Surprising that Readers Digest isn't among those publishers. Granted, they like shorter stories, but the DO pay for first-person stories.

~Tom

752

(5 replies, posted in Writing Tips & Site Help)

Interesting topic, Janet.

The choice of a title is important to me. But, until I get into the story and develop a solid arc, it might just be 'working title' or similar. Later, I tend to go for descriptive titles that give just a little insight into what the story is about. Failing that, I fall back on puns and word play. But, the pun or word play has to be related to the story.

~Tom

753

(3 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

Just take your time, Karen. We'll be here. In actuality, it gives me time to polish up the drawings I've already made and to start new ones.

Having a job you don't like is a real curse. Just try your best to hang in there. I find that meditation works for me.

~Tom

754

(11 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Sincere condolences to you, Linda. Family is important. Take your time and get back when you can.

~Tom

755

(27 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

Here are the conceptual drawings from Karen for the two classes of space ships, Cargo (as yet unnamed) and Explorer (Aurora & Beowolf).

http://intellisigsys.net/aurora/cargo_class_v1.jpg

http://intellisigsys.net/aurora/explorer_class_v1.jpg

~Tom

756

(9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

OFF TOPIC--- Sol, as long as you're here, can you kick-start the email forum notification system? We haven't been getting notificaitons for a few days now.

~Tom

757

(9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Lesley, you have a PM.

~Tom

758

(9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

What is your operating system, Lesley? if it is Windows, there will be a Notepad. Just right-click on an empty space on your desktop and select "New --- Text Document". Don't even bother to change the name from "new Test Document.TXT". then do the copy/paste bit.

If you are on Linux, then use GEDIT in place of Notepad.

~Tom

759

(27 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

Thanks, Karen. I had a heck of a time working on the perspective, but I think I got it right. I'm going to try a curved passageway next.

~Tom

760

(27 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

And, here is the color version of the passageway to Engineering. Note that bright colors are used in case there is smoke or haze in the passageway.

http://intellisigsys.net/aurora/passageway_01_v2.jpg

~Tom

761

(27 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

refresh your browser, it probably cached that page and pulled it from your computer first.

~Tom

762

(16 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

That is a very good idea, Karen. The normal shuttle crew is being transported to the space center and an 'as yet unidentified person or persons (newscaster quote)' tossed 'a device' under the van which caused it to dodge severely and overturn. Crew isn't hurt, but must go through a flight physical before being returned to duty. 'Police are rounding up the usual suspects in an attempt to find out who did it. As s result, all protesters have been moved to a secure facility for questioning.'

~Tom

763

(27 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

View 02_deck_v4 again, Karen. i changed the name but didn't update the version number.

~Tom

764

(27 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

Not yet, Karen. I'm still working on that. I'll send it to you via email first before posting it just to check with you.

Name change done.

~Tom

765

(27 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

Here are the revised deck plans for the 01, 02 and 03 levels. I added unisex heads and a meditation Room.

http://intellisigsys.net/aurora/01_deck_v2.jpg

http://intellisigsys.net/aurora/02_deck_v4.jpg

http://intellisigsys.net/aurora/03_deck_v2.jpg

~Tom

766

(1 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

I think the length of time varies, Janet. I've had my posts pop up almost right away, and other times it took a while. You can make it happen almost immediately if you make sure you have the various groups checked (even if you don't change anything) and click the Save button. That resets the 'new postings' list and puts your right at the top.

~Tom

Yeah. I agree, Janet. That has happened to me several times. I write over 50 words, yet get dinged because I didn't hit 50 according to the site.

~Tom

768

(3 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

Presumably, the flight crews were picked following a good psych evaluation. Any tension should be directed at a given problem (or problems) by the whole crew instead of each other. It would be possible to add just a little personal tension, but nothing major.

Notification have to get fixed.

~Tom

769

(16 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

That works, Karen. I also like Dirk's '2 training missions' scenario, but only detail one of them.

~Tom

770

(3 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

Me three.

~Tom

771

(16 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

True. Perhaps Reese could refer to "that training trip" as a method of introducing slight flaws (to be corrected later) in #2's persona. Sort of a "remember on that training flight when you did this? Well, don't do that again".

EDIT: I'm not getting any notifications at all for any threads.

~Tom

772

(16 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

Well, one thing you might consider is to have Reese send up his #2 as pilot and #3 as co-pilot for a brief shuttle flight. Practice makes perfect, and if #2 hasn't actually commanded a flight, then how is Reese to be sure of his capabilities?

~Tom

773

(212 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Oh yeah!!! I agree wholeheartedly, Dirk. I is aggravating to have to do that especially in multi-page threads like 'site bugs 2' and such.

~Tom

774

(16 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

Extra Vehicular Activity, Karen. I like that idea. For tension on the flight, you could have a blocked launch tube with a misfiring comms satellite that requires a person to go EVA and clear the mess up. I would suggest that maintenance crews be delegated to that task. Flight crews are for Aurora herself and the shuttles.

~Tom

775

(27 replies, posted in The Aurora Mission)

Great spot. I'll make it look like an atrium with the 'back' wall and overhead of plastisteel. (I like that better than Transparent Aluminum, which is already taken.)

~Tom