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Why is is that when you are thinking, working productively on one things, four other ideas come to you?  And why, when you are roadblocked on one thing, you're roadblocked on everything?

Sigh.

Amy, I'll do two reviews for you.  I have to do a couple more for other people today, and that won't even catch me up.

Meanwhile, while I was working on a 'final' demo box for my flasher circuit--weeks ago, and I still have to cut the opening for the switch--I got the flywheel diode backwards.  It actually managed to flash, but drew so much current it was probably responsible for blowing the output of my little battery-powered power supply.  That has to be fixed, and I'd rather it be resistent to future damage of that sort.

It looks like the bootstrap transistor is blown to a short.  If it's not the bootstrap, it's the main output.  Either way, I'm redesigning that part, using multiple bootstrap transistors in parallel.  That will allow it to carry more current with less current on the 'main' output.  But ... paralleling bipolar junction transistors requires current sharing resistors.  The low values I need are only available in surface-mount, about half the size of a grain of rice.  Since all of that has to be mounted on the heat sink, I have an interesting physical design problem.  I know what I want, but not yet how to get it.

The main output transistor will also get a heatsink.  There's only one kind available for TO-92 package devices, and it's a flat teaspoon-sized blade, so I have to move things around on my little circuit board.  (I'm starting with a new board.)

I want to put a low-pass filter on the voltage-regulating section so that brief current spikes don't let the output drop as the internal resistance of the batteries cuts in--but I want to be able to switch it out.  It looks like it will take less board space with the parts soldered point-to-point on the switch.

The battery circuit switches were a beast last time.  They'll probably be a beast this time.

And now ... as I was trying to work on the physical design of the heat sink-and-bootstrap unit ('power block') I got nagged by the thought that I could still overload my main output transistor.  The solution is a current limited between the output and the current bootstrap.  The current source for the output transistor goes through a resistor that develops a voltage as the output current rises.  When it gets up around the working range for junction voltages, the current bypasses that sensing resistor, feeding the base terminals of the bootstrap transistors.  Their output--up to 200 times the current they receive--is added to the output transistor's current.

So the current limiter has to go between the collector of the output transistor and the current bootstrap.  It will drop probably about 1.4 volts, reducing the output voltage I can get with a given battery voltage.  It will also have interesting effects as the output transistor goes into saturation with its collector drive cut off.

So I need to test and tweak the limiting circuit (3 to 9 hours) and figure out how to squeeze it on the circuit board.  It needs just four nodes, but it involves two transistors tied to each other and the output transistor ... and that makes for a hard fit, especially since the output transistor has to sit in a way that will make the flat heatsink mounting work.  (The heatsink for the power block is a finned chunk of extruded aluminum.  I'd prefer a black finish, but this is what I got cheap.)

AND ... while I was working on that problem I suddenly got A Very Good Idea to increase the tangle Merran and Pausonallie will get themselves into.  I'm struggling to get stuff revised and get to that part.  And I can only remember one of the orders I need to place today ... sigh!

This after four days when I couldn't think long enough about one thing to make progress.

On to reviews!

But was Sosol the original monster, killed to stop her, after which Faulter vowed to pursue necromancy to get her back?

Randy, well-done.  I hope you're bursting with pride and excitement.

No.  Sosol was a whole body.

Since Anver can gain access to Zyrtec's rooms, was the preserved-head mage who has (for want of a better word) infected Anver Zyrtec's second?  Or is the timeline all wrong?  Is the Guildhouse older than Behira?

Reviewed CJ's Chapter 66 in Raven's Curse.

Reviewed CJ's Chapter 67 in Raven's curse.  And I forgot ... I also reviewed Suin's Ch2 V1 (Chapter 3)(!) a day or two ago.

The URL ends with April-Chastain-Ingrigue/dp/1537186833/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1475459745&sr=8-2&keywords=wilted+magnolias

From 'ref=' onward you have info about where the link came from, etc.  Some of it may tell Amazon if it came from a link that earns a commission.  The query part (including, I think, the alphabet-encoding spec utf8, tells Amazon what the original lookup was.  They can use that if the book is not found, or to provide additional items for display.

