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Welcome back, Bill!

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Many thanks, Don & Gacela!

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Many thanks Jack, Christine and S.L.!

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The paperback was just released across the Amazon network.

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Many thanks, CJ, Rachel, Marilyn and John!

Today Solstice Publishing released my third novel, Carnage in Singapore. The Kindle version is now available across the Amazon network, and the paperback will be available shortly.

Many thanks to all TNBWers involved in making this possible.

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Many thanks for letting us know. I wondered what happened to her.

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No worries, Bobbie. It happens to all of us sooner or later.:)

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Many thanks, Jack. I'll get cracking at the chapters I haven't read.:)

Dirk B. wrote:

I'm wondering what people do when it comes to writing numbers in a story? I typically spell out numbers <= 100, but also write numbers like one thousand as words rather than 1,000. I eventually settled on a rule that if I could write it out in three words or less, then I would do so. As a result, numbers like 500, 10,000, 1,000,000, etc. all get written out. I tend to include 'and' when writing numbers, so 350 would be three hundred and fifty, which is four words, so I wouldn't write it out. One of my reviewers recommended I write 350 as three hundred-fifty in a line of dialogue, hence this post.

Thanks
Dirk

The Chicago Manual of Style, used by agents and publishers, recommends spelling out whole numbers in dialogue no matter the number of digits. So far, that's worked for me with my publishers.

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Sideman wrote:

Many thanks to all who have expressed your kind thoughts. Diana is home now. She's weak and mentally ragged out but her specific health issue is much better. Again, many thanks!

Will be back to reviewing and posting this evening.

Alan

Glad to hear Diana's home. Best wishes to both of you! Regards, Randy & Sylvia

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Congratulation and good luck! All the best, Randall

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Hi Alan,

Many thanks for sharing this with us. Our thoughts and prayers are with you and Di at this time. Regards, Randall & Sylvia

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reaganwyatt wrote:

Hi everyone, my name is Reagan. I am new to this group and the site. I am in the process of finalizing my first novel - The Allure of the Forbidden. I have posted the first chapter and plan to post the other chapters after getting a few reviews. I kindly request for your reviews even as I also work on reviewing other writers' work.

Welcome to TNBW! It's a great place to be. I suggest you post your work to thenextbigwriter premium group, which pays points for reviews. You're more apt to obtain the reviews you're looking for.

Completed an inline review of NJC's The Sorcerer's Progress, Book 1: Children and Beasts, chapter 17.

Completed an inline review of Alkemi's The Souring Seas, chapter 32.

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Some of the newbies reciprocate but there are several who don't even say thank you for a review. Just shows what their manners must be like.  For the most part, I've stopped going into the forums--they were going off on too many tangents from what a post was originally about. Not sure about the competitions as I stopped entering them long ago as I'm just too busy.

Agree with Vern.

Hey Dirk,

This is from the Chicago Manual of Style (used by many agents and publishers), section 8.22 civil titles: "Much of the usage below is contradicted by the official literature typically generated by political offices, where capitalization of a title in any position is the norm (see 8.20). In formal prose, however, civil titles are capitalized only when used as part of the name (except as noted)." Here's the specific one you want:

"the secretary of state; John Kerry, secretary of state; Secretary of State Kerry or Secretary Kerry". This seems to indicate you should use secretary.

Hope this helps, Regards, Randall

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Many congrats, Seabrass!

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Many congrats, JP!

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j p lundstrom wrote:

Randy--How do you do it? Super califragilisticexpialidocious!  JP

LOL!  Many thanks, JP!

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Many thanks, Rachel and NJC!

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Memphis Trace wrote:

Time to get another pocket sewed on your pants to put you money in. Congratulations.

Memphis

LOL! smile  Many thanks, Memphis!

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Many thanks, everyone!