Many congratulations, Randy.
201 2019-05-10 02:07:48
Re: The Results of the 2018 CIBA Awards Are In! (24 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
202 2019-05-07 20:32:59
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I am seriously pissed with both Verizon and the gutless, witless utility regulators, and I hope that people rip the government officials off in their personal lives the way Verizon has ripped off the people they are supposed to represent.
In the words of Alma TCBoyken's (catrotatorsquarterly.com) Tycho Rhonorida: "If he weren't a schaef he wouldn't have been fleeced."
203 2019-04-19 02:52:45
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm here ... and trying to clear some tasks to my multitasking limit. Unfortunately the State of New Jersey has allowed Verizon to completely default on its obligation to keep the phones working in all circumstances, and copper-wired, centrally-powered service (POTS--Plain Old Telephone Service) is ending in favor of Fiber-to-the-Home, with power backup provided by D-cell batteries that are only expected to last for 24 hours. ("Don't turn it on unless you are expecting a call."--Seriously!? Then what good is it?) Worse, I fear there may be active circuitry in the battery box, making it hard to cutover automatically and hard to replace. I may need to go for a full UP$, with 400 Wh or more. $$$$$$$
I have to clear wall space, etc., while I'm trying to get other projects cleared.
I am seriously pissed with both Verizon and the gutless, witless utility regulators, and I hope that people rip the government officials off in their personal lives the way Verizon has ripped off the people they are supposed to represent.
204 2019-02-23 12:09:10
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
And the brothers Handlebar and Hersheybar. This is so-bad-it's-good carried to the level of a literary atrocity.
205 2019-02-22 10:48:03
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
"Each level was obliquely protected by out-thrusting battlements corniced and groined at the odd enjambments. Each odd enjambment was set perpendicular to every adjacent even one-way thoroughfare. Needless to say, the inhabitants were always late for their appointments, if not totally lost."
---- =Bored of the Rings=
I'm struggling with some geometrical architectonics, trying to spare the Library of the Academy from the fate of Minas Trony.
206 2019-02-13 04:05:51
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Each time I think I've got the next chapter half done, I find myself saying 'No, that's too damn long for the action around it.' I'm also trying to assimilate lessons from the recent FBeasts movie, good (eliciting empathy, depicting depravity) and bad (over-use of technique, excess complexity).
207 2019-01-22 13:04:58
Re: The Kurdish Connection AND Dangerous Alliance (14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Wow! 'Awesome' doesn't cover it.
208 2019-01-20 20:53:32
Re: Dangerous Alliance (15 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congratulations!
209 2019-01-14 01:16:37
Re: 2,000 Years Later - Will H. (38 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
TW also has one model for style. It serves her well, for the kind of story she is writing. It would not serve as well for Amy's story, or the stories of K's world, or for my story.
210 2018-12-29 23:20:44
Re: Psychiatric discourse on the correct use of 'up' (34 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
'stood' alone implies stasis. 'stood up' implies movement.
211 2018-12-25 07:31:51
Re: Need Some Encouragement (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Here's what one successful writer has to say about chasing perfection: https://accordingtohoyt.com/2018/12/24/drumming/
212 2018-12-23 22:55:54
Re: Need Some Encouragement (9 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
You're learning that your work can get better--which means your judgement is getting better. Remember what the Marines say: Pain is weakness leaving the body.
213 2018-12-23 05:25:43
Re: What, no picture? (4 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Short and sweeter: Maybe the author wants to be judged by the words, without relying on a picture to crank the engine.
214 2018-12-22 10:23:06
Re: What's With Some of the New Members (89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
True. They are trained pros, accustomed to trolling the populace, often with a story that contradicts the one they told last month. I have no doubt a panic would ensue if they proclaimed the sun was going to set in the east. And they would blame it on whichever Public Scapegoat they were targetting that week.
215 2018-12-22 02:15:45
Re: What's With Some of the New Members (89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
216 2018-12-21 20:03:03
Re: What's With Some of the New Members (89 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
JM Straczinski likes to say "When you become obsessed with the enemy, you become the enemy."
When you become obsessed with the troll, you become the troll.
Unless you and Charles are the same person, or you're paying him off like Lord Cholmdelmondeleigh in GKC's =A Painful Fall of a Great Reputation= (in =The Club of Queer Trades=). (Apologies if I missed a syllable in the villain's name.)
217 2018-12-21 06:21:50
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Confound. I just put up a reply and it disappeared.
I'm on the smartphone, whose keyboard can charitably be called rebarbative. I won't repeat all the logic I went through, but it looks like you need the 'ing', to give the 'to' an object that is or acts like a noun, in this case a gerund.
218 2018-12-19 23:33:06
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Did you do Count Lundersot?
219 2018-12-17 06:29:44
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I've spent the last couple of day's work sessions hunting for the notes I was working on before I did the Count Lundersot chapter. They include characters and backstory. I've found most of them, and hope to get immersed and productive before Christmas.
220 2018-12-16 12:28:29
Re: Draft review (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
True, it's a second problem, but not secondARY; it exists alongside the first one.
The human visual system is a monochrome system with a low-res color system layered on top of it, and a language-recognition system alongside the color system. The best immediate recognition comes from differences in luminous intensity and shape.
(The analog NTSC color television system took advantage of the difference in our luminance and color acuity. It had about 1/3 the bandwidth for the two hue signals as for the luminance signal.)
221 2018-12-15 22:23:47
Re: Draft review (16 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Besides the size/shape of the buttons, you can change the color of one of them, or make one of them an outline. I like the outline idea; I think it a stronger change that won't compromise your color scheme. (The text inside the outline would be dark on light.)
222 2018-12-03 05:17:06
Re: Sentence structure question - Grammar (8 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Alessandro never liked Connor, considering him to pious to be his friend.
Though in an informal, breezy voice I'd go with your original version.
223 2018-12-02 05:16:50
Re: Is the site running slowly? - Bugs (12 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Is thee from Cornwall?
224 2018-12-01 04:41:53
Re: I versus me - Grammar (29 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
I'll go further. To the extent that you are writing in a close PoV, the narrator's vocabulary and some grammar choices should reflect the character, using words that the character might use, because it that character who is being represented by the words.
But it is hard to see how the I/me issue arises there.
225 2018-12-01 01:36:06
Re: I versus me - Grammar (29 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
If the narrator is a first person narrator, then surely it should matter. I'm thinking now of =The Moonstone=, whose multiple narrators have each their own voice. A more modest example is John Dickson Carr's =The Arabian Nights Murder=, which is in its way a minor classic.