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jack the knife wrote:

I've read all the posts on this subject so far and, sorry, Sol, but I don't see the need for this shred group. If an author can't take the heat of unfavorable critiques, they can leave. If reviewers are mean-spirited and vitriolic, they can be removed from the site. And we already have a Fight Club group for members who like to duke it out. As far as I know, the Premium Group does not require "niceties" and "encouragement" from reviewers, though most reviewers will try to find something positive in their critiques. They chose to review it after all when they could have passed on it. Finally, I wouldn't want the Premium Group to get the reputation of the place where reviews aren't "honest."

I don't think anyone is saying the Premium Group's reviews aren't "honest". There are however different ways of stating an honest opinion. If someone says, "Your plot could use some work, but it has potential" or conversely says, "Your plot stinks and you should buy a grammar book and study it before trying to write" they both could be honest opinions, but one might be more readily acceptable for someone new to the game depending on the thickness of their skin so to speak. You currently have all kinds of different groups available and people may join or not join depending upon their preferences. The Shred Group is no different. Just as you say, if an author can't take the heat, they don't have to participate any more than they do in any other group. You in essence argue against your own argument.

Yes, there is the Fight Club and we've had the Shred forum for ages and guess what, they have not significantly impacted the Premium Group in any way as far as I can tell, and certainly not as much as say The Basic Group or other groups which are a part of the site. Personally I don't see any need for any group other than the Premium Group, but as long as we're going to have them (and Sol says we are) then one more which will probably be more useful than most of the others and no one has to join any more than any of the others, then it appears to be a good idea to move the reviewing process to a more thought provoking level for a certain segment of the site. Don't know if I will or not, but no one has to use it just as with any other group. Take care. Vern

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j p lundstrom wrote:

It'll be interesting to see how the shred group develops. But I'm curious about a few things.

1) If the Shred group members insist they are doing nothing but offering the truth about grammar, spelling, etc., why are they separating? Isn't that what we signed up for?

2) If new members are to be offered nothing but 'kind,' non-confrontational reviews, aren't they being robbed of the critiques they signed up for?

and 3) Aren't those pandering, say-nothing-of-substance reviews what people spent a month complaining about last year, and still regularly disparage as ineffective? Who wants 'em?

Give me a shot of truth serum from the Sheriff or Keanu anytime. I want to know what needs fixing.  JP

I think the separation is because some people, certainly not all, but enough, may not be prepared for the sometimes overly blunt reviews which some (again certainly not all or even a large percentage) provide. There are those who are more sensitive to criticism and there are those who are less tactful in reviewing. It only makes sense that the two have the option for a different environment. No one is required to function in one or the other; there is flexibility for using either or, or both. With the added option, what might be considered "rude' in one forum might be run of the mill in the other. Different skins for different folks or even the same folks at different levels of development. That's the way I see it and applaud the new option. Take care. Vern

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njc wrote:

Please tell me you don't want it in pink!

Seriously, there is a market in pink firearms and accessories.  I'm guessing the only reason there's no market for lace is that it would get caught when the weapon is drawn.  cool

For the life of me, I don't understand the stupid gender association with a color. Pink, blue, boy, girl, do small kids know the difference or care? I wore pink shirts as a teenager when they were somewhat in vogue and still wear them on occasion. Got and get more compliments than negative reactions. A color is pretty or not regardless of what gender it's on. Humans are stupid animals, lol. Take care. Vern

njc wrote:

It looks like the Democrats like government power more than they hate Trump: http://www.washingtonexaminer.com/liber … le/2646052   Of course, given the rumors of FBI abuses soon to be revealed, and the FBI's failure to keep records of anti-Trump communication in their ranks, this might be expected.

Look for disclosures as this year's campaigns ramp up.

I would say it is not only the Dems who "hate" Trump, a lot of Pubs just won't admit it on record now that he is president. That goes to show they like power as much or more than the Dems. Right now the Pubs have almost absolute power and they have demonstrated the effects of that. There should be some type provision that any law must have bipartisan support so they would be forced to compromise when needed. Furthermore, once this stupid shutdown is solved, they should unanimously pass a law that from this point on every bill must pass on it's own merit and not tied to something else just to get the votes to pass something that won't pass on it's own merit. And then they should all freaking resign. Take care. Vern

njc wrote:

I'll agree with you on getting rid of the business tax.  But try and convince Chuck Schumer or Nancy Pelosi to go along with it.

They're about as likely to go along with it as Ryan and McConnell are to let it come to light. Not going to happen unless by some miracle they impose term limits to take the preponderance of donor money out of the equation. Until then, the Republicans are only whistling at dogs about being concerned about over-taxation of business. Take care. Vern

njc wrote:

Apple just paid 38 Billion dollars in taxes in anticipation of bringing 350 Billion back from overseas, where it was parked to protect it from a double-taxation regime inflicted by no other industrial country.

