Congratulations! Well done.
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Congratulations! Well done.
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Like Alan, I, too, prefer not to use the Oxford comma. Having said that, I will admit to putting one in if the meaning is unclear. If I read the sentence aloud, and take a breath at the right spot, a comma will go in before the "and". My second novel is nearing completion and I'm unwilling to go back through it and add any Oxford commas. Perhaps my attitude will change on the third novel.
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I agree. I've run into the same problem of no notifications from authors I'm following.
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Excellent, DOn. Happy to hear it.
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Best way to start is to jump in, Yumpyyum. I've been on this site for some time now but when I started I was terrible at writing. If you were to check some of my earlier stories and compare them to my later ones, you'd see a big difference. Everything I learned, I learned mostly on this site from thoughtful and extensive reviews by others on the site.
It works. It definitely works. I've gone from a mere storyteller (filled with grammatical errors, verb tenses mixed up and everything else) to now. I have one book an Amazon and am preparing to publish my second.
It can be done and there is no reason why you can't do it. Never fear the reviews as well over 95% of them are filled with helpful hints.
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I use a pony in my latest novel. My research found that most young horses over a year or so old will carry/pull small loads as well as a horse. They are playful, and tend to "horse" around a little, but are reliable once trained.
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I tend to keep my chapters above 2000, yet under 3000 for a couple of reasons. 1) it takes more points to post a long chapter, with the corresponding time to build points back up. And, 2) reader participation (by that I mean reviews) tends to fade--as you've found out--on a long chapter in-line review. I refrain from posting chapters in a bunch. You don't get as many reviews.
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Outstanding, Al. Congrats to you.
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I bought three books some time ago. They've helped me greatly, leading to my first published novel.
They are:
The Writer's Little Helper, James V. Smirth, Jr,
The Only Grammar Book You'll Ever Need, Susan Thurman
The Breakout Novelist, Donald Maass
All three books are great, easy to understand, and are filled with tips.
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That happens ocasionally. Try logging out and back in to correct the subscribe button thing.
As for the other problem. My advice would be to create a 'book', then delete the original short story. If you don't want to lose reviews on the short story, you can also "unpublish' it, preserving comments, but nobody but you can see them.
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Huge congratulations, Rhiannon. Another TNBW writer publishes.
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Wow, Denise. What a sterling opportunity for you. Congratulations and good luck.
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A hearty welcome, Claire. Thank you for your reviews. Take you time to get established and above all: have fun.
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No biggie. Gave me enough time to really enjoy a dinner and coffee following.
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Anyone know what the glitch in the site was this afternoon/evening? It shut down TNBW and Booksie for a couple of hours.
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Hang in there, Mike. I personally know addictions can be beaten. I've been sober for 38 years.
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Are you intending to self-publish, Mike? Kindle Direct Publishing (KDP) is the way I published my novel. It's relatively easy to do, but there are a few steps you have to take-- and in the right order.
I'd be happy to help.
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You are very welcome, Don. I love to help when I can.
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'You Only Love Twice'
What a beautiful jacket! I'm often drawn to (or put off) a novel by the cover and this one is very enticing, a work of art in it's own right. Now I have to discover what is inside.
Thank you, Kate. My daughter does design softwware for EA Games and did my cover in an avternoon. I agree, it's wonderful. If you go the the Kindle version on Amazon, you are allowed to read the first few chapters online.
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Again, thanks so much for the exposure, Ann. I've posted the link on Facebook already.
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And, if you don't add the HTML code for para and /para, you added comment won't get into the reply at all either.
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Thanks, everyone. I'll have more info on Tuesday when I talk with my cardiologist. Ablation is one option on the table. It's supposed tos top most cases of irregular heart rate. I might opt for it.
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I've thought of that, KD. All I'd be doing is echoing the monolith travel scene from 2001. It felt exactly like it. Colors rushing by me at tremendous speeds, clanks and groans from the machines with huge doppler effects as they passed and an occasional word muttered by a doctor nearby as I came out of it. This is my third time through the looking glass.
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And now, this morning, as I expected, the Atrial Fibrillation hit me at 6AM as I fed the cat. I've gone through this twice before, the feeling like a small rodent is trying to bet out of my chest. I got dressed and drove to the ER on the base and they hooked me to an ECG machine, verifying what I told them: Yup, you have A-Fib.
An hour later, they stuck foam plates to my back and chest, lay me back and pushed Katamine into my IV.
Oh, Wow!. I can hear colors and feel sounds. Visuals ran from deep black thourgh various shades, a la 2001, to bright white. Beeps from machines sounded like low-note foghorns in the mist. It turns out, Ketamine is chemically related to PCP, the drug of the sixties.
Boy, did I get a ride. I'm fine now. Back in sinuous rhythm with great BP and pulse rate.
I don't reccommend the drug.
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Outstanding, Jack! Way to go.
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