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Thanks for responding, everyone. I'm going to try two scenes per chapter (one per story thread), which gives me the flexibility to further split those scenes as the need arises. The planning is just as much work as if they were chapters, but it allows me greater flexibility. It also forces me to make the end of each scene compelling enough to keep the reader going. The only minor nuisance is that I'll have to post each major scene as its own TNBW chapter to keep the length of the posted material short enough for most reviewers. Seabrass did the same thing with his Maiden story.

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Dirk

Handy info. Thanks.

Just spent the better part of a day researching the Italian police (I need detectives and a CSI team). I spent almost two hours trying to find reliable information about Italy's two national police forces, the state police and the Carabinieri. They have a lot of overlapping duties right down to responding to civil crimes. They are the result of Italy's dysfunctional political system. The best comparison I can make to our police is that the state police are a civil force while the Carabinieri are a military force. The Carabinieri are somewhat like the National Guard. Since they both have command stations in Rome, I needed to know who's in charge when a bishop or cardinal turns up dead. Finally found an article that said the state police are ultimately in charge in large urban centers, but the Carabinieri may be the only police force available in rural areas, so they're in charge in those areas, rather like the RCMP. Both the state police and the Carabinieri are truly national police forces, unlike us where each major city has its own independent police force.

Pretty slim pickings online about Italian law enforcement and even less about their CSI functions. I may have to borrow a few North American concepts. I have yet to figure out how to kill off a large number of clergy in serial killings without making it redundant or overly gruesome. Worse, a serial killer ought to result in a major taskforce, with all kinds of different police functions cooperating.

I also can't figure out what the damn Italian equivalent is of a detective, since they don't seem to use that title. They follow Interpol-like command ranks.

I hope CSI is available on Netflix.

Amy, I have a scene with a boy in an orphanage who is experiencing an epileptic seizure, including convulsions. His form of epilepsy is resistant to medication. Other than hold him down, is there anything else the people around him can do? Also, is there a medication that can be injected into him to reduce the severity of the convulsions (e.g., a tranquilizer)? What would they do for him if he was in a hospital? Once the seizure has passed, is it common to take him to a hospital for further observation?

Thanks
Dirk

My outline for scene 1 of Saving Connor is done. I had originally planned on three scenes in the first chapter, but that makes it too long for reviewers. I'm debating just splitting all scenes into standalone chapters. That'll force me to come up with more chapter hooks, which is probably a good thing. There will be two interwoven threads running through the story, so it'll probably be similar to my Joseph/Apollo chapters, only I hope they'll be shorter.

I'm rereading Dune and discovered that Frank Herbert all-but gives away that Maud'Dib triumphs. In one of the early epigraphs attributed to Princess Irulan, she comments how the Duke's light was dimmed behind his son's glory.

I've often thought that the story would have been better if the reader didn't know the details of the Harkonnen plot and Huey's betrayal before they occurred. All of that could have come out later.

This evening's episode of Gilligan's Island featured an impostor pretending to be Mr. Howell back on Wall Street. He promised that after resuming his position as CEO of Howell Industries he would sell his Amalgamated stock. Upon hearing this on the radio, the real Mr. Howell runs into the lagoon and attempts to swim to Hawaii. Gilligan and the Skipper stop him. Mr. Howell offers one million dollars to whichever castaway can devise a scheme to get him of the island. Gilligan makes a pair of wings and leaps off the top of the hut. It actually works until the Skipper tells him it's impossible, followed by a Wyle E. Coyote-like crash. They settle on a pontoon boat powered by peddling on a bicycle-like contraption from a previous episode. The professor gives Mr. Howell a flare gun and tells him to fire off a flare if he gets in trouble. I should note that they used up the last of their flares in an episode in season one. They push the pontoon boat into the lagoon and it promptly sinks, taking Mr. Howell with it. A hand reaches out of the lagoon and fires the flare gun. Eventually the impostor falls overboard from a yacht and washes up on the island. He knocks out the real Mr. Howell, switches clothes, and pretends to be the real Thurston. After being discovered as the impostor, the fake Howell takes off and swims to Hawaii, where he is rescued. He refuses to say who he is because the police are looking for him for impersonating the real Mr. Howell. This episode begs the question why he never offered a million before now and why they didn't try building a pontoon boat sooner. After all, they've been on the island for two years. I like the choice of Amalgamated for the stock. They previously used Consolidated Acme, also good.

Andrew is going to have a blast when Joseph can't respond.