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GPyrenees wrote:

Saw Bette Midler at Madison Square Garden last Friday. Probably not your cuppa but man, she sure can sing even if she's a little worn around the edges. Hey we all get older, even you.  wink  I had front row seats, natch. 

Here she is, toward the end of the show, with Darlene Love (the security guys were driven about stopping people from taking photographs and videos, so this is the best one I could find on YouTube -  you know I don't watch concerts virtually, when I'm sitting right there!) :

http://youtu.be/zMEA7iqLE6M

Love the Divine M - two of the best songs ever written: The Rose and Wind Beneath My Wings (yeah, I can do those) - but forget Bette and DL in that video and give me the gal dressed in orange. I'm sure you can figure which one I mean who steals the show immo. Take care. Vern

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(37 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

There are no concrete rules to writing a good story whether you're talking prologues, grammar, punctuation, dialogue, whatever; if you make it enticing to the reader, then they will read and if not, they won't. Pretty simple really, in a complicated way. Take care. Vern

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njc wrote:

  But the way the inline-comment system works, the comment is started as soon as the capture occurs, and there is no chance to correct it.  Add the limit that you cannot overlap comment captures and this becomes a major obstacle to saying what you are trying to say about what you're trying to say it about.

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It is a pain in the ass. I have been able at times to cancel the original highlight and go back and try from one end or the other or even inside a particular word and get it to accept what I really want, but that is still a long shot and with a lot of unnecessary work which results in my just throwing up my hands most of time and just try to explain my intent in the comments. It is teaching me patience - very slowly - while expanding my four letter vocabulary exponentially, lol. Take care. Vern

janet reid wrote:
vern wrote:

The drabble, which is what this contest is, equates to 100 words period. All the other mistakes such as the "members" already corrected and the "200 words" which as already mentioned is for the double drouble, an entirely different animal for contest purposes, are all just that, obvious mistakes. All these errors/incongruences come about because the powers that be simply copy rules from previous contests without going through and making the appropriate changes. And of course it could all be an intentional ploy to increase our editing skills by finding these mistakes, but since it happens on almost every new contest, it really isn't that effective in improving our powers of observation. We know it is the same mistakes over and over, so we simply gloss over it and abide by the rules as we know they should actually be stated for a particular contest of this type. Or conversely we can apply for the proofreaders job. Anyone know how much it pays? Take care. Vern

Hah! But how to know whether it should be 100 words (and not 200) or whether it is indeed a a double drabble contest and not a drabble contest Vern?!

I guess the job is yours if you know the answer to that. My guess is it would pay something like one month's premium membership for every 100 contests "checked". Quite lucrative. wink

The contest is the Apple DRABBLE so by definition is 100 words. I think I'll have to wait on a better offer for the job, lol. Take care. Vern

The drabble, which is what this contest is, equates to 100 words period. All the other mistakes such as the "members" already corrected and the "200 words" which as already mentioned is for the double drouble, an entirely different animal for contest purposes, are all just that, obvious mistakes. All these errors/incongruences come about because the powers that be simply copy rules from previous contests without going through and making the appropriate changes. And of course it could all be an intentional ploy to increase our editing skills by finding these mistakes, but since it happens on almost every new contest, it really isn't that effective in improving our powers of observation. We know it is the same mistakes over and over, so we simply gloss over it and abide by the rules as we know they should actually be stated for a particular contest of this type. Or conversely we can apply for the proofreaders job. Anyone know how much it pays? Take care. Vern

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A.T.Schlesinger wrote:

Vern!

You have an avatar!

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Told you I would get one with the new site or another thousand or so posts whichever came first; the new site barely won only because it had a two year head start, lol. Take care.

