Before all is said and done, the shut down will be crooked Hillary's fault. And roughly a third of the population will believe the pathological liar they deem to be Lord Trump. Take care. Vern
451 2018-01-21 13:50:04
Re: Much to be thankful for (41 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
452 2018-01-21 02:21:48
Re: A Slow Death (44 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
vern wrote:Seamus wrote:And coming soon to a forum near you [drum roll]
The The Ego Stroke Group Group
This group is for people who want to give and receive kind words aimed at encouragement even if there’s no hope. Only post here if you are ready for banal platitudes and gold stars for participating. (Also great for credit hoarders. 50 words of empty, benign rhetoric = piles o’ points!)LOL. This from one who has posted nothing and has reviewed zilch. It appears the only goal for this character is to try to stir a hornet's nest in the forums. It is quite laughable really. BTW, Ms, this is my thread so it won't be deleted like the one where you attacked forum authors for no reason unless deleted by Sol. Should you insist upon spewing more nonsense, it will remain for the amusement of all until that day comes if ever. As stated previously, I will be laughing at you, not with you. Take care. Vern
*Bows* God Vern has spoken. I yield your post back to you. I cry easily when other people laugh at me. And sorry for calling you a curmudgeon. Anybody can see that’s not true. How could I have been so insensitive. *sticks tail between legs and runs away from Vern*
LOL! Take care. Vern
453 2018-01-21 00:48:12
Re: A Slow Death (44 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
And coming soon to a forum near you [drum roll]
The The Ego Stroke Group Group
This group is for people who want to give and receive kind words aimed at encouragement even if there’s no hope. Only post here if you are ready for banal platitudes and gold stars for participating. (Also great for credit hoarders. 50 words of empty, benign rhetoric = piles o’ points!)
LOL. This from one who has posted nothing and has reviewed zilch. It appears the only goal for this character is to try to stir a hornet's nest in the forums. It is quite laughable really. BTW, Ms, this is my thread so it won't be deleted like the one where you attacked forum authors for no reason unless deleted by Sol. Should you insist upon spewing more nonsense, it will remain for the amusement of all until that day comes if ever. As stated previously, I will be laughing at you, not with you. Take care. Vern
454 2018-01-18 20:22:55
Re: 20 Forgotten Words (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
This morning, feeling frobly-mobly, I was overwhelmed with dysania, but I knew I must get moving. After my shower, I was overcome with shivviness, thanks to a gift to myself. Though I want to write more on my new novel, I most likely will perendinate because I’m caught up with news of our kakistocracy and can’t unglue my eyes from the TV this morning. So I presume I will be grufeling today since we have snow on the ground and I am reluctant to go outside. I feel philogrobilized, but that can’t be, so I will watch the news and sympathize with the grumbletonians as they jeer the snollygosters and ultracrepidarians. I hope my phone doesn’t ring because I am not into twattling today.
(OMG! My spell-check is working overtime!)
What, you didn't include "callipygian" in this ensemble? Okay, my editing suggestion is to just throw it out at the end of the para with "... into twattling today while admiring my callipygian self in the mirror." Or such, lol. Take care. Vern
455 2018-01-18 13:51:52
Re: 20 Forgotten Words (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
We should be well acquainted with "kakistocracy" since we're living with it at present. I agree with Jack, we could use a bit more "callipygian" in our life, lol. Good list. Take care. Vern
456 2018-01-16 03:11:43
Re: Anyone want to play again? (60 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
If I must explain, I'm just testing to see if he really can play by ear. Take care. Vern
457 2018-01-15 04:07:41
Re: A Slow Death (44 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Most improbable romance. No dream-worlds. Max 3300 word.
For more frequent, lighter contests: caption contests. Prize of 50 review points.
Don't really care what the subject is, but any number of review points would be pretty worthless to many who will never use what they already have. Take care. Vern
458 2018-01-15 00:18:21
Re: A Slow Death (44 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Not sure what to say. I guess everyone is entitled to their opinion.
