

Gacela

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(63 replies, posted in Close friends)

Rachel:

Thanks for the ideas.

The rape thing... you know? It's kinda McGuffin. It's only a reason for Athens to be in the right place at the right time when trying to commit suicide (BTW, it'snot Athena but Athens, like the capital city of Greece. In this story, the good buys have names after places, so we have ATHENS, Melissa DENVER, Patrick LONDON, Mr. OXFORD, while the bad guys have names after Scotch brands: our #1 antagonist Buchanan, his assistant William Lawson, etc. And the extras, I.E., every character that is not important at all but ought to be mentioned by their name have occupational surnames, like Dr. Healer).

After Athens jumps off the building, the rape subject is forgotten, because Helga is in control and she wasn't raped. Moreover, she comes back to school and while she's somehow despised at first and seen as a freak, she doesn't cares. And that is because this is not the story of a girl who was raped, but of a teenager demon who discovers her long-forgotten human side.

Kiss,

Gacela

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(8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I'm in the same dilemma. My editor, sadly, passed away last May and my novels is halfway being edited. Any recommendation? Any editor with whom any of you have worked before?

Kiss,

Gacela

Rachel:

Have you ever read any 1960's Archie commics? My grandfather has about 300 of them in his library and I think I've read all of them. Well, there's this story in one of the comic books about Jughead interested in self-help books, getting Archie interested too. So, both buy tonnes books from the same author. Like, self-help on how make more friends, self-help on how to improve your high-school grades, self-help on how to learn sports, etc. Until one day he an Archie bump into the book of books, self-help on how to get rich.

They buy a book that is only one page long. On that page, it only says: "Write a tonne of self-help books just as I do."

Kiss,

Gacela

I think that publishing a story, as any other business, requires some investment and there's a return of such investment. In the pharmaceutical industry where I work, a 10-year ROI is seen as a successful one, but I'm not sure about writing. I mean, how much time is it consider fair for a writer to wait until a published book (either fiction or non-fiction) turns from a box-office flop into, I wouldn't say a best-seller, but at least into profit?  No clue. 

Now, please correct me if I'm wrong, but I've read that, even if you've been published by a prestige publishing house, they do little marketing and advertising for you book, unless you're Stephen King or somebody from his lot. That's the reason why so many published--and even successful--authors have their own websites, and do the signing think, and do talks, and all the stuff. So, even if you've been published, you need to develop marketing skills otherwise it's likely your book will never be widely known--or even known.

Meaning being a published writer is not an easy task. It's a lot of stuff beyond the obvious--writing and editing the book itself. Unless you do it for the sake or art and don't care about doing any business. I have a cousin who is supposed to be a painter. Fortunately for her, she has a rich husband, so she doesn't do it for living. She's an abstract painter and, if you ask me, her paintings are crap. Her last great idea was to paint an abstract canvas she cut in 100 smaller pieces that she framed and put on sale on the internet. Each piece is numbered so, if she ever gets famous and you buy one of the 100 framed pieces, you can claim you own Number 74 of Beyond the Eternity (true name of the whole canvas). Each small piece looks like something finger-painted by a 3-yo kid (she gave me one for free and I hang it on my bedroom's wall each time she comes to visit my family). So, she clearly does it for the sake of art, because she invested not only on the canvas, the paintings and the brushes, but also on framing the 100 cut pieces and has make no profit yet--so far she's sold like 5 or 6 and given away for free like 20.

So, if somebody here is like my cousig, then there no prob. Just write the story, publish it on TNBW, get some feedback, and keep on. Or publish it on one of those sites where amateurs publish their stories  for every body to read them and like them, and you're done. But if you are serious, then money needs to be invested, at least, on editing and marketing (assuming the publisher invests on the cover artwork and on making it available as a printed book and en e-book).

Me? I want to see to see my work seriously published (as it was the case with Amber Eyes) even if don't make large sales, but I DO want to improve as a writer until I write a best seller.

Kiss,

Gacela

Suin:

Yes, I plan to self publish Where Heaven and Hell Meet, only it was too much for my editor and she died halfway editing the story (bad joke, most likely). I've already self published one story: Amber Eyes. You can find it Amazon goo.gl/b5JSS8    and Amazon UK goo.gl/mWhR8r . However, if you'd like to read it, I can send you the ebook for free.

When I published Amber Eyes I was also doubtful between self publishing and looking for an agent. I did some research and found that gazillion of TNBW had looked for an agent little to no success. Few have been published, but I have no information about how successful they've been.

Many, and I mean many, TNBW authors have self published. I know at least of one who claims to be making US$1000 a week selling her books. I have made about $300 selling Amber eyes, but absolutely with no publicity and within 2 years. It's not much, but considered I've done no publicity, I think it's quite a good.

The problem I see with getting an agent, beyond the cumbersome query letter, sending it to 1000 agents and getting 999 rejections (assuming you finally nail at least one), is that, if your story is not successful according to the publisher's standards, the books are removed from  the book stores and they don't ever publish it again. You end up tied to a publisher who is no longer interested. And you have to do the marketing and advertising yourself, as when you self-publish. Unless you're already a published, best-selling author or your story is really promising, they don't spend a penny in marketing your story. So, what's the real advantage of of publishing through an agent? I'm not sure, but maybe further discussion can take place in this forum and people with more experience than I can bring their own.

In any case, you need to send your story to an editor, for any agent would immediately reject it if it's not properly edited, even if the publisher edits it later.

Kiss,

Gacela

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(0 replies, posted in Young Adult Writers)

Does anybody know a good editor? Somebody with whom you've already worked that is not so very expensive.

