Randy, I'll need an email.
477 2016-01-07 05:19:42
Re: AWOL from reviews (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Ok, Rebecca. I have seven chapters left to read through once more and I'll email it to you. I'm not keeping count. You know I loved Beast & Beauty. And I love Drech even more.
478 2016-01-06 21:39:32
Topic: AWOL from reviews (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Sorry I've been awol from reviews for a few days. My dragons won the vote for next series to start, so I am doing another edit before I send King Satin's Realm to my editor. I also need a couple of beta readers. Any takers? I'm almost finished with my final read-through. I'll be back to reviewing by the weekend.
479 2016-01-06 04:03:53
Re: Group access vs. display vs. visible? (48 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:vern wrote:How in the helloworld do you keep up with 10 or more groups. My wife used to play two or three dozen bingo cards and I never figured out how she kept up with those either, lol. Take care. Vern
I think that I'm technically a member of 8 or 9 groups on here now, but I really only participate in 3 with a quick peek in at the others if someone posts something that draws my attention. I honestly don't want a "thread" about a particular work. I appreciated the reviews and feedback, but if someone has more to say about something I've written, I'd rather have that in a private message, especially if we might be having a disagreement or difference of opinion. From what I'm reading here, I think folks' biggest concern comes from those threads.
Okay, so you don't want a thread for your writing, so everyone else automatically don't either? I understand fully where you are coming from, but this is where the problem comes in. Just because x,y,z work for someone, doesn't mean it's going to work for another person. There are others that find a lot of value from the inputs from multiple people on their writing, i.e. they don't want to work in isolation, and it was my understanding that is what the forums/groups are for. Using the functionality to leave more comments on a specific review for a specific chapter only goes so far. E.g. I had a lot of questions regarding future chapters asking for inputs from certain groups - where do I put those if there isn't a chapter to review? If the forums were not intended for this, I'd be surprised.
Basically, what I'm trying to say is, try and think about more than just what works for you and thinking it's okay for you, so it should be okay for everyone else.
Sol has promised that he'll see what can be done within his ability and budget. As I said, if he can do that, it will be really great. If not, then we'll have to adjust. At the moment, we're hiding our groups from everyone, including TNBW members, which doesn't make sense, but if nothing else, then we'll have to. And clearly this will be a bigger 'issue' to those that use the forums for feedback on their writing than those that do not. But that doesn't invalidate anyone's concerns. I'm glad that Sol is willing to take our point of view into consideration.
I'm going to bow out of this one, it feels like I'm about to start the next lap around the same circle I've already lapped twice.
Hey. soul sister! I understand your concern. And the more I read, the more I see its validity. We shouldn't have to worry about unscrupulous folks. It makes everyone nervous. Sounds like private groups that only can be accessed by permission from the moderator might be the way to go until Sol figures something out. I don't have a solution, but those very public threads seem to be the big issue right now.
480 2016-01-06 02:41:19
Re: Group access vs. display vs. visible? (48 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
janet reid wrote:it's just a shame I can join 10 groups at most.
How in the helloworld do you keep up with 10 or more groups. My wife used to play two or three dozen bingo cards and I never figured out how she kept up with those either, lol. Take care. Vern
I think that I'm technically a member of 8 or 9 groups on here now, but I really only participate in 3 with a quick peek in at the others if someone posts something that draws my attention. I honestly don't want a "thread" about a particular work. I appreciated the reviews and feedback, but if someone has more to say about something I've written, I'd rather have that in a private message, especially if we might be having a disagreement or difference of opinion. From what I'm reading here, I think folks' biggest concern comes from those threads.
481 2016-01-05 15:17:56
Re: Group access vs. display vs. visible? (48 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
njc wrote:Vern, when you go to sue someone for acting against you, there are defenses that amount to "He left the gate open and didn't even put up a sign." (See Adverse Possession in real property law.)
