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Many congrats, Janet!

Completed inline reviews of alkemi's The Souring Seas, chapters 30 and 31.

Completed inline review of Jube's 'The world of Phyries', chapter 33.

Completed an inline review of CJ's Raven's Curse, chapter 32.

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I didn't get any the first time either, but it looks like I have three today, all from Red Mercy.

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It's sad to see the small businesses disappear. It's one of the things that made America great. Now we're subjected to the whims of bigger and bigger comments.

When we sold our house in May, we didn't pay an electric bill (for 53 cents) because we were vacating in six days. In addition, their online system wouldn't accept a payment less than $1.00. They threatened to disconnect my service if I didn't pay within two weeks. When I got the final bill, I ended up giving them a dollar as it was cheaper to do that (final bill was 88 cents) rather than writing a check and adding a stamp.

The same electric company is after the owner of where I'm staying right now, pending approval of my British visa. The electric company installed a new digital meter a few days before I moved in, so the meter read 000 kilowatts used. The beginning of July, the owner received a bill for over $700 as they estimated he had used 2,714 kilowatts. The meter read eleven. The beginning of August, he received a bigger estimated bill for 3,352 kilowatts used and he owed over $1,200. The actual meter reading: sixteen kilowatts. They refuse to send someone out to check the meter because they can't get an actual reader meeting and they've done away with the people going around reading the meters. But they did send someone to disconnect the power. Another example of big business trying to intimidate consumers.

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Many thanks for sharing. Since I use Firefox, I'll have to check this out. Cheers, Randy

Completed an inline reviews of Matthew's A to O Krudges:The Girl Who Lost the Earth, Book 1, chapters 29 and 30. Appears I've finished Book 1.

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Many congrats, Bill!!

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I agree with Vern and Ann.  Since becoming a writer, I do spot things in various novels I'm reading. I think we become attuned to what we've learned and it becomes more noticeable. Can't change what's already published, so just enjoy reading.:)

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Way to keep going and many congrats!

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Whether Ellison likes it or not, he can't override the 1st Amendment. Hopefully, Bezos stands up to him.

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I agree with Sidemen's comments. Another reason I don't post much is time-related. Between reading/reviewing and my own writing, I find time in short supply. While I take a quick look at the groups, I rarely respond.

Many thanks, Jube. Greatly appreciate your help throughout.

Completed an inline review of Stefanie's 'The Day of Darkness - Book 1' chapter 21.

Hey everyone,

On July 3rd, I signed a contract with Solstice Publishing They'll be releasing Dangerous Alliance. FYI, they've published Jack the Knife's last five novels.  Many thanks for all of your help with this one. I'll be concentrating on Carnage in Singapore next.

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Hello L.A.,

Welcome to TNBW!

You've definitely landed on a good site. Plenty of helpful members. If you decide to become a member after the trial, the costs work this way: Monthly Plan: $8.95 per month. Quarterly Plan: $21.95 per quarter (less than $7.50 per month). Yearly Plan: Only $69.95.

I hadn't shared my work with anyone other than friends and family before joining TNBW. Since I joined three years ago, my writing has continuing to improve. Join groups, respond to forum questions, and above all, read and review other members' works. It all helps to improve your writing. Your writing voice will come and members will help you along the way.

I can't answer about how readers and agents would respond to memoir non-fiction as I only write fiction, but have you thought about using fictional characters and tell your story through your characters? I believe this would still be therapeutic for you and still get your message across. I'm sure there are other members more knowledgeable than me who will chime in.  Regards, Randy

vern wrote:

Most stories, if not all, have elements of more than one specific genre. For instance, a historical novel might also have a love affair and a murder mystery. You pick the element which dominates in your mind and/or intention and go with it. There is a good chance that no matter what you pick, an agent/publisher will choose a different genre. Of course, if you self-publish, it really doesn't matter; you're not marketing the genre, you're marketing the book, hopefully anyway.

The way I look at it, we often get sidetracked by things which ultimately are pretty much irrelevant in getting a book published. This is one of those things which will take care of itself with the crafting of a good story. Just my three cents (inflation). Take care. Vern

Vern, your comments are well worth the inflation.:)  Many thanks for sharing. Regards, Randy

Christine, how does you story match up again these historical romances? I haven't checked them out, but with the historical aspect and the love triangle, this might help you a bit.

https://www.amazon.com/s/?ie=UTF8&k … 2nr1ypka_b

How about a romantic fantasy? This would cover the fantasy/sci-fi parts and also with the protanganist's loss of his loved ones?

Completed an inline review of NJC's 'The Sorcerer's Progress, Book Two', chapter 14.

Posted an inline review of Suin's Being Fifteen, chapter 27.

Completed inline reviews of alkemi's The Souring Seas, chapter 28 and 29.

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Many thanks Gabi and Don60!  I should have the next chapter of Carnage in Singapore posted over the next week. This is the follow-on to Dangerous Alliance and The Kurdish Connection.

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Rachel (Rhiannon) Parsons wrote:

Yowza!  (I never like to follow the crowd, so no 'Wow!')  Congratulations.  Just remember us little people when you get on the New York Times bestseller list.

Many thanks. Aw, I'm one of the little people too.:)