Mine, sadly, passed away last month and I don't know any other.

Thanks for your help.

Kiss,

Gacela

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(13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Lynne,

I was truing to check your work, but it seems it's kinda private.

Kiss,

Gacela

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(35 replies, posted in Close friends)

Rachel:

I was wondering whether you're some kind of clairvoyant because you were narrating what happened to me just to weeks ago. LOL!

By the way, while I enjoyed Wonder Woman a lot (first DC movie I actually enjoyed; the previous ones were crap, Batman vs. Superman on top of the list with a three honourable mentions), what I disliked is that it took place in WWI. Everybody knows Wonder Woman started in WWII! Why is DC always shitting on themselves?

Kiss,

Gacela

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(35 replies, posted in Close friends)

c.e. jones wrote:

Hello!! So thrilled to be here! And so sorry, Gacela, about your run of bad luck in romance. Patience, right? I was 37 before I found the love of my life, and even then it took me awhile to figure out if I loved or hated him, lol

Welcome! It's nice your back. You're a wonderful writer and I really enjoyed your story Maypops in September. It's good you're writing again.

Kiss,
Gacela

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(35 replies, posted in Close friends)

I must be through a run of bad luck because, in the past 12 months, I dated two different chaps and in both cases they turned to be not the wrong one, but the very wrong one. Both relationships started too fast--which was partially my fault for allowing it--and ended up badly. I'm no longer a teen so I ought to learn how engage in a positive relationship.

I also need to kill a ghost from the past, and maybe then it'll be easier for me to start something positive. But sometimes we grab these ghosts like Titanic survivors grabbing a lifesaver in the sea. Only we're floating in freezing water and the lifesaver is not a good idea unless we let it go and swim like the devil were after us, until we reach the Carpathia.

Sigh!

Kiss

Gacela.

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(35 replies, posted in Close friends)

Okay, I'm back. Apologies for disappearing without previous notice but the end of the year was hectic and so 2018 right from day 1. I've  almost not been at home at all in Jan and Feb. I've been in NYC for the most part of January (work, don't even think I was on holidays) and in Puerto Rico the last two weeks.

Then I also entertained a brief romance that suddenly  took all my time. It's over now , and that's good news. I haven't been lucky lately. All my recent romantic affairs have turned toxic and they also move too fast for me. Call me old fashioned, but I'm not  the type of girl who ends up in bed by date 2, and it seems every bloke around me is willing to have sex on date -1. So here I am single again, waiting for the real Bertie Oxford in my life to pay attention to the real Helga, but that's unlikely, if I'm honest with myself.

So, It back where I be long.

Who's volunteering to put me up to date?

Kiss

La Gacela

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(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Congratulations Jack. Well deserved!

Kiss,

Gacela

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(17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I would recommend the following books as outstanding:

Hooked: Write Fiction That Grabs Readers at Page One & Never Lets Them Go, by Les Edgerton
The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer's Guide To Character Expression, by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi
How to Write Descriptions of Hair and Skin, by Val Kovalin
How to Write Descriptions of Eyes and Faces by Val Kovalin

Kiss,

Gacela

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(6 replies, posted in Close friends)

Suin:

Did you finally sent your story to an agent? Don't forget to update us.

Kiss,

Gacela

Rachel (Rhiannon) Parsons wrote:

John:  Not so much in this book, but overall, it is a little ambiguous.  It's suggested in Book III (posted now on Inkitt) that it is vestiphobia.  Her sister suggests its a power play of a sort.  I might develop those, but except for a radical blooper, Out of Exile is published.  Onward and upward!

How does Inkitt works? It is worth signing up?

Kiss,

Gacela

Great job, Rachel, congrats! It seems everybody in our group is publishing.

Are you self-publishing or did you sell it?

Kiss,

Gacela.

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(17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

How about the ebook/Kindle version? Are you releasing one?

Kiss

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(17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Congratulations!!!! This is a great achievement.

Kiss,

Gacela

Congrats, Bill!!!

Kiss + kiss

Gacela

No, no, no!  I didn't mean that. I but it's my fault you got it wrong because I had the idea in my mind, but never explained it. I'm just like my own character Melissa, LOL!

I was thinking of "throwing in occasional words or phrases of actual Italian" just like Dan Brown did, but avoiding Dan Brown's mistakes by asking a native speaker to translate them. That was what I did for Lucy Crowe whose character was a Latino living in the USA. Hence, he spoke words in Spanish from time to time.

Kiss,

Gacela

Don't you know anybody from Italy? The best would be to ask a native speaker to translate the lines for you. I did it for Lucy Crowe (Sugar Man's Daughter, Maypops in September, both workshoped in TNBW) even though her quotes were not in Italian but in Spanish--meaning I can't help you, sorry. Lucy used a dictionary and the Google translator and most of the time she got the lines almost right, but there was always something that needed tine tuning. Else, she used an idiom wrong, or an expression that was too formal when her native-speaking character would have used an informal one. This is normal when you don't know the language, and even many times when you know it but it's not your native tongue.

In these internet days, it might not be that difficult to find an Italian native speaker willing to help. There must be chat rooms where you can find an Italian chap or girl who wants to help the next best selling author. mustn't it?

Kiss,

Gacela

Jake:

Thanks for sharing. This is very interesting for all of us.

One question: Does Amazon actually promotes your book? You say you selected a price that's interesting both form Amazon and you. However, I have the idea Amazon does not promote books at all. Okay, they send you this suggestions by email, but based on an algorithm that has nothing to do with the price and profit Amazon can make, but on your browsing,wish list, and interests. Am I wrong?



Kiss,

Gacela