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You'd probably get more and better choices if you Google it. You should be able to find one for the type editing you want and hopefully within the price range. I would suggest having them do a sample of a couple chapters or so to make sure it is what you are looking for as there are many different levels of substance and quality running amok out there. One might lean more toward grammar and punctuation where another might be more inclined to focus on plot, pace, transition, etc. You might want a line by line or more of an overview. Good luck. Take care. Vern

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Norm d'Plume wrote:

Vern, surely there was never any doubt that I would respond. :-)

I need to adjust the wording I use in the book's next draft. I think it's more correct to say they're destined to lead the quest, without knowing if they'll succeed. Even that isn't quite right, since one of them is given the option to walk away even before he begins.

Ahh, but if he walks away, then that is his destiny and always was. If he changes his mind again, then that is and always was his destiny (and yours for writing it thus), and so on and so on. You can never escape, lol. Take care. Vern

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Of course anyone/everyone will always live up to their destiny/fate. I mean, by definition, whatever they do or happens to them, it is inevitably their destiny/fate. So no, you can't escape it because it is simply what you end up doing or experiencing and the only way to escape that is to not exist. It in no way means things are preordained or such, it merely means that no matter what happens then that is/was your destiny/fate. So my destiny was to answer this question, yours will be however you respond to it or not. The same logic is true for your characters; no matter how you write them, it is their destiny/fate emanating from yours.  Take care. Vern

One huge advantage is the fact that we're not waiting years on this new site while navigating the glitches and shortcomings of the old. Improvements from our suggestions can be made (or not) without waiting for this place to come into existence. It is here now to tweak and make even better as our voices are heard and answered with a dash of wisdom and a pinch of economics. Take care. Vern

Norm d'Plume wrote:

I use Premium for certain posts (e.g., "I need a futurist/biologist/chemist/geneticist for the year 4017") that logically belong in the sci-fi group, but the experts I need aren't necessarily members of that group. I'm not sure there's an ideal solution for that one.

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Actually there is/was a pretty ideal solution. The central forums from days of yore had a specific category, Ask the Expert. That's where you posted such questions and generally received valuable and useful input from various members with varying credentials and viewpoints. And therein lies the rub. You post such a question now and many will never see it or when someone asks something similar later you can't find the original thread to refer them to so folks end up repeating the same answer offered previously or else decide the hell with it, I just answered that question last week. And on and on. Take care. Vern

amy s wrote:

The only thing I would find helpful is to have the most recent commenter listed after each topic. We used to have that on the old site, so it might not be a big deal to change. That way, if it isn't my name, I know to check out the post.

It does give you the most recent commenter under the Last Post column:

Today 08:23:46
by amy s

Take care. Vern

A long stretch of my two cents on a few of things discussed in this thread:

Most active vs most recent posts: For starters, “most active” can be a bit of a misnomer. Assuming you define “most active” as the threads with the most responses, then you could have old threads with many responses in the past which are not really “active” in the present. Yet, they would stay at the top of the list indefinitely if threads were arranged in order of activity. That makes no sense to me.

As is, posts are listed as the most recent (other than the few stickies). This makes sense since most of the time that is what we are looking for, not something that was active last week or last month or whenever. If a thread continues to receive responses even every few days or so, it will still remain near the top of the list of threads.

Link to start of thread or last post: I suppose it would be nice to be able to choose where you wanted to go, beginning or end, but … wait, you can do that fairly simply as it stands for those listed on the front page or not. If you click on the individual threads listed under a group, then that will take you to the start of that thread. But if you would rather go directly to the last post of that thread, then you’ve got one additional click, but lots more options from there. Instead of the individual thread, click on NEW FORUM POST under the Premium group or GROUP FORUM under other groups. From there you get a list of all the threads under that group and you can choose if you want to start at the beginning or end of the thread. If you wish to start at the beginning, then click on the title of the thread. If you wish to start with the last post of the thread then click on “Last Post” to the far right which surprisingly will take you to, ta da, the last post of that thread.

Show Your Posts: One thing to keep in mind regardless of how posts are listed now or may be in the future is that you can click on Show Your Posts to quickly see threads in which you have participated and may want to browse again. I use it quite often, but from comments, it doesn’t seem to be effectively utilized in the search for older threads.

