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Please?

Yes, but you're chasing a horse out of the Barn Door ... and across borders.

Amy's doing the best thing possible under the circumstances.  It might be worth quickying other group owners with a pointer to the discussion.

And I hope Sol and his team get to work on it.

Hmm.  Maybe I misread the future ...

So somehow slip in the 'common knowledge' part.  There is a tie between that heritage and the dragons, is there not?  You don't need to tell the reader just yet what it is, do you?

We see a man's true upbringing in his acts -- Drech will be troubled first, however briefly, at the thought applied to him, and after he will see Sir E in that light.

Everrybuddy's got to get inta de act!  (said whom?)

Have you considered putting the 'myth' second, after the human prologue, so that the secret of the human prologue introduces the creation myth?  My suggestions about the register and style of the prologue remain.

s'gulp!

Another potentially valuable site: www.iohai.com .

John Boyd, 'the fighter pilot who changed the art of war', quietly eclipsed both von Clausewitz and Sun Tzu.  He distilled his life's work into a set of briefings, which may occupy military theorists for the next century--or two.  It was his habit to give them himself, but they have survived him, and can be found on the site above.

Right.  You let your editor and book designer or cover artist do it for you!

By all men bond to nothing/Being slaves without a lord,/By one blind idiot world obeyed,/Too blind to be abhorred.

In short, in matters vegetable, animal, or mineral / I am the very model of a modern Major General!