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And the costars?

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Some actresses seem to get all the good parts. One actress who has played in many major movies with many famous costars, is Juliette Lewis, known for her portrayal of the bad girl.

Name the movie and at least one of her costars.

1.    Crooked cop who informs for the Mafia is tasked with a mob hit.
2.    Nerdy scientist marries a woman from outer space.
3.    Robbers kidnap a preacher and his kids, hiding out in a Mexican bar full of vampires.
4.    Teenage boy deals with his younger, mentally challenged brother’s brushes with the law.
5.    His mother jailed for dad’s murder, a young man takes on the care of three younger sisters.
6.    Former convict stalks, intends to kill lawyer and his family.
7.    The press follows two attractive young psychos on their killing spree.
8.    A young widow discovers her husband’s unpleasant secrets.
9.    Former cop selling black market virtual experiences comes across a murder.
10.    A writer is befriended by a Mob boss and an addict.
11.    ★EXTRA CREDIT★ TV’s bad boy duo made it to the big screen.

ANSWERS
1.    Romeo Is Bleeding (1994) with Gary Oldman, Lena Olin
2.    My Stepmother Is an Alien (1988) with Dan Akroyd, Kim Basinger
3.    From Dusk Till Dawn (1996) with George Clooney, Quentin Tarantino, Harvey Keitel
4.    What’s Eating Gilbert Grape? (1993) with Johnny Depp, Leonardo DiCaprio
5.    Back Roads (2018) with Alex Pettyfer, Jennifer Morrison
6.    Cape Fear (1991) with Robert De Niro, Nick Nolte, Jessica Lange
7.    Natural Born Killers (1994) with Woody Harrelson, Robert Downey, Jr.
8.    Catch and Release (2006) with Jennifer Garner, Timothy Olyphant
9.    Strange Days (1995) with Ralph Fiennes, Angela Bassett, Tom Sizemore
10.    A Million Little Pieces (2018) with Billy Bob Thornton, Charlie Hunnam
11.    Starsky and Hutch (2004) with Ben Stiller, Owen Wilson 

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Drat! I haven't seen The American. Maybe that's why I didn't know about it. Even though I try not to repeat if possible, the one I chose is one I've used before.

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1.    Pammy
2.
3.    John
4.    John
5.    John
6.    John
7.    John
8.    John
9.    John
10.    John
11.    Pammy

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Come on, everybody! If you each contribute one or two answers, the thing will get done. That's not cheating--it's cooperation. So, let's see...
1. Pammy
2.
3. John
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
11. Pammy

Anybody else got one or two answers?

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Well, geez, you guys! If you haven’t been to the movies lately, I can see why you don’t recognize these. Only one and ten are relative oldies, number one from 1980 and number eleven from 1996. The rest are from this century. I’ve seen them at home, on dvd and prime TV, so they’re available. Do you need hints?

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Br-r-r! It’s cold outside, so what better way to spend your free time (besides writing that best-seller) than with a movie? These feature a lot of snow, so break out the hot chocolate kit you got for Christmas!
Name the movie and at least one of the actors.
1.    Aspiring author goes crazy when trapped at snowed-in posh hotel.
2.    A failed hit man and his mentor hide out in a European tourist town.
3.    Detective investigates the disappearance of a woman whose scarf is found wrapped around a snowman’s neck.
4.    U.S. Marshall tracks a killer in Antarctica.
5.    American couple on a train from China to Moscow meet troubling fellow passengers.
6.    A travel agent plans to turn in a frozen corpse he found and collect the insurance.
7.    Sister and brother must split up after their escape from a casino heist goes bad.
8.    Insurance salesman teams up with a psychopath to steal a rare violin.
9.    Detective discovers a connection between serial murders and the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse.
10.    A businessman crosses the line from law-abiding citizen to wanted criminal.
11.    ★FREE GIFT TO YOU★: Bumbling auto salesman plots wife’s kidnapping.

ANSWERS
1.    The Shining (1980) Jack Nicholson, Shelley Duvall
2.    In Bruges (2008) Colin Farrell, Brendan Gleeson
3.    The Snowman (2017) Michael Fassbender, Rebecca Ferguson
4.    Whiteout (2009) Kate Beckinsale, Gabriel Macht
5.    Transsiberian (2008) Woody Harrelson, Emily Mortimer
6.    The Big White (2005) Robin Williams, Giovanni Ribisi
7.    Deadfall (2012) Eric Bana, Olivia Wilde
8.    Thin Ice (2011) Greg Kinnear, Billy Crudup
9.    Horsemen (2009) Dennis Quaid
10.    Gringo (2018) Joel Edgerton, CharlizeTheron
11.    Fargo (1996) William H. Macy, Frances McDormand

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Congratulations, Randy! Who knew...?