Ahh, he returns from The Great Pyramid. Observations and/or rumors do come alive in one's absence. What to say? Back in August of last year, you announced a contest for the next week. So you might see where the slow demise is coming from. The low level of current participation is a prescription for a slow death of stagnation with signs of early rigor mortis. Yes, it is only my opinion -- but is it really? It might also be a wake up call. Take care. Vern
459 2018-01-14 18:17:39
Topic: A Slow Death (44 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
It’s hard to accept a slow death
You instinctively feel it
Though you try to deny it
The diagnosis is wrong
The charts are mixed up
The warning signs simply misinterpreted
You don’t want to talk about it
For fear that in itself will make it true
But you hear the whispers
And then the words of encouragement
There’s always hope
New treatments and methods on the horizon
Lots of time to find the miracle cure
We’ll plead with the creator
With faith anything is possible
In the beginning everyone stands tall
Your friends call more frequently
And then slowly they begin to tail off
Only the most inner circle is left
Despite new acquaintances along the way
They don’t really understand what it’s like
For they don’t feel the slow death
They don’t see the layers of the soul
Peeling off like onion skin
Bringing tears which you try to hide
With a brave façade that everything is normal
When every day that passes
No radical solutions come to light
And you realize that gnawing inside
Is growing stronger
Past promises slide further into the past
Still you cling to the few who remain
Committed to fight the honorable fight
Perhaps not ignore the inevitable
But rather face it head on
With dignity befitting what it once was
The slow death gives you time
To come to terms
To set priorities
For the time which remains
To pay tribute to all those
Who were an integral part
Of what once was
And will survive in our memories
Of The Next Big Writer
Before the slow death came
Take care. Vern
460 2018-01-08 14:37:07
Re: Plum Crazy-_Writing Again (6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Oh, BTW, for you folks who haven't read any of Plum, let me tell you, it's a wonderfully zany novel by a very talented writer. You will not regret the read. And that's the truth .... (from Laugh In https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jJMKupYF14I ) Take care. Vern
461 2018-01-08 05:46:27
Re: Plum Crazy-_Writing Again (6 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hi, Tirz, so glad to hear you've finished Plum; now I'm looking forward to finishing it. Take care. Vern
462 2017-12-30 14:54:22
Re: Attention NEW Members: Before You Post (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
How about that, J P? I didn't bash the president (though he needs it!).
Unfortunately, Lord Trump has his supporters also; otherwise we wouldn't need to tell the truth about the pathological liar. Is it bashing to tell the truth? Trump seems to bash quite a bit without telling the truth. Oh well, let the truth reign. Did I just bash His Assness? Hope so. Take care. Vern
463 2017-12-29 17:47:47
Re: Attention NEW Members: Before You Post (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
You did use to get I think around 50 points once you joined (paid membership). Haven't checked on what the parameters are now since you can post stories for free. You generally get what you pay for. I don't think the "group" thing really works other than for a small minority, but the subject has come up several times and Sol shows no inclination to change it and it's his show even if captured by aliens for a few months, lol. "Where have all the promos gone, long time passing." Take care. Vern
464 2017-12-29 15:24:54
Re: Attention NEW Members: Before You Post (11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
In the beginning no one could post their writing unless they had a paid membership, they could only review. I reviewed for a few months before "joining" and thus had a big head start on points for posting; a whole lot less pressure that way with the points waiting so you can post at your convenience. Just a thought. Take care. Vern
Edited to clarify you couldn't post "writing" but you could post to the forums.
465 2017-12-29 04:55:56
Re: WANTED: grist for the next contest mill. (47 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
The aliens brought Sol back. He just appeared in another post. That camera and all the commotion in The Great Pyramid woke him up I think. Take care. Vern
466 2017-12-29 04:53:28
Re: Readers' poll (32 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hey, Sol is back. Guess there must be something else in that void of The Great Pyramid. Take care. Vern
467 2017-12-28 05:29:37
Re: WANTED: grist for the next contest mill. (47 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
The best I can tell, this is the last post by Sol:
***
SolN 2017-11-03 13:48:01
SolN
Offline
That's strange. Let me check it out.
***
Interestingly enough, it was reported that same day of November 3, 2017 that a giant void was discovered in the Great Pyramid of Giza using a new technique called muography. There is of yet no explanation for this void just as there is no forthcoming explanation for Sol's extended absence. Could there be a connection? Is that where Sol is hiding? A robot camera will soon be sent into the void to find out. We know Sol is out there somewhere. Maybe he will send a message should the camera spot him. Take care. Vern
Edited to add link: https://www.businessinsider.com.au/khuf … cs-2017-11
468 2017-12-27 15:50:01
Re: Much to be thankful for (41 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
http://theweek.com/cartoons/745256/poli … -christmas
Take care. Vern
469 2017-12-27 15:35:28
Re: WANTED: grist for the next contest mill. (47 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
But don't forget, popularity is what makes a best-seller.
