Are you saying not to capitalize because there's more than one of them? If my story had multiple crown princes, they'd still be capitalized, as long as they're not in the same room at the same time. My story only has two governors, who rarely appear together. I don't think I'm understanding you.
2,751 2017-01-06 02:58:07
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
2,752 2017-01-05 23:46:02
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Screw it. I capitalized almost every title (Imperator, Imperatrix, Regent, Prince, Princess, Shogun, etc.), making them all high titles. Imperial is also capitalized once again. Imperial Family and Royal Family are also caps, since there are only one of each and they expect to be recognized as royalty. Shogun is an outlier, but he's demented and wants the respect. Imperial palace and royal palace are lowercase because there are many. I got most of this by trolling through Wikipedia, so if it's wrong, take it up with them.
Anyone have a suggestion about what to do about governor? It's the only title I've never seen capitalized when used without a name, but governors are just as powerful as the Royal Regent, perhaps moreso. It's my only exceptional case, and you all know how much I love those.
2,753 2017-01-05 21:15:20
Re: Chicago Manual of Style (18 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Thank you, Corra. I considered buying the print version but was thinking the online version probably allows searches on anything in the manual, although I doubt I need the regular updates. I'll check out the cost of the printed version. I have a very small office, so desk and shelf space are at a premium as well. :-)
Thanks again.
Dirk
2,754 2017-01-05 21:08:10
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
It seems to be over my head too, because I can't seem to find a capitalization strategy that works across all of the cases that pop up.
2,755 2017-01-05 13:15:06
Topic: Chicago Manual of Style (18 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Can anyone tell me if the CMS is worth subscribing to? It's $35 per year, but if I can find a decent style manual online for free, that might be a handy alternative. I'm having a b*tch of a time nailing down consistent use of capitalization of titles in my work (e.g., emperor, empress, imperial, imperial family, queen, princess, governor, etc.). It seems overkill to buy the subscription for just a handful of questions, especially since I don't know if my questions are addressed. My trial expired years ago. (I've waded through two pages of Google results on capitalization, and they're all over the map.)
Thanks.
Dirk
2,756 2017-01-05 04:25:28
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Amy, the introduction of the ants really made me want to meet the queen eventually. Even the Borg had a queen (she was damn cool). Or do I mean Queen?
2,757 2017-01-05 03:15:16
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
You're not helping. Get in here and tell me what to do. (This is what you get for peaking in.) :-)
2,758 2017-01-05 01:16:37
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Upon further reading, it's possible Wikipedia uses imperial because they also write about other empires. Star Wars wiki uses Imperial. I also found an article that explains it the way you intend, K.
So how do you recommend handling imperator, imperatrix, imperial heir, regent, crown prince, princess, and governor?
Where the hell are my pills?
2,759 2017-01-04 20:43:29
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
What's a league name? Wikipedia is one of the sources I used to decide between Imperial and imperial, although I've since seen some inconsistencies in their articles. If I use Imperial, that suggests to me that Imperator (like Emperor in Star Wars) should also be caps. If I use Imperator, then I probably should use Imperatrix and Imperial Heir. That leads to Royal Regent and Crown Prince, which leads to Princess. The regent rules an entire planet, but so do governors, but I've never seen governor capitalized. Etc. Let me know if I'm misunderstanding you. I prefer using caps for many of these, but it breaks down as you follow the chain of logic, above. President in caps is unique to the US. At least one of the style guides I referenced says not to capitalize it.
I adopted my own style, which is to lowercase informal use of titles and caps formal ones. So you get "Apollo is the imperial heir," but "Apollo is Heres Imperialis of the Imperium Romanum."
2,760 2017-01-04 06:24:48
Re: Questions about re-posting a novel (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Nita, I tried to keep my chapters up to date, but found I kept editing the same old stuff over and over as new ideas crept in, some of which I subsequently abandoned. I gave up at the end of act 1 (1/4 of the way into the book) and just started writing. If someone's feedback gave me a great idea, I would usually incorporate it from then on, and I would use the chapter summaries to note what changes I was introducing going forward (i.e., here's what's different, pretend it was always there). If a new idea was particularly complex, I deferred it entirely to the next draft.
