876 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Thanks LA!

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877 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Left a review for Stefanie's 'The Day of Darkness' Chapter 10.

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878 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Hi LA,
Many thanks for the feedback.  It will take a long time to break the expository writing habit--my 34+ year career required that style, so I don't think I'll break it overnight.  Still, will keep trying, and I've enjoyed this lesson (as well as the others).  Regards, Randy

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879 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Here's the link for my revised dialogue.  Still working on it, so will try to get a further update posted today, time permitting.
http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … ised-22033

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880 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Here is the link to my "before" dialogue.  It's taken from a short story I wrote for TNBW's Superhero Contest.  I'm now expanding that story into a children's book and this will be included as part of a chapter.
http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … mple-22031

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881 Reply by Randall Krzak

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I figure I have a looooong way to go before I master anything but I'm learning all the time and for me that's the important part right now. It's so different creating characters and writing dialogue from the hundreds of narrative reports I wrote before I retired.  Wasn't allowed to include any emotions or personal thoughts.  Even how people were referred to had to be done in a certain way.  Hopefully, I'll eventually break this mold:)

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882 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Completed a review of Jube's 'The World Of Phyries" chapter 9.

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883 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Many congrats to all the winners.  Well done!

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884 Reply by Randall Krzak

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I like CJ's suggestion--I plan to use something else as well (and no foreign setting this time!)

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885 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Left a review for Ann on 'Aloha Spirit', Chapter 9.

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886 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Hi LA,

Much easier to look at someone's work other than my own:)  Will keep at it!

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887 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Sounds good--thanks

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888 Reply by Randall Krzak

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That's great, Janet!  Had a good laugh at it.  Thanks for sharing.

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889 Reply by Randall Krzak

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I'm still working on revising my submission, but have to head out for the evening.  Here's where I'm at at this time:
http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … our--21977

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890 Reply by Randall Krzak

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I plan to continue reviewing Ann's work as I want to know how things turn out.  As far as Stephen King goes, the bigger they are the hard they fall:

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891 Reply by Randall Krzak

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http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … our--21977

This was the dialogue I submitted before the start of the class and now rewritten.
Regards, Randy

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892 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Completed a review of CJ's 'Raven's Curse' - Chapter 10.

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893 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Posted a review of Matthew's chapter 9 v.1 - CH 4A

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894 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Hi LA,
Many thanks for the information above and will start doing as recommended.  Look forward to bringing the first three lessons together.  Have a great weekend, too.  Regards, Randy

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895 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Completed a review of Cobber's "State of Vengeance', chapter 28.

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896 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Hi LA,
No questions at this time but great information above.  Thanks, Randy

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897 Reply by Randall Krzak

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All the best Ann, for a speedy recovery.  Best regards, Randy

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898 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Had time to finish my sample scene: http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … lake-21939

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899 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Posted the exercises for lesson three: http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … work-21938
My sample scene will be posted tomorrow.

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900 Reply by Randall Krzak

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Hello Helen,
Welcome to TNBW!  I'll second Vern's comments about the site--glad you joined us.  Regards, Randy

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