All sailors should danse the hornpipe!

Maybe.  But he's still both magic-sick and soul-sick.  Put a sick man on a mission?  Yeah, baby.

But how sure is he that the absent Wolf will be targeted?  Or is it just the McGuffin to get him going?  If he knows that Drezdorf is there?

His haste with fear for Airen will rule out stops and dawdling.  No listening to Karl, no thought of Madame Z. or The Milky Jug ...

Always tradeoffs.

In =Acts= Anver amd the school have to save Kha. In Mandate, you start with Kha having to save himself

Does the Hearth Witch link to the plot or develop Kha's character?  Or othrrwise contribute to his journey?

In his cups ...

Teary Mace soup?

But does the shortened URL refer to a URL with the '?' identifier sections?  When the abbreviation is expanded, you'll have just what you provided to make the abbreviation.

I'm not convinced.  You need a reason for your reader to identify with Kha before the new dangers appear.  You have it: what Kha has lost, and what Kha is seeking (which might not be quite the same thing).  You can have him consider stopping at Madame Zia's, or even The Milky Jug ... and discard the idea.  No, Airen's the only one left, the only one still whole ... if she is.  From the market square, a jump cut to the last fifty feet before Airen's guardhouse.

Wait, you need to get the Centrillium ... okay  that happens as he meditates on backstory.  He tries to imagine the fate of his friends ..., he's thinking of Drezdorf when it happens ... and the laughter seems at first to be making mock of a damaged man.

You've created the basis for so much theater here ...

Deleting the extra info at the end of the URL before you give it to someone is alnost always a good idea.

I believe if the user is logged in with an Amazon ID that will override what's in the link (Amazon has very competent web programmers) but better safe than sorry.

Before you begin serious revision, read at least the opening part of Bird's book.

The Germans allow us to replace an umlaut with a trailing 'e'.  The Dutch allow us to replace a double-dotted 'y' with 'ij'.  But the French?  Oh, the French! They've got so many decorations on their letters, it would take another row-and-a-half on the keyboard to accommodate them, and they give us no alternative way to spell them.  Of course, since they change their spellings every generation or so, maybe that's a good thing.

Anyway, it's hard to find parts for all those imported words.

Sometimes too the writer is working for an effect with the 'oddity' and may prefer either to keep it or to reinforce it, rather than to give up on it.

Thank you both, and I should learn to let some gratitude toward my reviewers creep out.  Thank you, Randy.

Don't be so sure they don't help.  The only thing I really dig my heels in about is commas.

Take the issue of tags.  If I were a stronger writer the extra tags might not be needed, and I might find ways to pace the dialogue without them.

Often someone will say I've aimed too far left.  I'm sure I haven't  but why did the reader think so?  It takes me multiple rereads over a few weeks to see that, back in chapter N-4 I set the target too far to the right.

There are placed where I may or may not be trying too hard, such as adjusting the narrative voice to reflect the PoV chapters.

I'm including you-the-reviewer in the thesis-antithesis-synthesis, and you're free to tell me why I'm wrong.

But I dig in my heels on commas because I believe the whole stylebook approach to be not even wrong, based as it is on a LOCAL examination of the grammar tree.

Kha and the sickness: if the sickness is killing him then he -has- to seek help.  But if it's not killing him and he -chooses- to seek help anyway, something is motivating him . . . and -that's- a story.  His personal search leads him to Sil, and then the Mysteries of the Earthwound come after him.

Can the fourth book play the Airen-Kha-Marion chord?

Don't worry that Kha's journey turns from the personal (loss AND the Earthwound mystery) into the cosmic problem.  Anver's journey changes, too, several times.  It's Rising Action, or Rising Jeopardy, snd ties nicely into The Mysteries of the Earthwound.

Now, if all this advice  is any good I will wish I  could do as we with my own story.