751

(2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol, I noticed that in the message board of the home page, there is no "In-line review replies" category. But there is "Regular review replies." So in order to see if an author I'd given an in-line review to had responded, I'd have to keep going back to that particular chapter to check - if I could remember which one it was! Can this be added as a category in that list? It would make life easier.

752

(17 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

I read a lot! smile

753

(17 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

Well, Dags, in the old days a doc had to rely on the PHYSICAL EXAMINATION to make a diagnosis. He didn't have MRIs and ultrasounds to help. I remember being a medical student rotating through Surgery when a senior resident pontificated, "The physical exam ain't worth the powder to blow it up." And that was a long time ago! In the old days, a surgeon, based on his findings and the medical history related by the patient, would hoist the kid onto the kitchen table, give some ether - if he had some - through a gauze mask, and take out the kid's appendix. "Memoirs of a Small-Town Surgeon" by John Brooks Wheeler (1935) makes for some fascinating reading. That small town was in Vermont, so I have some bias in that regard. smile I admire those old guys, the pioneers, who blazed the trail for future surgeons to follow. They knew their stuff! Sorry for the rant, but your post struck a chord with me.

754

(8 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

You likely plan to get some mileage from those names, but the joke might get a bit old before the end of the story. Just a thought.

755

(35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)

Aw, c'mon, njc. Building walls? That's not what we're about. The purpose of groups is to gather like-minded writers together to share ideas, discuss issues related to the particular genres. At least that was my motivation for starting a group. Most of the time, though, the group just serves as the place to post a story appropriate for the genre. A place for those who like that kind of story to go to and find a story to their liking. How can it be clique-ish if anyone can join a specific group if they think it suits them? And join more than one group? We're a family of writers, each member trying to achieve a success that meets the individual's definition of it.  So have some fun and take advantage of the wealth of talent available here - in whatever group(s) meets your fancy. The paranoia you expressed is misplaced, in my view.

756

(3 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Me, too.

757

(17 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

Oop[s, I meant Kwai, rather than Quai. My bad!!

758

(17 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

Okay, in The Bridge on the River Quai, at the end, when William Holden gets killed, Jack Hawkins gets defensive with his Thai women bearers, and protests that he had no choice. What? To kill Holden with his mortars? No, Holden was killed by Japanese rifle fire. I never got that scene.

In NBNW, the plot from that point on depended on Cary sitting across from Eva in the dining car. So how could that be "arranged" on purpose? And in the very beginning, the fortuitous event of Cary just happening to be there when the victim is knifed and then getting the knife in his hand... But I didn't care! It was exciting, I like Cary Grant, and it was a good movie!

In Heat, with Pacino and DeNiro, when DeNiro's crew is coming out of the bank they just robbed, Pacino, who's heading to the bank but is still blocks away, somehow can see that far and says, "They're already coming out of the bank!" And then at the end, from a similar distance away, he sees DeNiro's girlfriend waiting for him in the car. And then, when DeNiro is running away, Pacino just happens to guess right on the direction he took. But I still liked that flick! The shootout scene in the streets of LA - based on a real-life shootout, I've heard - is awesome. Great acting by all concerned, including Val Kilmer.

I'll think of some more, given the time. The point is that, though some WTF moments occur in films, the good ones don't let those moments ruin the movie.

759

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

njc wrote:

Can/will Createspace allow both ebook and paper?  With paper and Amazon who actually fulfills the orders?  Does Amazon do it, or do you have to handle the individual orders?

CreateSpace does both e-book and print, depending on what you want.  Amazon takes care of the orders.

760

(17 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

Well, Cary Grant was told to go there, if my memory serves. But there were other plot holes in that film, and they didn't bother me. Great movie!

I discovered a minor plot hole in my novel, "Teammates," that no TNBW reviewer spotted, and it got past my picky-picky editor as well. So I'm going to fix it. Somebody, out of the millions who will read the book, would be bound to spot it. smile

761

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

So as not to appear like I'm ignoring your post, Dags, even though we've discussed this in another venue, your suggestion didn't work - just made the glitch smaller. But thanks for trying to help!

762

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Okay, Sol, the scroller still doesn't go to the bottom of my connections list when I want to send a message to one of the last two names on the list. Now I can see the names I couldn't before, but my last two connections - including you - aren't visible. If I make two more connections, then your name will show on the list, it seems. Can't this bug be fixed? I'd hate to make new connections just so I can send a private message to a now-hidden-from-view older connection.

Speaking of Tommy Lee Jones, how about, "U.S. Marshals"? Same theme, actually, as with "The Fugitive." But I'd put "Bullitt" and "Heat" above it. "The French Connection" deserves a nod as well. And how can we forget "Dirty Harry"?