Shelves:  I would agree that shelving the shelves would be an easy fix to free up more space for more forum links on the front page. And since they are ones listed by our connections, they could easily just be attached to our connections pages should we be interested to take a look. But I’m not sure why we actually need to free up more space for forum links and if we do need more space, why not simply have one link to a group forum rather than list that group’s individual most recent posts. More times than not there is not any activity even listed under the forum groups other than Premium. There are four other groups listed on my front page and no new threads have been listed in any of them for at least two days and some lots longer. That is a major waste of space if that is a concern. Still, it is not in itself a big deal imo.

Central Forum Issues: I agree wholeheartedly with Linda Lee that the most meaningful and entertaining forum is something like the old site central meeting place. Although I am well aware of the possibility, yea, probability, that “issues” will/do develop, the pros greatly outnumber the cons in this scenario. Of course differences of opinion are going to arise and words sometimes exchanged in the heat of the moment, but very rarely does it come to the point where the entire thread needs to be shut down. Most folks remain at least tolerable while defending a position. And if the “enter at your own risk” (so to speak) experiment in the latter days of the old site doesn’t always work, then a last resort solution to curb overzealous remarks could be imposed on a case by case basis with whatever moderator option is deemed necessary. A bad apple here or there shouldn’t spoil our appetite for the other delicious fruits of our labor. As far as changes to the number of links to forums on the front page (or other suggestions within this thread), if it is a simple/economical fix for Sol, and it is a priority for a lot of folks, then I would say do it. For me personally though, the greatest and bestest fix would be the Central Forum discussed.

Just my opinion as always. Take care. Vern

Congrats to all. Take care. Vern

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njc wrote:

Mobile doesn't have those links.  "READ" is under the menu button, and brings you to a tabbed page.  None of the tabs is for contests.

The problem with mobile interfaces is that they often seem to use a different code base entirely, so you can't make any assumptions about how one side works based on the other.

On the Home Depot web sit, if you want the aisle and bay for an item, you need the not-for-mobile website.  At Lowes, to get the same info, you need the mobile site.

Houston, we have a problem, lol. Good luck. Take care. Vern

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Preacher wrote:

I use word 2010 for my documents. I was fooling around with the paragraph styles and kind of set one up that has the times new roman and 12 pt font size. what about the margins or whatever they call it? is it supposed to be a ceetain number for each side. i currently have it set for justify left, times new roman, 12 pt font with the .5 indent for the first paragraph of each sentence. is there anything else i should include for a normal paragraph style?

That's really all you NEED to do in a draft. If an agent/editor wants anything more or less then you can change it at your leisure to accommodate whatever "demands" they might have. By the time you have finished your book, you will probably be an expert on the use of Word and can give the powers that be whatever they wish. Until then, I would keep it simple and spend the time on finishing the project. Good luck. Take care. Vern

Edited for PS: Most manuscripts are now sent as an attachment so the receiving party can change whatever they wish on their end; all of which means the exact formatting is not as critical as it used to be with a hard copy being sent. However, you still want to follow any explicit guidelines an agent/editor might request.

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njc wrote:
penang wrote:
njc wrote:

I don't see those links.

Do you see a menu button on the top right? On my ipad, I have a menu button and if I click on that and scroll down  there is a link for contests.

But it doesn't show the master contests page, only my entries.  There's no way I can find to get to the master Contests page, or to any particular contest.

I can only assume you can get to your Home page from a mobile device since I don't use them. If that assumption is correct, then on your Home page you can click on the READ option at the top between the POST YOUR WRITING and your user name (njc) which are highlighted in dark blue and light blue respectively. Click on the Writing Contests at the bottom of the READ menu and you will get a list of the contests from which you can select all the entries, rules, or whatever (even closed contests). Hope that helps. Take care. Vern

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Different agents/editors may want slightly different formats, but generally you can't go too wrong with Times New Roman with 12 pt. Do a search of any agent/editor you wish to query and they will show what format they want if it is important to them. But it really doesn't matter which you use for your draft because you can change the whole thing in Word merely by highlighting parts or all of it (select all) and change the font, etc with a click of the mouse.