.If Adverse Possession is your only concern, then it takes 20 years (in NC at least, other states may be different) of open defiance and claim on the property. So not exactly a major concern or the same thing. As soon as your work is posted here, it is copyrighted, not exactly leaving the door open for anyone. All the concern about stealing plots etc. just doesn't make a lot of sense; it is widely accepted there are only seven plots (yes some make minor adjustments for a few more or less, but it's close enough) so I rather doubt anyone has a new one to hide. It is all in the details and it's rather unlikely someone is going to stick around for let's say a year or so for us to complete our books so they can exploit excerpts of it from the forums and if that unlikely possibility happens, then it is still copyrighted from it's first written exposure, to include the forums.
As stated previously, how is anyone going to find your work in the forums if they don't know what to look for which requires someone like the author or someone who has read it to tell them what to look for? It takes a specific search to find something and that specificity is coming from inside, not outside the site. We're probably all (including me) concerned about protecting our work, but the reality is that the danger is vastly overblown by our self imposed fears. I for one know there is always some miniscule chance it could be pirated, but I'm not going to stew over it any more than I would about getting struck by lightning which is a much greater possibility imo. Take care. Vern
Thanks, vern for the voice of reason and wisdom. Life is too short to stress over this. And if someone steals my words that have been copyrighted, then they must think they are DAMNED GOOD!
482 2016-01-05 06:07:37
Re: Visibility of group (26 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
I'm not finding the chapter from Dyed Rosebuds.
483 2016-01-04 23:08:29
Re: Visibility of group (26 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
You do realize that when you post on here, you are copyrighted. And an online copyright is only $35. Yeah, there will still be unscrupulous people who might steal your stuff, but that is a chance you take in today's electronic world. Still, if you're copyrighted and find out, you do have legal recourse.
484 2016-01-04 23:07:27
Re: Group access vs. display vs. visible? (48 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
You do realize that when you post on here, you are copyrighted. And an online copyright is only $35. Yeah, there will still be unscrupulous people who might steal your stuff, but that is a chance you take in today's electronic world. Still, if you're copyrighted and find out, you do have legal recourse.
485 2016-01-04 23:04:14
Re: Visibility of group (26 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
A good reason not to have your novel in a thread. Leave that for the posts. If you need more feedback, take it private. We have that option.
486 2016-01-03 05:00:31
Re: Visibility of group (26 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
I just googled "Does this sound too contrived?" Definitely does not show up on first page.
487 2016-01-03 04:57:07
Re: Visibility of group (26 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
So long as those already members remain members. Just wondering why it's such an issue that it comes up with a Google search. Is anyone posting something they don't want seen? My first suggestion is for members not to post anything they don't want seen. Have you searched Google for any of the topics we've posted?
488 2016-01-02 04:19:57
Re: Happy writing in 2016! (2 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
I'm editing my dragons! Lots of romance in this series.
489 2016-01-02 02:26:05
Re: Short Story Contest Winners (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congrats.
490 2015-12-31 14:55:23
Re: *Warning* Adult content (15 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
My honey says that men don't normally try to guess cup size, but they do make comments about big boobs, butt, etc. They might even nickname a woman something vulgar like--Jugsy Malone. I don't know any of my female friends that are into "measuring." I think Rebecca is right. But it hard strokes the author's ego. More like it makes the author sound stupid.
491 2015-12-31 00:56:27
Re: *Warning* Adult content (15 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
And he's a part of the U.S. Civil War. I get where you're coming from. She would have been better off making him a southern aristocrat who managed to hold on to something after the War OR a Rhett Butler type.
492 2015-12-31 00:17:04
Re: Your vote counts (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Dragons are still winning.
493 2015-12-31 00:15:46
Re: *Warning* Adult content (15 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
That's Scottish. Just ask me. I'm Scotch-Irish descent, and when I get mad, my words come out with an Irish brogue though I've never even been there.
494 2015-12-30 22:45:44
Re: *Warning* Adult content (15 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Cover doesn't do a thing for me, and if he's blinded, how does he look for her brother. Just doesn't blow my skirt up.
495 2015-12-30 22:40:10
Topic: Your vote counts (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Your Vote Counts!
I'm taking a vote. Which series should I publish next? You tell me. Below are brief synopses of the first book in four series. Message me at http://goo.gl/z3FFxx (Author Janet Taylor-Perry) on Facebook or email me at janettaylorperry@gmail.com. All votes must be received by January 1, 2016. I have to have time to perfect the story! I'd like to release it in the spring.
