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Glad to have you. PLEASE feel free to hit any of my romantic suspense. I suggest starting with Wilted Magnolias as it's the next one I think I'll put in print. Look forward to reading some of your work.

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Welcome aboard!

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rhiannon wrote:

Janet:

Feel free to rant; a wedding is totally stressful, won't even go into what happened at mine.  And not to capitalize on your stress, but my character goes through a wedding disaster of all wedding disasters toward the end of my first book, and now you have given me grist for how to make it even worse.  lol  Sorry, but that's what happens when you rant on a writer's forum, instead of Facebook.  lol

All comments are fair writer fodder! Use away! I have a chapter in my memoir I'm working on entitled "Burlap."

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Dill, you do offer such glorious cynicism. I love to read your comments. And when you engage another of differing opinions, it gives me great writing fodder for future characters. Yes--you just might end up as one of my characters. Stay true to yourself.

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Let the story take you. Just write the story and see where it goes. Don't over think it.

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Scheduled release date, April 14, 2016.

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Scheduled release date, April 14, 2016.

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Scheduled release date, April 14, 2016.

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Scheduled release date, April 14, 2016.

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Like or dislike, those of us on here endeavoring to create a lasting piece of literature can only hope that one day our writing can inspire such a heated debate.

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Memphis Trace wrote:
Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:
Memphis Trace wrote:

I would counsel writers not to worry about using irregular verbs. Interested readers are almost never confused, irregardless—yes, irregardless is a word https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Irregardless, and a valuable one for certain uses—of which you choose between verbs. Pedants may snicker at you, but irregular verbs are a sure way for creating a voice for your non-stuffy character. Even if your POV slips up and gets one right instead of wrong, it is more of a commentary on pedantry than it is on communication to interested readers.

Memphis Trace

In dialogue in order to create a speech pattern or persona, using bad grammar is acceptable, but not in narrative.

I am sure Mark Twain missed this wise counsel when he wrote The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.

In narrative, it is a particularly effective way to add 'voice'. ¿If a character talks using irregular verbs, surely he thinks and stews in his juices in the vernacular?

For instance, a character who uses irregardless is not going to shed his pomposity—or his ignorance of eager linguists' fear and loathing of the now irregular word—should he shut his mouth long enough to have a coherent thought. Here is how Ring Lardner used it at least once in his story, The Big Town, 1921: I told them that irregardless of what you read in books, they's some members of the theatrical profession that occasionally visits the place where they sleep.

Irregardless of what eager linguists may think of irregardless, I would point to Lardner's effective usage as a guide for creative writers trying to find and enhance their 'voice' in a work.
     
Memphis Trace

I repeat: NARRATIVE. Thought is internal dialogue. Sure, my hillbillies would say and think--I ain't gonna do it.

But when the author narrates, s/he should not say he ain't gonna do it. No, it should be something like--Sally Mae knew he would not do it.

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j p lundstrom wrote:

Hey, Janet--
Nice attempt to make people aware of their grammatical errors. They have become so widespread and language is such a dynamic phenomenon, that those "misuses" will, by their very popularity, eventually be considered standard. Words like "irregardless," which are an offense to my ear and eye, may be deemed acceptable by a wide section of the populace, which means they becomes correct usage.
Charles's "kept," "wept,"and "learnt" may someday become so unfamiliar an unused they no longer exist in everyday use, and thereby will be considered incorrect. BUT WHO KNOWS? Maybe not.
In the meantime, we English teachers will strive to teach the current standards. My personal gripe stems. I think, from writers' relying on their computers' spell check, which leads to gross misuse of words, for example "broach" for "brooch," "eminent" for "imminent" (and vice versa), even "peak" for "peek" (you would think, as children, they would have learned that one). OMG!
Carry on.

And text speak is making it even worse! Your/you're, if not confused both become ur. And that's just one. Don't get me started. I actually had some seniors turn in essays with ur in them. You can bet the RED pen came out!

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Charles_F_Bell wrote:

My opinion is that there is something askew with one's language ability if he has not already learnt those "irregular" verbs of his native language, should that be spoken consistently at home, before he has gone to school to learn those rules for "regular" verbs, often of foreign origin.  U.K.-standard "kept," "wept", "learnt", "spelt" are good and ancient English, and the American "regular" -ed forms, whether standard or not, are an informal means to spelling reform but often seem unnatural to the native speaker who will have internalized the good and ancient language of his ancestors before he can have remembered he has done so.

Well said, but there are some that are irregular in both U.K. & U.S. and it grates my last nerve to hear newscaster say things like, "Have ran." Or messing up lay/lie. I've heard some supposedly educated folks say, "I lied down." Needless to say, once when my local anchor mutilated the language, I emailed the station manager.

