Short Story by: Dirk B
Genre: Historical Fiction
Fifteen-year-old Adam stood amid the excited crowd occupying both sides of the street as they all awaited him — their charismatic leader. Soon, his motorcade would drive by, with him standing in the open-air touring car on his way to the command bunker, basking in the adulation.
Adam shivered despite his long coat — not his warmest, but with a large inner pocket. He checked the time using the fob watch given him by his beloved grandfather, beaten and left for dead merely for being different. Adam barely made it to his side in time to say goodbye.
The dying man had pressed the timepiece into Adam’s hands. “Keep this always! You may need it someday.”
Tears streaming down, Adam nodded. “I love you!”
“And I you. Adam, never forget, anyone can change the future!” Before he could elaborate, the old man died.
That dark moment had been so gut-wrenching, Adam didn’t realize he’d wet himself until later.
Now, months afterward, here he stood, trembling, fear escalating. Small for his age, he slipped through the crowd with ease to reach the street. His mixed ancestry meant he didn’t look like many of his kind, so no one paid him any attention. To them, he was just another young boy, eager for a closer look.
But also eager to change the future.
Cheering arose from down the street as the motorcade approached. Their leader stood in the third car.
A chill careened down Adam’s spine like a runaway bobsled.
Time slowed.
The lead car of the motorcade passed him.
He reached inside his coat and gripped the object there. His pulse pounded like drums in his ears, drowning out all other sounds.
The second car rolled by.
His heart hammered as if attempting to escape his chest.
Now!
He drew the object — a pistol, ran at the third vehicle, and fired. The man’s head exploded, brains hurtling everywhere. Success! Adam had changed the future.
Except … none of that happened.
Because before Adam could draw his gun, the man had looked in his direction with terrifying evil in his soulless blue eyes. Adam froze and wet himself again, startling himself just long enough for the car to pass unharmed.
The date: August 31, 1939. The place: Nazi Germany. One day before the invasion of Poland, marking the start of World War II, history’s bloodiest conflict.
In the decades that followed, Adam wept at the emergence of each new atrocity of the twentieth century. If only…
Ultimately, on his deathbed, toying with his grandfather’s pocket watch, he accidentally released a hidden lever.
Soon, a stranger materialized beside him, carrying a giftwrapped package.
Adam jolted with fear. “Who are you?”
“A time traveler. Your watch signaled me, finally allowing me to find you. I can return you to 1939 to try again. You’ll teleport back into your fifteen-year-old body.” He handed Adam the package. “This will travel back with you.”
“What is it? A weapon?”
“Pampers.”
Adam grinned. “Dead moustache walking!”
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Another great piece. At first i thought he was back to kill himself and I wondered about a paradox and time loop. The suspense was perfect with the build up to the finale rolling faster and faster. I did feel sorry for Adam. To stare into the eyes of such evil would have caused anyone to hesitate. Loved the cruel twist of the time traveller giving him a daiper but also underlining that some things, no matter how evil, must come to pass.
Hi Morag.
I reread this after I read your review and realized that, yes, Adam has a very miserable life. I'm not sure if it was clear, but the purpose of the time traveler at the end is to give Adam his chance at a do-over. Maybe he'll stop Hitler this time. The diaper (I'm so evil!) is to ensure he doesn't miss the next time. :-) I'm still thinking about the second contest entry (a sequel! lol), which will involve him returning to the past for his do-over. Naturally, there'll be some twist.
Thank you for the review. Much appreciated as always.
Dirk
Ha! We all wish for someone to have a do-over like this! (Well, a lot of us, anyway.) Alas, what the present may have changed into we wouldn’t know. Sci-fi tells us to never mess with the timeline — prime directive and all. This would be worth the gamble, though. I’m wondering why grandpa didn’t use the lever himself. And how did the time traveler, signaled just "moments ago," know (and have time) to bring (gift wrapped) diapers? (Duh, because he's a time traveler?)
Then again, I've been known to overthink things (and underthink them, too).
Good luck, sir!
Mg
Hi Mitch.
I kept wishing the contest allowed more words, so I could first out the last part a little more (his life after WW2, signaling the time traveler, and heading back).
Of course, if I were to overthink this myself, another reasonable question would be why the time traveler didn't take out Hitler himself. And why wait for such a moment; if you're going to kill the SOB, start much sooner, before he's surrounded by bodyguards and adoring crowds, and moving in a car. Plot holes!
Thank you for the review.
Dirk
I absolutely loved the development of the story. I wasn't expecting that ending. I was a good bit confused at first especially with a person so young. It's amazing to me how you were able to take an idea as timeless as this and turn it into a humorous short story. I applaud you.
Prize: First place: $200 cash; Runner ups: $50
Morag Higgins