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Thanks LA!

Hi LA,
Many thanks for the feedback.  It will take a long time to break the expository writing habit--my 34+ year career required that style, so I don't think I'll break it overnight.  Still, will keep trying, and I've enjoyed this lesson (as well as the others).  Regards, Randy

Here is the link to my "before" dialogue.  It's taken from a short story I wrote for TNBW's Superhero Contest.  I'm now expanding that story into a children's book and this will be included as part of a chapter.
http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/posting … mple-22031

Completed a review of Jube's 'The World Of Phyries" chapter 9.

I like CJ's suggestion--I plan to use something else as well (and no foreign setting this time!)

Hi LA,

Much easier to look at someone's work other than my own:)  Will keep at it!

That's great, Janet!  Had a good laugh at it.  Thanks for sharing.

I plan to continue reviewing Ann's work as I want to know how things turn out.  As far as Stephen King goes, the bigger they are the hard they fall:

Completed a review of CJ's 'Raven's Curse' - Chapter 10.

Hi LA,
Many thanks for the information above and will start doing as recommended.  Look forward to bringing the first three lessons together.  Have a great weekend, too.  Regards, Randy

Hi LA,
No questions at this time but great information above.  Thanks, Randy