Imagine that the Edsel was subcontracted to Yugo and built with Pinto and Vega parts, along with some of the glue they used in the Boston tunnel ceiling (the one that collapsed). Its quality would exceed that of almost all software written today.
901 2017-02-10 06:06:13
Re: The Galaxy Tales - Dirk B. (1,217 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
902 2017-02-09 13:34:08
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Going into a master mage's school was like going into a fortress. But Fortress Alina was especially ... creepy. Tawdry in its opulance, a monument to the ego of Mistress Alina, the life force at the center.
Not the words to use, but maybe the pictures to paint, with a bit of cangiante.
903 2017-02-09 13:24:59
Re: The Kurdish Connection - Two Great Reviews! (17 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Congratulations again!
904 2017-02-09 12:35:19
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Anent the reviews
Yunker obliviscar numquam. (Never forget Yunker.)
Perfect and progressive tenses. (More precisely, perfect or progressive aspects. The Wikipedia article is worth reading but it's written with the dusty odor of Professional Grammarian.)
"He goes." --Simple present, which is used in English to show repetitive or -as-a-rule action. It's also used for future action with a time qualifier. ("He retires in three years.")
"He is going." --Present progressive (or continuing present), which indicates specific action in the present.
"He went." --Simple past.
"He was going." -- Past progressive.
"He had gone." --Past perfect, also called pluperfect (the name used for the past perfect when studying Latin).
"He had been going." --Past perfect progressive.
The perfect and progressive aspects are also applied to the future: 'will go', 'will be going', 'will have gone', 'will have been going'.
Two notes:
English has a moderately complex system of verb tense, aspect, mood, etc. I've heard that modern Italian is much more complex, and read that the Greek of Plato and Aristotle has a verb system that makes Italian look primitive. (Molon labe is not Come and take them (a taunt) but Come in order that you may take them, also a taunt. And one of the words is an idiomatic irregular contracted form.)
If John McWhorter's heresy is to be believed (Our Magnificent Bastard Tongue) our use of auxlary verbs comes to us from the Gaelic languages, most particularly Welsh.
905 2017-02-08 20:32:52
Re: The Sorcerer's Progress (1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Why is is that when you are thinking, working productively on one things, four other ideas come to you? And why, when you are roadblocked on one thing, you're roadblocked on everything?
Sigh.
Amy, I'll do two reviews for you. I have to do a couple more for other people today, and that won't even catch me up.
Meanwhile, while I was working on a 'final' demo box for my flasher circuit--weeks ago, and I still have to cut the opening for the switch--I got the flywheel diode backwards. It actually managed to flash, but drew so much current it was probably responsible for blowing the output of my little battery-powered power supply. That has to be fixed, and I'd rather it be resistent to future damage of that sort.
It looks like the bootstrap transistor is blown to a short. If it's not the bootstrap, it's the main output. Either way, I'm redesigning that part, using multiple bootstrap transistors in parallel. That will allow it to carry more current with less current on the 'main' output. But ... paralleling bipolar junction transistors requires current sharing resistors. The low values I need are only available in surface-mount, about half the size of a grain of rice. Since all of that has to be mounted on the heat sink, I have an interesting physical design problem. I know what I want, but not yet how to get it.
The main output transistor will also get a heatsink. There's only one kind available for TO-92 package devices, and it's a flat teaspoon-sized blade, so I have to move things around on my little circuit board. (I'm starting with a new board.)
I want to put a low-pass filter on the voltage-regulating section so that brief current spikes don't let the output drop as the internal resistance of the batteries cuts in--but I want to be able to switch it out. It looks like it will take less board space with the parts soldered point-to-point on the switch.
The battery circuit switches were a beast last time. They'll probably be a beast this time.
And now ... as I was trying to work on the physical design of the heat sink-and-bootstrap unit ('power block') I got nagged by the thought that I could still overload my main output transistor. The solution is a current limited between the output and the current bootstrap. The current source for the output transistor goes through a resistor that develops a voltage as the output current rises. When it gets up around the working range for junction voltages, the current bypasses that sensing resistor, feeding the base terminals of the bootstrap transistors. Their output--up to 200 times the current they receive--is added to the output transistor's current.
So the current limiter has to go between the collector of the output transistor and the current bootstrap. It will drop probably about 1.4 volts, reducing the output voltage I can get with a given battery voltage. It will also have interesting effects as the output transistor goes into saturation with its collector drive cut off.
So I need to test and tweak the limiting circuit (3 to 9 hours) and figure out how to squeeze it on the circuit board. It needs just four nodes, but it involves two transistors tied to each other and the output transistor ... and that makes for a hard fit, especially since the output transistor has to sit in a way that will make the flat heatsink mounting work. (The heatsink for the power block is a finned chunk of extruded aluminum. I'd prefer a black finish, but this is what I got cheap.)
AND ... while I was working on that problem I suddenly got A Very Good Idea to increase the tangle Merran and Pausonallie will get themselves into. I'm struggling to get stuff revised and get to that part. And I can only remember one of the orders I need to place today ... sigh!
