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No biggie. Gave me enough time to really enjoy a dinner and coffee following.

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Anyone know what the glitch in the site was this afternoon/evening? It shut down TNBW and Booksie for a couple of hours.

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Hang in there, Mike. I personally know addictions can be beaten. I've been sober for 38 years.

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Are you intending to self-publish, Mike? Kindle Direct Publishing (KDP) is the way I published my novel. It's relatively easy to do, but there are a few steps you have to take-- and in the right order.

I'd be happy to help.

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You are very welcome, Don. I love to help when I can.

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kraptonite wrote:

'You Only Love Twice'

What a beautiful jacket! I'm often drawn to (or put off) a novel by the cover and this one is very enticing, a work of art in it's own right. Now I have to discover what is inside.

Thank you, Kate. My daughter does design softwware for EA Games and did my cover in an avternoon. I agree, it's wonderful. If you go the the Kindle version on Amazon, you are allowed to read the first few chapters online.

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Again, thanks so much for the exposure, Ann. I've posted the link on Facebook already.

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And, if you don't add the HTML code for para and /para, you added comment won't get into the reply at all either.

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Thanks, everyone. I'll have more info on Tuesday when I talk with my cardiologist. Ablation is one option on the table. It's supposed tos top most cases of irregular heart rate. I might opt for it.

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I've thought of that, KD. All I'd be doing is echoing the monolith travel scene from 2001. It felt exactly like it. Colors rushing by me at tremendous speeds, clanks and groans from the machines with huge doppler effects as they passed and an occasional word muttered by a doctor nearby as I came out of it. This is my third time through the looking glass.

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And now, this morning, as I expected, the Atrial Fibrillation hit me at 6AM as I fed the cat. I've gone through this twice before, the feeling like a small rodent is trying to bet out of my chest. I got dressed and drove to the ER on the base and they hooked me to an ECG machine, verifying what I told them: Yup, you have A-Fib.

An hour later, they stuck foam plates to my back and chest, lay me back and pushed Katamine into my IV.

Oh, Wow!. I can hear colors and feel sounds. Visuals ran from deep black thourgh various shades, a la 2001, to bright white. Beeps from machines sounded like low-note foghorns in the mist. It turns out, Ketamine is chemically related to PCP, the drug of the sixties.

Boy, did I get a ride. I'm fine now. Back in sinuous rhythm with great BP and pulse rate.

I don't reccommend the drug.

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Outstanding, Jack! Way to go.

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There is a little lag time between posting and becoming visible, Christine. You can make it pop up immediately by re-publishing the chapter to your chosen group. Sometimes, it's a simple matter of logging out and back in. Or, you can clear your browser cache and reload the home page.

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I did some research, Dirk. You can "deactivate" your account insted of deleting it. THis way, you retain your account, but nobody can see or post things to you. The deactivation remains in place until you either log in and reactivate it OR use your FB credentials to log in to another site.

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I'm about ready to do the same, Dirk. If you're not interested in dogs, cats, cars or how stupid Trump is, then there's nothing but a vast wasteland in Facebook.

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I con't think of a single red-blooded male who didn't call her "Undress", Vern. I know I did, er, still do, or whatever.

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Right you are, MJ. There is nothing more satisfying than seeing a newcomer to TNBW take the offered advice and improve his or her writing. I've seen it myself many times.

I am always open for grammar, syntax, spelling and other corrections to my own posts. I thrive on them, actually, as they sometimes add an aspect of thinking I hadn't seen before. I've ben known to change a whole scene based on a suggestion.

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There is another group of newcomers as well. Those who thank you for your in-depth review and say "yes, I know I have to do thus and such." Then, the next chapter comes out and it is filled with the same errors you pointed out the first time. One of two of these exchanges I can tolerate, but more than two and I drift away to see if I can help another.

Bill

Some day, I hope to finish my silly SF story The Cat and Her Ship. Maybe some day...

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Good question, Randy. I've found it happens occasionally. I post most of my work on both sites, but remove it from Booksie when I begin the second edit here. In most cases, I've found Booksie is a "kinder, gentler" site where hardly a cross word is spoken, even if deserved. here, you will get a more honest review, even if you don't like it. Thick skin is required in most cases. I do try my best to help a newcomer, though. I might be tempted to lay off a rough review if the storyline is well presented and coherent, correcting or advising on grammar, dialogue and structure--not content.

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I feel for you, man. I agreed to sit at a table in my local library for two hours in a "meet an author" mode. I sold a total of one book to the fifteen people who passed my table and inquired why I was sitting there. Unless you're a famous NYT Best Seller author, it doesn't pay.

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I've found reviews on Amazon are tough to get. I hope you do better, John.

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Welcome to the site, Ilsa. I've left a review as well. It's hard to follow a good review from MJ, but I tried.

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On the news lately was the notice of the passing of one of Science Fictions greatest writers: Ursula K Le Guin. She was one of my favorites. I have a half-shelf in my library devoted to her books. The Earthsea series especially. Sad to hear of her passing. She was 88.

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jack the knife wrote:

Sorry to hear about that, Bill. Follow the doctor's orders so you can get back in stride again. I agree that doling out computer time in separate sittings is a good idea - one I should follow!

Thinking back over the last few months, I realize I spent pretty much all day, every day, at my computer writing, editing, or simply surfing. Not good to be so inactive. YouTube is addictive as hell.

Bill