726

(8 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

Yes! That's where I got the idea! Loved that book. "You got flies in your eyes, Yossarian."

727

(8 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

In "The Sincerest Form of Flattery" I had an FBI agent named Henry ("call me Hank") Henry. Yeah, it can be fun fooling around with names. The James Bond girls' handles, of course, were often tongue-in-cheek double entendres.

728

(30 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

That's what I mean, Dags! Still, quite a thriller. And that closing scene was great.

729

(19 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

There are some authors who do not want to be bothered with nits, and an in-line review is an excellent vehicle for pointing those out. But it can be much more, including suggestions about chapter organization and character reactions/thoughts. In addition, a closing comment can incorporate anything one might say in a "regular" review, minus the nits. I like the in-line review, both giving and receiving. It saves me time to point out issues with the former, and facilitates manuscript correction with the latter. The author you referenced may not understand this and/or might not want writing errors pointed out. Either way, he should have explained that in his response.

730

(30 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

And don't forget Grisham's "The Firm." Yes, he's a master of the legal thriller. Connelly has written more than just his Harry Bosch detective stories, which are mainly in the mystery genre, but even some of those I'd classify as thrillers. IMO, one doesn't need multiple chase scenes or fights on Mt. Rushmore to claim thriller rights. A requirement of an action-driven plot would eliminate most psychological thrillers. Good guys, though perhaps flawed themselves, overcoming sinister forces out to do them in is what I'd consider the hallmark of thrillers. "Notorious" had hardly any action. And speaking of Hitchcock, what about "Vertigo"? Two action scenes - one at the beginning and one at the end. Both are definitely thrillers. Harlan Coben - I forgot about him! - doesn't depend on nail-biting action in his stories. But it sure doesn't hurt to have a climactic physical confrontation scene at the end! smile

731

(30 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

I agree, but his horror was "thrilling." smile

732

(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Thanks! Didn't know that. But then, how could I?

733

(30 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

She's more in the mystery category. Same applies to Cornwell, both Kellermans, and Lescroart. Not that there's anything wrong with that. smile

734

(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

For example, after posting the above, I either have to click on 'Go back to the Next Big Writer Premium Group' or 'jack the knife' to get me back to a page where the Home button appears. Unnecessary clicking.

735

(4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Another thing to make our lives easier, Sol, would be to have the Home button always there to click on no matter what page we're on. You had this feature in the old site. Home know means the individual's home, rather that the site's, and that's okay. But now I have to click on my profile or another of my pages in the menu in order to get that Home button after I've left Home to review or whatever. A ubiquitous "Home" would save me some clicks - and annoyance.

736

(30 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

My favorites are Nelson DeMille, Michael Connelly, Greg Iles, Robert Crais, Vince Flynn (RIP). I've read Clancy, of course - stories are good, though a little too techno-geek for me - and also Silva. Paul Erdman was known for writing financial thrillers - right up your alley, Cobber. Clive Cussler tells some wild, but quite entertaining stories. Michael Crichton (another RIP) spun some hair-raising yarns based on potential technology. I channeled him, actually, when I wrote "The Side Effect." I've heard Lee Child, with his Jack Reacher series, is good, but he's still on my to-read list. John Sandford is more mystery/crime than thriller, but he's had some good books with his "Prey" series. Enough for now. Any more authors I should check out, folks?

737

(30 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

I like reading thrillers, so I naturally gravitated to the genre for my own stories. Question: Who are your favorite thriller writers? There may be some I've overlooked, so would appreciate getting these names.

The Jack the Ripper murders. Never solved, and even more interesting because of the prominent people theorized as suspects, such as Prince Albert and Lewis Carroll. The Black Dahlia murder in 1940s LA also fascinating because of the gruesome nature (she was cut in half) and it was never solved. The kidnapping and murder of the Lindbergh baby remains controversial to this day despite the fact a suspect was convicted. Ditto the treason trial and subsequent execution of the Rosenbergs.

739

(2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sol, I noticed that in the message board of the home page, there is no "In-line review replies" category. But there is "Regular review replies." So in order to see if an author I'd given an in-line review to had responded, I'd have to keep going back to that particular chapter to check - if I could remember which one it was! Can this be added as a category in that list? It would make life easier.