This after four days when I couldn't think long enough about one thing to make progress.
On to reviews!
906 2017-02-07 13:00:09
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
But was Sosol the original monster, killed to stop her, after which Faulter vowed to pursue necromancy to get her back?
907 2017-02-07 04:00:12
Re: The Kurdish Connection Now Published (40 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Randy, well-done. I hope you're bursting with pride and excitement.
908 2017-02-06 19:34:06
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
No. Sosol was a whole body.
909 2017-02-06 16:33:35
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Since Anver can gain access to Zyrtec's rooms, was the preserved-head mage who has (for want of a better word) infected Anver Zyrtec's second? Or is the timeline all wrong? Is the Guildhouse older than Behira?
910 2017-02-06 01:12:06
Re: Please post here regarding a completed review (671 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)
Reviewed CJ's Chapter 66 in Raven's Curse.
911 2017-02-05 16:47:16
Re: Please post here regarding a completed review (671 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)
Reviewed CJ's Chapter 67 in Raven's curse. And I forgot ... I also reviewed Suin's Ch2 V1 (Chapter 3)(!) a day or two ago.
912 2017-02-05 04:26:26
Re: WARNING to people who use Amazon link to promote their book (14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
The URL ends with April-Chastain-Ingrigue/dp/1537186833/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1475459745&sr=8-2&keywords=wilted+magnolias
From 'ref=' onward you have info about where the link came from, etc. Some of it may tell Amazon if it came from a link that earns a commission. The query part (including, I think, the alphabet-encoding spec utf8, tells Amazon what the original lookup was. They can use that if the book is not found, or to provide additional items for display.
913 2017-02-04 15:22:02
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
914 2017-02-04 15:13:10
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Maybe. But he's still both magic-sick and soul-sick. Put a sick man on a mission? Yeah, baby.
But how sure is he that the absent Wolf will be targeted? Or is it just the McGuffin to get him going? If he knows that Drezdorf is there?
His haste with fear for Airen will rule out stops and dawdling. No listening to Karl, no thought of Madame Z. or The Milky Jug ...
Always tradeoffs.
915 2017-02-04 12:41:31
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
In =Acts= Anver amd the school have to save Kha. In Mandate, you start with Kha having to save himself
916 2017-02-04 12:38:54
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Does the Hearth Witch link to the plot or develop Kha's character? Or othrrwise contribute to his journey?
917 2017-02-04 09:16:57
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
In his cups ...
918 2017-02-04 05:32:44
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Teary Mace soup?
919 2017-02-04 02:27:00
Re: WARNING to people who use Amazon link to promote their book (14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
But does the shortened URL refer to a URL with the '?' identifier sections? When the abbreviation is expanded, you'll have just what you provided to make the abbreviation.
920 2017-02-04 01:30:01
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
I'm not convinced. You need a reason for your reader to identify with Kha before the new dangers appear. You have it: what Kha has lost, and what Kha is seeking (which might not be quite the same thing). You can have him consider stopping at Madame Zia's, or even The Milky Jug ... and discard the idea. No, Airen's the only one left, the only one still whole ... if she is. From the market square, a jump cut to the last fifty feet before Airen's guardhouse.
Wait, you need to get the Centrillium ... okay that happens as he meditates on backstory. He tries to imagine the fate of his friends ..., he's thinking of Drezdorf when it happens ... and the laughter seems at first to be making mock of a damaged man.
You've created the basis for so much theater here ...
921 2017-02-03 19:53:44
Re: WARNING to people who use Amazon link to promote their book (14 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
Deleting the extra info at the end of the URL before you give it to someone is alnost always a good idea.
I believe if the user is logged in with an Amazon ID that will override what's in the link (Amazon has very competent web programmers) but better safe than sorry.
922 2017-02-03 12:46:49
Re: Acts/ Dictates/ Mandates/ Mantle - Amy's Thread (1,905 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)
Before you begin serious revision, read at least the opening part of Bird's book.
923 2017-02-03 05:23:52
Re: Say the first word that comes to mind... (1,634 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)
The Germans allow us to replace an umlaut with a trailing 'e'. The Dutch allow us to replace a double-dotted 'y' with 'ij'. But the French? Oh, the French! They've got so many decorations on their letters, it would take another row-and-a-half on the keyboard to accommodate them, and they give us no alternative way to spell them. Of course, since they change their spellings every generation or so, maybe that's a good thing.
Anyway, it's hard to find parts for all those imported words.
924 2017-02-02 20:41:36
Re: Discussion of NJC's novel, The Sorcerer's Progress (22 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)
Sometimes too the writer is working for an effect with the 'oddity' and may prefer either to keep it or to reinforce it, rather than to give up on it.
925 2017-02-02 19:25:47
Re: Discussion of NJC's novel, The Sorcerer's Progress (22 replies, posted in Alpha to Omega - Review Group)
Thank you both, and I should learn to let some gratitude toward my reviewers creep out. Thank you, Randy.