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Welcome!

I just reviewed your story. Good beginning! I didn't see it in the New Books section of the home page, though. You posted it as a short story. See if you can get it changed to a prologue under New Books. It might get more notice in that section.

Don't feel like you have to get your whole book written right away. You don't have to post succeeding chapters immediately--there's no time limit. You can work at your own speed.

I hope you enjoy thbw--you'll find a lot of helpful people here.  JP

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Good going, Bill! Reminds me of a song: I can see clearly now...

Bible quotations are copyrighted material, except for the King James Version. So if you're quoting any other version, you need permission first.

Also, a lot of readers skip quotes (myself included), feeling the 'meat' of the story is in the author's words, not someone else's.

This article discusses quoting the Bible.  https://stevelaube.com/quote-the-bible-carefully/

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Enjoy the time off, Bill. We'll be waiting for your return.  JP

Not only 'stood' vs 'stood up,' but remember those old traffic signs that said "No Standing," which meant not to stop your car in a certain place, even if the driver was inside and the motor was running? In other words, no taking up space. I say, if the situation calls for the action of standing up rather than the mere state of standing still, use it!

Authors, gird your loins and write what you want to say!

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Hello, Lauren!
I was going to welcome you, thinking you a new member, but checking out your profile page to see your work, I see you have been a member for more than eight years!
I look forward to reading some of your work. Happy holidays.  JP

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May you and your family enjoy a merry Christmas, and may you find what you seek in the new year!

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Looking over the homepage, I see no one except Marilyn has bothered to post a cover image for their poem or short story. Fortunately, the book authors have done a good job. Thank you, authors of books.

What many don't realize is that the written word is only one form of communication. Readers are often drawn to a book by the cover. It's not an insult to a writer or a reader. It's just the way some people's brains are wired. Mine is one of those. In school, I had a hard time deciding between a major in art or language.

For those of you whose works are currently appearing in plain, nondistinctive wrappers, I have a few questions.

If you can't be bothered to pull a free image from the internet to set the mood and lure the reader, what does that say about how much you value your own work?

While we're talking about the increasingly lazy attitude of members (in other threads), think about this: why should we care about your work if you don't?

What's the point of having a home page (created with a great deal of effort in the days when the site was being built) that offers readers and authors an opportunity to enhance their stories, poems, etc., with illustrations if no one takes advantage of it?

I wish you'd try a little harder to present your work in an appealing way. It means something to a lot of us.  JP

https://www.google.com/search?q=a+pictu … mp;bih=526

Dirk B. wrote:

Technically, the last reference to Romano could be changed to 'him', but it was suggested by someone else that I name him there for clarity.

Thoughts?

Thanks
Dirk


I agree with Temple that naming the character three times within three contiguous sentences is a bit much. It 'sounds' repetitive to the reader, as if the author can't think of another way to designate the character.

The problem is that when dealing with multiple male (or female) characters in a scene, a writer needs to clarify which one is doing and saying what. To make it 'sound' better, you should probably use those other names (the priest, Father, etc.) you've given the character. In another context, you would use such names as the detective, the cowboy, the teacher, and so on to keep things straight.


Most often, you would name the character in the first reference, then use the other designations in succeeding sentences. Since you've already established the characters in the reader's mind, you could use terms with descending specificity, so you would end up with something like this:

"Romano was about to leave when he noticed Connor sitting on the floor on the far side of Damiano's bed, supporting the younger boy's head like a pillow. The priest motioned for Connor to get up. The boy eased his arm free and followed him out of the room."

Of course, as always, the choice is up to the author.

Welcome!
There's no need to wait. Feel free to jump in and select a few stories to review. When you review a work, the author will be happy to reciprocate! That should get you started. JP

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Congratulations to the winners! Pat yourselves on the back!

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second round--done!

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May all your crimes, troubles and mysteries be limited to the pages of your books. Enjoy the holidays.  JP

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Or maybe it just feels like it. Remember Grandpa,and believe! Merry Christmas and happy new year.  JP

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Some of you may be working your buns off to meet deadlines, and others may be basking in the glow of jobs completed. Or like me, you may have been stalled by the flu. Whichever it is, take some time to enjoy the holiday, and may we all reach the best-seller list in the new year! Regards.  JP

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Done. Good luck!

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Memphis, now you're just being a curmudgeon!