2,761 2017-01-03 13:13:19
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Um, ... huh?
2,762 2017-01-03 04:07:33
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Sign lang uage
2,763 2017-01-02 22:42:08
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Seabrass didn't recognize the name Shiburasu as his in spite of a number of hints in the chaper notes and chapter. K, brace yourself. I changed it to Shibrassu, figuring the Japanese language rules will relax over time. I'll probably change it again later to something less egregious.
2,764 2017-01-02 16:25:10
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Ale Much Too.
2,765 2017-01-02 06:21:23
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'll be damned. I finished another chapter. I combined two of the shogun's run-ins with Apollo to free up some chapter space. I need room for one additional chapter per MC in this act. I deleted the stuff about Apollo being trained by God (headsmacking exercises, etc.).
K, you now have two full-length back-to-back chapters about the MCs. Thanks for your help with the names.
Up next is a Galactipedia article about New Bethlehem, since I ripped that material out of chapter four, followed by Joseph's next full chapter. Then an article about the Julii, followed by Apollo's next full chapter. After that, the articles will fall off for a while.
I'm using the epigraphs for forum duels between Joseph and Apollo to build friction before they ever meet.
Quick go read! Amy, I still owe you a read. K, bzzt!
2,766 2017-01-01 22:33:09
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm looking for a Japanese equivalent to the shogun's martial arts training, originally called Glorious Death. Banzai is silly enough in this context that it's perfect.
Thanks
2,767 2017-01-01 16:53:26
Re: Questions about re-posting a novel (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Hi, Tom. I have the same issue. I chose to create two books, Into the Mind of God (for v2) and Into the Mind of God v3 (for v3+). I will be deleting some chapters and adding new ones as I proceed with v3, which will throw off the chapter count, creating a discontinuity between old and new chapters, if someone were to read based on chapter numbers alone. Naturally, you could make it work if you hide all of the old chapters and then proceed to publish your new chapters as you write/finish them. Republishing will cause the new chapters to show up in the list of new books available to everyone on their homes pages, so they can see the new content and go read it for points. Simply editing the old chapters to overwrite the existing content will not require points, but then your new material won't show up under new books.
Also, in my case, I want to leave the old version up (for stragglers to finish) and concurrently publish new chapters for new readers, without confusing both groups of readers. Therefore I used two books. Once everyone is done reading v2, I plan to take it down (make them inactive). That way, I can keep the old reviews for reference as I write v3. Two books also means I don't have to deal with a confusing list of new and old chapters intermingled in the same list under the site's publish feature.
Hope that helps.
Dirk
2,768 2017-01-01 06:54:53
Re: Happy New Year. (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Is that Gungan? You missed a "M'sa".
2,769 2017-01-01 02:03:30
Re: Happy New Year. (5 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Vielen Dank, Tom. Ich wünsche Euch allen ein Frohes Neues Jahr!
2,770 2017-01-01 02:00:12
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
K, can you suggest a relatively reliable source to translate Glorious Death to Romaji?
Thanks
Dirk
2,771 2016-12-31 21:21:42
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Fred Flintstone Saves Christmas
2,772 2016-12-31 16:28:22
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
a) If your editor doesn't find any major flaws you either have a best-seller or a bad editor
Or, you've had a variety of experienced reviewers, read a lot of how-to books, and written 2.5 drafts. At those prices, I can't afford the expense for a self-published book.
2,773 2016-12-31 06:09:27
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Amy, what level of editing feedback are you getting from your editor? More than just line edits, I assume. Also, what is the cost of editing a book? By the time I finish v3 + edits, I doubt I'll want to make any more major changes. I simply write too slowly. Just curious what you get for your $$$.
2,774 2016-12-30 06:09:03
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Aldamurisse? I'm intrigued. And after Carrie and her mother, I need a little good news. Do I need to skip to the end, Amy, or will the book still be up a while?
2,775 2016-12-29 04:50:46
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Quack wins. I could see a Twitter competitor that uses quacking as it's version of tweet.
Cock-a-doodle-doo is crazier, but it's too over-the-top, even for me.