That is absolutely true EXCEPT on a writing site such as this where it becomes more of a reciprocal relationship. However, I'm amenable to any judging system approved by the majority of authors who deem to enter. Take care. Vern
470 2017-12-27 05:25:10
Re: -40 degrees in Calgary with wind chill (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
That's 72 degrees below the freezing temperature of water! Reminds me of that Star Trek episode where the away team was freezing to death on a planet and the transporters were out of commission. A few dozen episodes later it turns out the Enterprise carries a shuttlecraft. That's the kind of error that would turn Star Wars fans rabid. Fortunately, they're currently busy despising The Last Jedi. It rates worse than the prequel trilogy, but will still easily top $1B before everyone realizes it sucks and stops going. And then J.J. Abrams, who never saw a movie franchise he didn't want to reboot, will destroy the final episode in the new trilogy.
Well, somebody will appreciate global warming. Went to see The Last Jedi this afternoon and it certainly wasn't the best. Almost constant action, but the plot is a bit lacking. Did enjoy a few moments of humor and I'm always up for a good laugh. Saw it in that RPX format (or something to that effect) whatever that stands for; didn't really pay attention except for the ten bucks charge and designated seating). And despite leaving the house early, because of the traffic I got there too late to stand in the long line for popcorn -- my main reason for going to movies -- or else I couldn't find my seat in the dark with everyone yelling at me to sit down, so that didn't help my disposition. But my wife did meet me afterward for supper, so all was well. Still, next time, I'll probably wait for the TV version. Take care. Vern
471 2017-12-27 02:34:48
Re: WANTED: grist for the next contest mill. (47 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
All those in favor of a contest initiated by the members, say 'aye.'
I see you're overwhelmed with the response. Okay, with the absence of Sol for several months to date, I'll make a suggestion: Say after the first of the year how about a contest open to any genre with no restrictions other than must be published new for the contest so there would be no previous reviews. The maximum word count should be self-limiting with diminished readership for those works going overboard in length.
For a prize, I suggest several members volunteer an extensive in-line review of the work and if it is the beginning of a novel, then a further commitment to review the entire novel if completed (or all that is completed within say a month from end of contest.) I hereby will be the first volunteer. Should volunteers be eligible? Makes no difference to me, but it might shorten the list of volunteers. Or being a volunteer might be made a requirement for entering the contest -- I like that even better.
Perhaps if enough writers volunteer for the review prize (or all if made a requirement), the winning author could choose three from among those volunteers whose reviewing style (ascertained by looking at past reviews) best fit their needs. I would also recommend a deadline for entry one month from the start of contest. Perhaps someone knows an impartial judge (or judges) to choose the winning entry. Personally, I would recommend against a site popularity format. But whatever, doesn't really matter to moi. Take care. Vern
Just an idea to ponder or be a catalyst for other ideas. Take care. Vern
472 2017-12-25 00:14:14
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Merry Christmas -- to all and to all a good night.
473 2017-12-17 14:40:58
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
space
Edited to remove a less than obvious explanation -- now it's a puzzle
474 2017-12-17 04:56:26
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Here (just bringing back up for MJ)
475 2017-12-14 23:54:54
Re: The "was" wars and "was" addiction (30 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Memphis Trace wrote:Memphis Trace wrote:Thank goodness Alabama noticed it was missing... before they struck out. They hit a home run Tuesday.
Memphis TraceThere was no better place than Alabama https://www.washingtonpost.com/opinions … amp;wpmm=1
An excerpt:
First, let us pay tribute to the new Alabama busy being born. There were many reasons Democrat Doug Jones defeated Republican Roy Moore, but younger voters who insisted that the old ways are not their ways were decisive.Jones overwhelmed Moore among Alabamians younger than 45, taking more than 60 percent of their ballots, according to the exit polls. Moore took about three-fifths of those 65 and older. This augurs poorly for Republicans, and President Trump is deepening this generation gap. The GOP is throwing away its future.
Memphis Trace
I'm afraid it's much too early to consider Alabama being "reborn." Moore was a terrible candidate, not only for his outlandish views, but for his contempt for the law and his likely criminal behavior. Yet he got a huge support from white men and a large majority from white women. In the next election, Jones will probably lose to a more "normal" opponent. So, though I'm gratified that enough white support could align with African Americans to give Moore the win in this reddest of red states (while many Alabama Republicans stayed home in disgust of their candidate), this will most probably be a short-lived victory.
Most likely, you are probably most likely correct, Jack, but the Alabama vote shows that after going all-in for Moore, Trump was dealt a self-inflicted blow which just might wake up a few more Republican congress-people to the fact Trump is not nearly as omnipotent as they are conned into believing from his mouth. Take care. Vern