The first lie which comes from Trump's version of the announcement is that it's not 350 billion, rather around 250 billion. Yeah, that's a lot of money, but there was nothing in Apple's announcement that it would spend that money in the U.S. It doesn't need that money for any foreseeable U.S. investments.

The second lie in Trump's version is that Apple did not need the tax change to park that money in the U.S. They would not have to pay the tax until the money was spent which is probably no time soon since as stated they have enough U.S. generated profit to cover their needs. No spending, no taxes.

I've stated this in other forums, but I'll say it again here that if the Republicans or Democrats want to reduce the taxes on business, it is a simple solution. Do away with the business tax totally instead of playing their sham game. Change the code so that any profit must be passed on to individuals whether owners, stockholders, or employees. A certain percentage could be set aside for future funding of research or capital needs, but even that must be used within a reasonable time say ten years. Any additional needs beyond that could be funded by standard means of borrowing or bringing in more investors.

But politicians of either stripe won't make such a simple change to the tax code because the wealthy donors would then have to pay fair taxes on what they can now avoid and couldn't cry all the way to the bank about unfair business taxes. And the beat goes on. Take care. Vern

Oh, for sure, we don't need any regulations on business or anything else. Hell, who needs to inspect food or roads and bridges; who needs speed limits or airline rules for maintenance or flight patterns; who needs rules on monopolies who run others out of business so they can jack up prices; who needs rules on loan sharks or banking institutions which prey upon the unwitting or desperate; who needs taxes for schools when their kids don't attend; who needs rules against fraud or bullying or stealing intellectual property; who needs anything the government provides when one can do everything for themselves you know like build a business with no help from anyone like employees, public roads to transport goods, machines to produce products, office supplies, and on and on.

Survival of the fittest is the only rule we need kind of like the dinosaurs before the climate change they overlooked. Dog eat dog. Rules, who needs them? Certainly not Republicans who gerrymander districts to their advantage; no rules against that. Republicans surely don't need the stupid rules of the electoral college, they can win through their own brilliance and charisma despite the numbers. Throw all the rules out; hell, they're all crooked Hillary's doing. No rules, no taxes, no safety nets; just pure unadulterated macho man. Good idea. Take care. Vern

Before all is said and done, the shut down will be crooked Hillary's fault. And roughly a third of the population will believe the pathological liar they deem to be Lord Trump. Take care. Vern

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Seamus wrote:
vern wrote:
Seamus wrote:

And coming soon to a forum near you [drum roll]
The The Ego Stroke Group Group
This group is for people who want to give and receive kind words aimed at encouragement even if there’s no hope.  Only post here if you are ready for banal platitudes and gold stars for participating. (Also great for credit hoarders.  50 words of empty, benign rhetoric = piles o’ points!)

LOL. This from one who has posted nothing and has reviewed zilch. It appears the only goal for this character is to try to stir a hornet's nest in the forums. It is quite laughable really. BTW, Ms, this is my thread so it won't be deleted like the one where you attacked forum authors for no reason unless deleted by Sol. Should you insist upon spewing more nonsense, it will remain for the amusement of all until that day comes if ever. As stated previously, I will be laughing at you, not with you. Take care. Vern

*Bows* God Vern has spoken.  I yield your post back to you.  I cry easily when other people laugh at me.  And sorry for calling you a curmudgeon.  Anybody can see that’s not true. How could I have been so insensitive.  *sticks tail between legs and runs away from Vern*

LOL! Take care. Vern

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Seamus wrote:

And coming soon to a forum near you [drum roll]
The The Ego Stroke Group Group
This group is for people who want to give and receive kind words aimed at encouragement even if there’s no hope.  Only post here if you are ready for banal platitudes and gold stars for participating. (Also great for credit hoarders.  50 words of empty, benign rhetoric = piles o’ points!)

LOL. This from one who has posted nothing and has reviewed zilch. It appears the only goal for this character is to try to stir a hornet's nest in the forums. It is quite laughable really. BTW, Ms, this is my thread so it won't be deleted like the one where you attacked forum authors for no reason unless deleted by Sol. Should you insist upon spewing more nonsense, it will remain for the amusement of all until that day comes if ever. As stated previously, I will be laughing at you, not with you. Take care. Vern

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Marilyn Johnson wrote:

This morning, feeling frobly-mobly, I was overwhelmed with dysania, but I knew I must get moving.  After my shower, I was overcome with shivviness, thanks to a gift to myself.  Though I want to write more on my new novel, I most likely will perendinate because I’m caught up with news of our kakistocracy and can’t unglue my eyes from the TV this morning.  So I presume I will be grufeling today since we have snow on the ground and I am reluctant to go outside.  I feel philogrobilized, but that can’t be, so I will watch the news and sympathize with the grumbletonians as they jeer the snollygosters and ultracrepidarians.  I hope my phone doesn’t ring because I am not into twattling today.