764

(2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

So you start from the bottom of the list and go up? What is this, Chinese? smile Okay, if that's the drill, I'll accept it. I guess. But you haven't explained how I got .03 points deducted for posting a poem on Premium when I did no such thing. The point value is miniscule, but it suggests a flaw in the system.

765

(2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Hey, Mrs. Piddles - No sweat starting the group. I know there are quite a few Romance writers here who should want to join. In fact, I'm surprised there hasn't been such a group started already. I predict it would have the most members of any of the groups. So pick a logo/icon/photo for the group, decide if you want it free or for points, and do it.

766

(2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol, I inadvertently posted this issue in my sub-group, so am repeating it here. Today I looked at my points for the first time and found, to my dismay, that I lost 10 points while reviewing! I mean, what's up with that? You're supposed to GET points for reviewing, right? I didn't post new content or edit old content - just did reviews. A list of points gained for each review added up to 9.77. Yet I lost ten points. And I had .03 points deducted because I posted one of my poems to Premium - only I didn't do that. It's just in my portfolio. What's going on here?

I forgot to respond to Dagnee's comment re gaming the system. There may have been members who did what you described, but I didn't see a problem there. Rarely would I review a chapter that paid only a few points but ended up being quite long. So it did happen, but I doubt it was intentional. And an author who does that routinely will be quickly found out and punished by losing reviewers. Posting vs publishing is semantics; of course I meant posting content, not forum talk.

There is obviously a misunderstanding here. What I was pointing out was that to post a story into this group, it now costs points to do so. The easiest solution to avoid spending points would be to post the story in the Free TNBW group. But then the advantage of posting in your genre, and thus making it easier for people to find your posting, would be lost. I'm a thriller writer, so if I'm looking for a new thriller posting, I would come to this group. As an example, Janet Taylor-Perry is a member of this group, but she posted her latest story in the TNBW Free group, with thousands of members. Someone who doesn't know her would have to stumble upon the posting by accident.

So I don't think it's complicated, Dags. You've posted in this group. Right now it will cost you points to do so. But if we make our group free, it won't, and you'll still have the advantage of having your story in the appropriate genre group.

Cobber, there's no "extra" points required to post into this group. It costs the same no matter what points-required group you post into. And posting in this forum or the general forum obviously doesn't cost any points. I posted this issue in our forum, because it only involves our members. For topics relevant to TNBW members at large, the Premium or Free forums would be the appropriate venue.

I started the group using the old incentive system - get points by reviewing so you can spend them on posts - because I liked it. But if the TMS members prefer to make it a free site, that's easily changed.

Clear as mud now? smile

To TMS members: Sol recently has reverted back to the old policy of allowing editing without costing more points to do so. That, I like. But he recommended that when new groups are started they have a no-points-required-to-post policy. If all groups adopt this, I see it leading to a free-for-all of postings and unbalanced vis a vis the reviewing side of the author's function. If it costs nothing to post, an author would need no points for reviewing, and such points would become worthless. Personally, I liked the old system, wherein one needed to review to accumulate points in order to use them to post. But what say you? Should we become a free group? Using the 60% rule they use in the Senate, I'll change the group to free if that is the group's decision.

770

(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

If all the groups become no-points-required for posting, then getting points for reviewing would be essentially worthless. I thought the old system worked well. Authors accumulated points for doing the work of reviewing, and in return, they could post their own stuff. Now it'll be a free-for-all, with the only governor in the process being reciprocity. Maybe that's a good thing; I don't know. I'll canvass the members of my group to see what they think.

771

(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Thanks!

772

(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol, I understand your rationale for charging points to edit - to prevent gaming of the system - but I think it should be more reasonable. As it stands, and I think Don Chambers voiced this same concern, an author might tend to not edit if it will cost them points. Then the site manuscript would be unchanged, and more reviews would point out the same issues over and over again - not helpful to the author. How about a safe haven, like, say up to a hundred words of addition without accruing additional cost?

773

(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)

Click on the magnifying glass icon at the top of the page, then type in the author you want to contact. Easy-Peasy. smile

774

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Okay, I just tried it again. Now JudyS781 is clearly visible, but the next name in the list is not. Is this a time issue? The last two names were connected in the last two days.

775

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I do use IE. Did you try going down my list of connections in the send-a-message page? My first connection listed is Dagnee; my last connection is j l mo. After Judys781 - and that listing is barely visible - the scroller stops. I can see the names after Judys781 by scrolling on the names themselves, but I can't click on them; if I try, it sends me back to Dagnee.