April Chastain Intrigues: Living in the small town of Magnolia Blossom, Mississippi, April Chastain is a young reporter who always seems to find the story.
Book 1:
Wilted Magnolias
Not having seen each other in sixteen years, sparks fly immediately when April Chastain misrepresents herself and returns to her hometown of Magnolia Blossom, Mississippi, to work for Russell Dalton, a man she has adored since childhood. They find themselves caught up in a web of romance, mystery, and danger.
Left for dead at the age of six, April is miraculously spared by a man-size teddy bear, a gift from Russell. As clues about the murder of April's parents trickle to light, evidence surfaces that points to trusted friends as possible murders. Several other deaths and a high number of cancer patients are linked to suspected illegal dumping of toxic, water-soluble cadmium. Through it all, the one constant is an inanimate teddy bear, which holds a secret.
The world of investigative reporting proves to be a rollercoaster of intrigue, secrets, and tumultuous relationships in Wilted Magnolias.
Future titles in this romantic suspense series—Dyed Rosebuds, Pruned Violets, and Death Lilies.
Hillbilly Hijinx: Hillbilly Hijinx is a collection of four stories relating the trials and tribulations of four young men and one young woman who share a bond few can possibly understand. The concept for Hillbilly Hijinx took root when I saw a documentary about the conditions in the Appalachian foothills in the late twentieth century and then a news report where many of the same circumstances still plague the Mississippi Delta in the early twenty-first century.
Book 1:
Homegrown Healer
“Physician, heal thyself,” are words Doctor MacKenzie “Mac” Reardon never thought he would hear, although he has seen far too much sickness and death in his thirty years.
Possum Holler, West Virginia, has suffered numerous tragedies without a doctor and with a hospital nearly one hundred miles away. The people are poor and backward. At last, one of their own has managed to become a doctor. Doctor Reardon returns to his hometown to find his own heartache might be something no medicine can heal as he struggles with a narrow-minded community, ignorance, a rocky marriage to a city girl, Felicia Chambry Reardon, and an overwhelming attraction to the new school teacher/principal, Sunny Bankston, at the newly established school.
Having met Sunny while in his ER rotation at Cook County Hospital when he was an intern and she had been shot in a school violence incident, Mac knows the spirit of the woman, a spirit that is more akin to his than the spirit of the woman he married. Mac struggles against overwhelming odds to bring his community into the twenty-first century even as Sunny Bankston battles her own demons, including an attraction to MacKenzie Reardon.
Future titles in this literary fiction series—Mountain Moonshine, Gator Aid, and For Richter or Poorer.
Laura Beth Copeland Misadventures: Laura Beth Copeland is an ordinary woman who seems to attract trouble like a magnet draws steel.
Book 1:
Head Count
Who could know counting heads would be so dangerous? In the small Delta town of Sunrise, Mississippi, Laura Beth Copeland, an Ole Miss graduate and the stay-home mother of two and half, decides to become a census-taker, just for the experience. When she discovers a decapitated head at one of her canvassing addresses, she is catapulted into a fight for her life.
FBI attempts to catch the killer and protect Laura Beth prove to be in vain. After personal tragedy, Laura Beth goes on the lam with the local police detective, Tanner McGill. Weeks spent together create a spark that will smolder for a while.
Investigation shows the killer has ties far up the political ladder and the head count mounts. By the time a suspect is identified, it becomes apparent that he himself is only a pawn and the real criminal links all the way the State Department of the United States. Multiple branches of law enforcement join together to find the real culprit and save an innocent woman.
Future titles in this romantic-suspense series—Bone Dry, Skin Deep, and Nose Job.
The Legend of Draconis: Unlike any other fantasy, The Legend of Draconis is a mature fantasy series that spans 500 years over four books—the main character, an island that calls the Clan O'Rourke home.
Book 1:
King Satin's Realm (Satin, like the cloth; not Satan.)
Alone, confused, desperate, Aidan O'Rourke never dreams that talking to old Diggory Danaher will take him on an adventure of a lifetime. After months of stories about a mythical island and his father, Aidan decides to find out for himself if his father is alive and living as a panther on the enchanted island.