(OMG!  My spell-check is working overtime!)

What, you didn't include "callipygian" in this ensemble? Okay, my editing suggestion is to just throw it out at the end of the para with "... into twattling today while admiring my callipygian self in the mirror." Or such, lol. Take care. Vern

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We should be well acquainted with "kakistocracy" since we're living with it at present. I agree with Jack, we could use a bit more "callipygian" in our life, lol. Good list. Take care. Vern

If I must explain, I'm just testing to see if he really can play by ear. Take care. Vern

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njc wrote:

Most improbable romance.  No dream-worlds.  Max 3300 word.

For more frequent, lighter contests: caption contests.  Prize of 50 review points.

Don't really care what the subject is, but any number of review points would be pretty worthless to many who will never use what they already have. Take care. Vern

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SolN wrote:

Not sure what to say. I guess everyone is entitled to their opinion.

Ahh, he returns from The Great Pyramid. Observations and/or rumors do come alive in one's absence. What to say? Back in August of last year, you announced a contest for the next week. So you might see where the slow demise is coming from. The low level of current participation is a prescription for a slow death of stagnation with signs of early rigor mortis. Yes, it is only my opinion -- but is it really? It might also be a wake up call. Take care. Vern

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It’s hard to accept a slow death
You instinctively feel it
Though you try to deny it
The diagnosis is wrong
The charts are mixed up
The warning signs simply misinterpreted
You don’t want to talk about it
For fear that in itself will make it true
But you hear the whispers
And then the words of encouragement
There’s always hope
New treatments and methods on the horizon
Lots of time to find the miracle cure
We’ll plead with the creator
With faith anything is possible
In the beginning everyone stands tall
Your friends call more frequently
And then slowly they begin to tail off
Only the most inner circle is left
Despite new acquaintances along the way
They don’t really understand what it’s like
For they don’t feel the slow death
They don’t see the layers of the soul
Peeling off like onion skin
Bringing tears which you try to hide
With a brave façade that everything is normal
When every day that passes
No radical solutions come to light
And you realize that gnawing inside
Is growing stronger
Past promises slide further into the past
Still you cling to the few who remain
Committed to fight the honorable fight
Perhaps not ignore the inevitable
But rather face it head on
With dignity befitting what it once was
The slow death gives you time
To come to terms
To set priorities
For the time which remains
To pay tribute to all those
Who were an integral part
Of what once was
And will survive in our memories
Of The Next Big Writer
Before the slow death came

Take care. Vern

Oh, BTW, for you folks who haven't read any of Plum, let me tell you, it's a wonderfully zany novel by a very talented writer. You will not regret the read. And that's the truth .... (from Laugh In https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jJMKupYF14I ) Take care. Vern

Hi, Tirz, so glad to hear you've finished Plum; now I'm looking forward to finishing it. Take care. Vern

Marilyn Johnson wrote:

How about that, J P?  I didn't bash the president (though he needs it!).  smile

Unfortunately, Lord Trump has his supporters also; otherwise we wouldn't need to tell the truth about the pathological liar. Is it bashing to tell the truth? Trump seems to bash quite a bit without telling the truth.  Oh well, let the truth reign. Did I just bash His Assness? Hope so. Take care. Vern

You did use to get I think around 50 points once you joined (paid membership). Haven't checked on what the parameters are now since you can post stories for free. You generally get what you pay for. I don't think the "group" thing really works other than for a small minority, but the subject has come up several times and Sol shows no inclination to change it and it's his show even if captured by aliens for a few months, lol. "Where have all the promos gone, long time passing." Take care. Vern

In the beginning no one could post their writing unless they had a paid membership, they could only review. I reviewed for a few months before "joining" and thus had a big head start on points for posting; a whole lot less pressure that way with the points waiting so you can post at your convenience. Just a thought. Take care. Vern

Edited to clarify you couldn't post "writing" but you could post to the forums.

The aliens brought Sol back. He just appeared in another post. That camera and all the commotion in The Great Pyramid woke him up I think. Take care. Vern

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Hey, Sol is back. Guess there must be something else in that void of The Great Pyramid. Take care. Vern

The best I can tell, this is the last post by Sol:
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SolN 2017-11-03 13:48:01
SolN
Offline
That's strange. Let me check it out.
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Interestingly enough, it was reported that same day of November 3, 2017 that a giant void was discovered in the Great Pyramid of Giza using a new technique called muography. There is of yet no explanation for this void just as there is no forthcoming explanation for Sol's extended absence. Could there be a connection? Is that where Sol is hiding? A robot camera will soon be sent into the void to find out. We know Sol is out there somewhere. Maybe he will send a message should the camera spot him. Take care. Vern

Edited to add link: https://www.businessinsider.com.au/khuf … cs-2017-11

http://theweek.com/cartoons/745256/poli … -christmas

Take care. Vern