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Memphis Trace wrote:

I would counsel writers not to worry about using irregular verbs. Interested readers are almost never confused, irregardless—yes, irregardless is a word https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Irregardless, and a valuable one for certain uses—of which you choose between verbs. Pedants may snicker at you, but irregular verbs are a sure way for creating a voice for your non-stuffy character. Even if your POV slips up and gets one right instead of wrong, it is more of a commentary on pedantry than it is on communication to interested readers.

Memphis Trace

In dialogue in order to create a speech pattern or persona, using bad grammar is acceptable, but not in narrative.

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Looking at the question of mental stability. If a person suffers from some form of emotional disorder, coercion and manipulation, are tantamount to rape. The person may not be in the frame of mind to make a rational decision to have sex. If the other person is aware of this and still pushes or threatens with some form of retribution, it becomes rape.

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No Shortcuts with Irregular VerbsIt isn’t just the disadvantaged or disaffected among us who struggle with irregularverbs. A political insider with his own long-running TV show keeps saying “has ran.” Fifty years ago, a textbook entitled Warriner’s English Grammar and Compositionsaid: “Irregular verbs … cause the greatest single problem in standard verb usagebecause there is no single rule that applies to them. A student of our languagemust know the principal parts of every irregular verb … and the only way to knowthem is to memorize them.” We use these verbs all the time. We might as well get them right. See how you doon the irregular-verb quiz that follows. I'll give you the answers tomorrow.

Irregular Verb Pop Quiz

1. It turned out that being ___ solid actually saved his life. A) frozen B) froze C) freezed

2. Barbara ___ for the faces of a family never seen. A) weeped B) weapt C) wept D) weaped

3. I saved him from getting ___. A) drownded B) drowned C) drownd D) drowneded

4. His actions have ___ to be contrary to his words. A) proven B) proved C) A and B are both correct

5. Leon was ___ down by the tormenting weight of his burdens.
A) drug B) drugged C) drag D) dragged

6 . She kept wearing it and wearing it until it was all ___ out. A) wore B) worn C) A and B are both correct

7. It turned out we had always ___ the answer. A) knewn B) knew C) knowed D) known

8. The book was found ___ open on the floor. A) lieing B) laying C) lying D) lane

9. Why hasn’t someone ___ this by me sooner? A) run B) ran C) running D) ranned

10. We all thought Alfred had already ___ dinner. A) ate B) eaten C) A and B are both correct

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corra wrote:
Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

I just never thought I'd cause such a stir just by acknowledging the woman's passing.

Are you new here? wink

Nope. I just don't comment very often in these threads. I prefer to read them and let others pick one another apart. It just never ceases to amaze me how something innocent spirals into craziness. Sometimes it makes me laugh; other times, I want to cry. And then the occasional spark of genius, just keeps me reading more.

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Nathan B. Childs wrote:

Big fan on both the book and the movie. I had a similar upbringing in the Fifties.
I've been saying this for years, so that makes it the truth in my neck of the woods: Scout isn't a fictitional character. Scout is Harper Lee, and Dill, the runt, is Truman Capote. They grew up in the same Georgia neighborhood. Rumor has it that Capote wrote the book for his childhood friend--but I chose not to believe it. For me the power of Harper Lee's voice is what makes TKAM one of my favorite stories.

Wish we had a like button. I just never thought I'd cause such a stir just by acknowledging the woman's passing.

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If I don't review or respond over the next few days, first, I'm helping daughter move and second, I'm doing my final edit for King Satin's Realm so I can get it off to be published. I shall return!

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j p lundstrom wrote:

A respectful pause for the death of a gifted human being.

But come on, folks! She wrote ONE book! And while it was a great book in its day, it reads dated and b-o-r-i-n-g nowadays. I'd wager a guess that it even seems condescending to some people. How insulting in modern times to say that a whole race is unable to solve their problems without the benevolence of one white man!

She said what she had to say, and it struck a note, but that's all she had. There remain plenty of other problems of the human condition that still need tackling, and other talented writers are working on them.

Um, she no longer holds the distinction of the one book wonder. Her second came out just a few months ago: Go Set a Watchman.

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Stop a moment and think: All classic literature is dated. But the themes remain constant. Yes, let's give the lady her due credit.

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Y'all look up a book called Slake's Limbo. 15 years later, my son still wants to know why he was forced to read it.

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https://gma.yahoo.com/harper-lee-author … soc_trk=fb

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Time lines are extremely important, especially in a series.

I know where I want to start and where I want to end. I have to think of the steps to get me from point A to point B. The way I do this is to name my chapters and write one or two sentences about what will happen in each chapter. Sometimes I have to add chapters or combine chapters, and on occasion rearrange the order. From there, I elaborate on the short chapter descriptions. The titles tell something about what will happen in each chapter. It works for me, but might not work for others.