740

(17 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

I read a lot! smile

741

(17 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

Well, Dags, in the old days a doc had to rely on the PHYSICAL EXAMINATION to make a diagnosis. He didn't have MRIs and ultrasounds to help. I remember being a medical student rotating through Surgery when a senior resident pontificated, "The physical exam ain't worth the powder to blow it up." And that was a long time ago! In the old days, a surgeon, based on his findings and the medical history related by the patient, would hoist the kid onto the kitchen table, give some ether - if he had some - through a gauze mask, and take out the kid's appendix. "Memoirs of a Small-Town Surgeon" by John Brooks Wheeler (1935) makes for some fascinating reading. That small town was in Vermont, so I have some bias in that regard. smile I admire those old guys, the pioneers, who blazed the trail for future surgeons to follow. They knew their stuff! Sorry for the rant, but your post struck a chord with me.

742

(8 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

You likely plan to get some mileage from those names, but the joke might get a bit old before the end of the story. Just a thought.

743

(35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Basic)

Aw, c'mon, njc. Building walls? That's not what we're about. The purpose of groups is to gather like-minded writers together to share ideas, discuss issues related to the particular genres. At least that was my motivation for starting a group. Most of the time, though, the group just serves as the place to post a story appropriate for the genre. A place for those who like that kind of story to go to and find a story to their liking. How can it be clique-ish if anyone can join a specific group if they think it suits them? And join more than one group? We're a family of writers, each member trying to achieve a success that meets the individual's definition of it.  So have some fun and take advantage of the wealth of talent available here - in whatever group(s) meets your fancy. The paranoia you expressed is misplaced, in my view.

744

(3 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Me, too.

745

(17 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

Oop[s, I meant Kwai, rather than Quai. My bad!!

746

(17 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

Okay, in The Bridge on the River Quai, at the end, when William Holden gets killed, Jack Hawkins gets defensive with his Thai women bearers, and protests that he had no choice. What? To kill Holden with his mortars? No, Holden was killed by Japanese rifle fire. I never got that scene.

In NBNW, the plot from that point on depended on Cary sitting across from Eva in the dining car. So how could that be "arranged" on purpose? And in the very beginning, the fortuitous event of Cary just happening to be there when the victim is knifed and then getting the knife in his hand... But I didn't care! It was exciting, I like Cary Grant, and it was a good movie!

In Heat, with Pacino and DeNiro, when DeNiro's crew is coming out of the bank they just robbed, Pacino, who's heading to the bank but is still blocks away, somehow can see that far and says, "They're already coming out of the bank!" And then at the end, from a similar distance away, he sees DeNiro's girlfriend waiting for him in the car. And then, when DeNiro is running away, Pacino just happens to guess right on the direction he took. But I still liked that flick! The shootout scene in the streets of LA - based on a real-life shootout, I've heard - is awesome. Great acting by all concerned, including Val Kilmer.

I'll think of some more, given the time. The point is that, though some WTF moments occur in films, the good ones don't let those moments ruin the movie.

747

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

njc wrote:

Can/will Createspace allow both ebook and paper?  With paper and Amazon who actually fulfills the orders?  Does Amazon do it, or do you have to handle the individual orders?

CreateSpace does both e-book and print, depending on what you want.  Amazon takes care of the orders.

748

(17 replies, posted in Thriller/Mystery/Suspense)

Well, Cary Grant was told to go there, if my memory serves. But there were other plot holes in that film, and they didn't bother me. Great movie!

I discovered a minor plot hole in my novel, "Teammates," that no TNBW reviewer spotted, and it got past my picky-picky editor as well. So I'm going to fix it. Somebody, out of the millions who will read the book, would be bound to spot it. smile

749

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

So as not to appear like I'm ignoring your post, Dags, even though we've discussed this in another venue, your suggestion didn't work - just made the glitch smaller. But thanks for trying to help!

750

(10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Okay, Sol, the scroller still doesn't go to the bottom of my connections list when I want to send a message to one of the last two names on the list. Now I can see the names I couldn't before, but my last two connections - including you - aren't visible. If I make two more connections, then your name will show on the list, it seems. Can't this bug be fixed? I'd hate to make new connections just so I can send a private message to a now-hidden-from-view older connection.