To set up your para indents, spacing, etc. just click on "page layout" and select from the top menu whatever you wish to tinker with. If you are within a document and wish to change something in a section, just highlight what you want to change and right click and select from the menu.

If there is anything in Word you don't know how to do, you can do a Google search and more than likely you will find a solution (or several) since it is very widely used. I have never searched for anything without finding a solution. A bit of trial and error playing around is a really good way to get comfortable with the process. Good luck. Take care. Vern

Edited for PS: You could always buy Word for Dummies (real title) which is a very easy to use guide to most anything you want to know.

I've been watching this thread for a while and find it interesting that most folks seem to think you actually need some type technical explanation. Pretty much the exact same scenario happened on an episode of the TV series Stargate. An advanced civilization sterilized an entire planet in order to take over the resources when all the inhabitants finally died out. They were going to do the same thing to Earth until the heroes found out their scheme and stopped it just in time of course.

There was no technical explanation given other than the "gift" would eliminate all disease (which it did also - the carrot for the acceptance of the people - while making them unknowingly sterile) but the effect was clearly shown through the results. By the time the curse was realized, it was too late; the whole population died out and the aliens had a new planet to strip without firing a bullet OR explanation. The non technical aspect didn't detract or diminish the storyline and if you don't have a specific technical cause, you don't have to worry about making future convoluted explanations for any discrepancies, etc. which might arrive. Just a thought. Take care. Vern

Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

My one worry is the 5 year thing. Not sure I'd like to give up my rights that long. Also, is this 5-year thing only for e-books? How does that affect print books?

You still retain print rights; they acquire ebook and audio. One big caveat though is that most print publishers would probably also want the ebook and audio rights if they were interested in publishing a book. You can get more info by clicking on the link Sol provided and then going through the various options presented. Take care. Vern

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Sincerest condolences. Family is priority one. Your strength is evident and admired. Take care. Vern

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On your home page click on in-line reviews (View All) and then select posted in-line reviews and it should be there as a draft. If not, it is probably lost in cyberspace. Good luck. Take care. Vern

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A few things to note: Your saying NOBODY has reviewed you is incorrect; you had at least one in-line review in March (PS: that's when you joined so it hasn't been 4 months as you stated). You might check their comments and your response to see if you could do something different to encourage the continuation of reviews.

Your user name might create some confusion since you haven't posted any poems.  I for one would think you were a poet looking at your name and most likely wouldn't look up your profile and/or portfolio to see if anything interested me. I review very few poems and those are generally from folks I've come to know through other genres. Perhaps I'm not the only one.

You have posted very few reviews (and no in-lines) for other writers considering the amount of time you have been a member; reviews beget reviews - good ones at least.

Your timing just might be a little off. You could have come to the forums and asked politely how you might receive more reviews and most likely you would have gotten significant response just as you did from this post which has already precipitated several reviews. Just maybe an earlier request could have lessened your frustration level considerably.

Just a few thoughts to ponder. Good luck. Take care. Vern

Edited for PS in text above.

If you never open the door, you'll never know what is on the other side; windows can be so deceiving. Take care. Vern

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whitepaws wrote:
Linda Lee wrote:

Also bumping the request to make keeping track of where you left off on novel reviews as easier process. It was tough on the old site, but even tougher on this one. Perhaps a color or highlight of anything you've reviewed in the chapter list drop down? Or leaving the check mark at the last spot you reviewed?

I agree.  I'd like to follow some of the authors I've read so it would be great to make this an easier option.

If you use in-line reviews then it is already there; it shows you which chapters you have reviewed when you open the menu of chapters by clicking the little arrow to the right of the chapter number/title of whichever chapter you open. Take care. Vern