Stowaway wives, a lost father, bewitched human beings, a wicked witch, pirates, and friendly dragons combine to draw Aidan into a web of the ages-old conflict of good versus evil as he becomes the champion of a land that only exceptional humans can reach. Aidan proves how exceptional he truly is through the power of faith and unconditional love.
Future titles in this saga—Spirits' Desire, Last of an Exceptional Breed, and One World.
Again! VOTE!
http://goo.gl/z3FFxx on Facebook or email me at janettaylorperry@gmail.com. All votes must be received by January 1, 2016.
Thus far, my dragons are winning.
496 2015-12-30 19:02:59
Re: *Warning* Adult content (15 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)
Couldn't agree more. With that kind of description, it's no longer romance, even limit-pushing romance, but IMO become erotica. You can have some hot scenes without the description or using vulgarity. And sometimes less is better. I have a vivid imagination. She gulped when her hand encircled him--would lead me to believe the guy is hung like a racehorse. And She gulped when she looked down. He pulled her against his chiseled torso and kissed her ravenously, ending with a nibble to her bottom lip. The two fell onto the down covered bed. Trust me, I can go from there!
497 2015-12-28 02:29:16
Re: -ing vs -ed verb forms (26 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)
One of my reviewers has recommended that I avoid verb forms that end with -ing and write the sentence using -ed verb endings.
Here is an example with -ing verbs:
As each remaining ship’s shields failed, it dove down at the palace at maximum thrust, plowing into the superstructure,
and setting off enormous fireballs that shook the bunker.Here it is with -ed:
As each remaining ship’s shields failed, it dove down at the palace at maximum thrust, plowed into the superstructure,
and set off enormous fireballs that shook the bunker.Verb police, please weigh in.
In this example, the second. End of conversation.
498 2015-12-28 01:23:45
Re: -ing vs -ed verb forms (26 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)
janet reid wrote:Charles_F_Bell wrote:So you'd rather have: dove down at the palace at maximum thrust, and was plowing into the superstructure . . .
by what logic in grammar justifies substitution , and was with a mere comma? or that a -ing participle means, like past-progressive with "was", continuing action? A participle is just a participle. Sloppy, lousy, lazy writing.
Just before you start throwing insults at me, just get my sloppy and lousy writing down correctly! I am guilty as charged, I'm lazy. But you know that already!
This is what I'd rather have with the complete set of changes I would've made:
As each remaining shield failed, the ship dove down at the palace at maximum thrust. It plowed into the superstructure, setting off enormous fireballs that shook the bunker.
This is somewhat different to what you had, and can still be wrong, lazy, and sloppy, but is more what I meant at least.
Yes, that does clarify but does not make your logic any better. How exactly is , setting better than and set? It does not create the progressive action you say it does inasmuch as and set is third in a list of four events sequentially happening. That is a functional purpose of simple past tense and word order. This happened, and that happened, then the other thing happened. always denotes a progression of events.
Setting, shows a continuous action. Set, if the fourth action in a series, NEEDS the , and set.
499 2015-12-28 01:20:08
Re: -ing vs -ed verb forms (26 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)
Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:Dirk, in your example, the -ing verb is preferable. I think what you need to avoid are the was/were...ing verbs. She was standing in the rain vs she stood in the rain.
Sure, but that does not give any reason for preferring [comma] participle rather than the verb itself not in past-progressive tense like dove which preceded it in simple past tense.
Like our other Janet, are you thinking one can merely replace the was before the -ing word with a comma?
No, I'm not. She laughed hard, shaking her shoulders. Shaking makes this an adjective clause. She laughed, shook her shoulders. This is just bad grammar. Shook here is a verb showing action. If you use a participle like this at the end of a sentence, it needs to be -ing. At the beginning, either can be used so long as the -ed verb describes rather than showing action. At the beginning, -ing should show action.
Shaking her head, she laughed loudly.
Drenched in booze, the man staggered across the room.
And, yes, I put it in simple terms rather than using English class jargon.
500 2015-12-27 22:41:41
Re: Listings of new stuff (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
New Postings
Blah, Blah, Blah--book chapter, short story, poem, essay--author.
Very simple.