Sorry, I'm coming in late. Busy, busy. As far as how demons look, how about like a hologram? Remember Princess Leia in Star Wars when she was explaining things to Obi wan, especially the beginning and the end of the message. It may not look like a rotting body, but it looks ethereal. Make it an ugly hologram!
151 2024-09-12 17:16:57
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,471 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
152 2024-09-02 23:12:10
Topic: Happy Labor Day (2 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Happy Labor Day everyone! I hope y'all were blessed with some rest today.
153 2024-08-25 17:49:52
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,471 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm not giving up. Deathies, or deathlies or deathers.
154 2024-08-24 13:54:04
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,471 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
How about demon flesh, demon meat, demon corps (pronounced like Marine Corps)?
155 2024-08-02 19:40:39
Re: Growing TNBW (35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks, Sol. Keep 'em coming.
George FLC
156 2024-07-31 16:16:20
Re: Potential Membership Change (12 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hi all,
Because many new members come to kick the tires, get a bunch of reviews as a trial member, and then take off. I don't feel like this is fair to all of you and the community. Plus, I happen to believe that once people pay money, they are more motivated to put the time and effort into becoming part of the site.
Thoughts?
Thanks,
Sol
Agreed. People are motivated by money.
George FLC
157 2024-07-22 14:47:55
Re: Back in Business (10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Randy, your plane took a wrong turn. Surely you intended to come to western Canada? Home of endless forest fires, broken healthcare, brutal winters, and a major political party overrun by (western) separatists. Still, I have to admit, the political entertainment is better where you are.
Enjoy your new home.
Dirk
Will there be a mass migration to Canada if Trump wins? How secure is your southern border?
:-)
Oops. Is this not an appropriate subject?
George
158 2024-07-21 22:27:54
Re: Back in Business (10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
That's exciting! Welcome home. I hope y'all have a great time down thar. And I hope your wife likes hot weather.
George FLC
159 2024-07-19 13:14:42
Re: Growing TNBW (35 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks Dirk. Keep on debugging.
George FLC
160 2024-07-16 23:23:21
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Kafka has a nice ring to it. But I assume most people would have to google it.
161 2024-07-10 16:35:36
Re: Old Groups (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Dirk, can you keep the site moving forward while Sol focuses more on Booksie? Is maintenance mode good enough for us?
162 2024-07-02 18:34:14
Re: Free Booksie Premium membership for TNBW members (10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Is there an estimated death date for NTBW? Or did I miss when it will happen?
Thanks.
163 2024-07-02 13:46:20
Re: Migrating from TNBW to Booksie - closed for now; see inside (50 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thanks for the update, Dirk. There's comments and discussions that need copying.
I don't know enough about Booksie to hardly comment on it. Does Booksie allow for uploading images?
I've wondered about a technical group. It would be great to have serious talks about anti-gravity approaches, AI, applying for patents, etc. I realize there are intellectual property issues, perhaps the group could be treated as confidential. And if you simply want to make contacts with other techno geeks then it's useful. I don't know how much the technical community worries about the art of writing so it could be very useful.
I've learned so much from TNBW. It's a pity to see it end. But life goes on!
164 2024-06-14 13:53:47
Re: On the Mend! (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Welcome back Marilyn. Glad to hear you have a clean bill of health. May you continue to be a productive member on this site.
Keep on writing.
George FLC
165 2024-06-05 14:02:12
Re: The evils of ing verbs? (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I put Abraham Lincoln's Gettysburg address into Grammarly. Sorry, Abe. You only get a score of 85. Two -ly adverbs and 5 -ing verbs! And comma issues.
Granted there were different versions, but this one was the only one with his signature.
Opening sentence:
Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent, a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
Corrected by Grammarly:
Four hundred and seven years ago, our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation conceived in Liberty and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.
I prefer the original line. Go Abe!
166 2024-06-04 12:36:31
Re: The evils of ing verbs? (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
From Reddit:
Q: How bad are '-ing' verbs?
A: They're so bad every published novel by popular authors is filled with them.
But it's a funny response and perhaps appropriate.
167 2024-05-15 14:30:48
Re: The Archangel Syndrome (309 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
As a member of that wing of Christendom, let me protest a bit! My group might be more Prosperity Gospel Lite. We are not as far out there as some but y'all might have problems with us. Heck, I have problems with some of our teachings. But you're looking from the outside in and all you see is BAD. You're painting us all in one massive green (as in Mamon) stroke. You might be surprised as to how my church has been very generous and merciful to people who have needed desperate help. I'm thrilled with what we've been doing and are doing. Some of it is almost unbelievable.
I know it's space opera. I know you're trying to slap groups around and exaggerate. But so many people take so many punches at us that it's a little wearisome. How often do you hear the good stuff? Never. So, be careful. Slap everyone around and it'll go down easier. Perhaps say something good about us. You handled Catholicism so well and you still had zombie nuns and corrupt cardinals.
168 2024-05-15 14:05:18
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,471 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I just made guacamole! It's great stuff!!!! It's also good for you. Avocados helps reduce the risk of Alzheimer's. Go buy some, njc!
169 2024-05-14 16:15:14
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,471 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Snot green sounds pretty disgusting.
170 2024-05-13 14:43:36
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,471 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
When they dissolve their skin make sure to give the effect color. A gross green or bright red. Can they reconstruct their skin if they're still standing at the end of the fight?
171 2024-05-02 14:11:14
Re: Until we meet again... arrivederci (13 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Sorry to see you leave like this. Hopefully, it will only be temporary. You have been one of the best reviewers for my writing. Get better, I'm praying for you.
Be blessed and get healthy.
George FLC
172 2024-05-01 13:37:35
Re: Savior of the Damned (the Connor series) by Dirk B. (1,471 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Actually, the wine was infused with the power of God, so it'll keep forever. No refrigeration required.
The compound is Satan's, not God's. Also, clear-cutting for growing grapes would be more visible from the air.
God's grapes can grow anywhere! No need for clear cutting. I guess...
How about if they've become the grapes of wrath? Just a thought.
173 2024-04-26 15:30:14
Re: 2023 CIBAs Results for Global Thrillers (10 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Wow. Very good. And you have more to write! Keep on writing!!
174 2024-04-26 15:28:45
Re: Heart surgery update (22 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Welcome back.
175 2024-04-24 13:25:10
Re: etc (68 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
K and Dirk, good comments. I try to limit names but sometimes it's hard to be super legalistic about it. However, I like the idea of a glossary with names, perhaps Cheyenne words, history, etc. at the front of each chapter. I found out that women in my book's time period married around 22, men married around 26. This was attributed to the Civil War. Lots of younger men got killed. I put that in the glossary. I plan to keep the glossaries.