I will read the replies at least once when the main reply is filled in and I'm informed that you've replied.  Feel free to reply in the forum if you prefer.

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(7 replies, posted in TheNextBigWriter Premium)

Oh, and use the reply-to-review.  Makes the reviews feel loved.

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Do reviews.  You'll get one or two authors to reciprocate.  If you review works that are in similar genre and style to yours, the authors may be more likely to reciprocate.  And expect to do twenty or so before you find a few review buddies you'll be working with.

Even if you don't get many responses, you'll build points.

You said nice things on your last review reply.  Let me remind you that I Really Believe in your story.  And you are a prince for putting up with all the ideas I hurl over the ramparts at your work.

Okay, the Chapter 2 review is complete, with lots of gripes, bellyaches, proclamations from on high, and snyde comments.  All for your enjoyment, of course.

ONCE UPON A TIME when the world was young there was a Martian named Smith. Valentine Michael Smith was as real as taxes but he was a race of one.

This book shakes and shocks us, half a century after its first version was published.  But today's obsession with opening In Media Res would rule out this engaging, fascinating opening, surely in the top 100 of all English Language novels.

Is the James Bond style of In Media Res progress, or just fashion?  Is it, perhaps, a crutch for writers who have no other interesting opening?

I'm starting a six to eight hour review session.  I've got reviews to do up the wazoo, and, as some of you know, I have a very big wazoo.

My mother was fond of Janet Evanovich's Stephanie Plum books, and I've kept reading them in her menory.

Stephanie is a sorta' sweet not-too-young thing who works, improbably, as a bounty hunter.  She'd be dead if not for some male admirers.  One of them runs a very profitable security business, and has the money to give Stephanie expensive cars to drive.  And destroy, in ever more outrageous ways. Many are Mercedes or Porches.  At the average of two cars destroyed per book, and 24 mainline Stephanie Plum stories, she's up around 48 cars.  At $150,000 each (estimated) that's 7.2 million dollars of Ranger's 'entertainment' account she's sent to the internal combustion grave.

But who's counting?

'Child' here means the young girl we saw in the shadowbook?
So AM is potentially far more powerful--and dangerous--than either Saundon or Behira?  I can imagine them getting the willies.
And when Jaylene learns who AM is behind the mask ... does she really learn? .... why isn't she cringing  Character evolution here?

I believe it's Jack Bogle who pointed out (at a particular time maybe 20 years ago) that if you'd 'bought the market' just before the great depression hit and kept the money in until that date, you'd still have over an 8% annual return.

Of course, compound interest is an exponential process, so highs and lows don't average out in the obvious ways.  But according to Wikipedia, Bogle on Mutual Funds/New Perspectives ... is now considered a classic.  I can't recommend it enough, especially since it covers things like the interest rate/bond price linkage.

Don't worry about short-term blips.  Worry about the long-term effect of business policies and international actors like the little-lamented OPEC.

Some years ago my mother was in a monster tizzy because a rather large bond my father had bought (to help provide for retirement) had lost about half its value over the course of a month.  I looked at it and tried not to laugh.  It was a zero-coupon bond from some reasonably sound company, with a 20-year maturity.  Zero coupon bonds take those swings in resonse to small interest rate changes.  It took a while to almost convince her that swings like that don't reflect the company's soundness, or affect the bond's value at maturity.

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When that happens, try twiddling your thumbs.  Change speeds, reverse directions, make it look like you're working on the Schrodinger Wave Equation.

Or keep a crossword for Those Special Moments.

Ouch, Dirk.  Two percent is a killer.

If it's tax-protected, you don't need to worry about buy-and-hold.  You just need to worry about returns and expenses.

Even in Canada, you need to worry about changes in currency valuations.

If you're still investing in Vanguard, you might look at their just-barely-junk High-Yield Bond fund.  It acts like a mix of bond and stock.

RPG authors say New Orleans, No City For You!

They're wrong on point two, by the way.  It's an eroded river delta.  Flowing water does things like that.

Owa Taboo Biam, to quote Oscar Madison.

The Horror bits are gems.  Kat has been studying gem magic from Faulter's private library.

Connection?  Eeek.  Ulp.  Oop   Errrg.  YAAaaaaaaahhh!!!

That's why I use low-cost mutual funds, mostly indexed.  But Canada's securities laws may not allow such things.

Take this offline if you want: what drove AM to become what she is?

Sorry.  I'm a bit slow to see the obvious.

Do they have index funds in the True North?

The downsides are that people don't get annoucements of new/revised work, and people don't get points for reviews.

I don't understand what you mean by 'keeping it all in one place'.  After a complete rewrite, how does it help to have the old reviews mixed with the new?  You can republish under the same name and chapter by creatimg a new version.

It also doesn't alert people that there's new material up for review.

Did you republish, or just edit the changes in?

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What we have here is what macPhee would have called a phatic hiatus.

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Are you admitting you're driven by cravings smile ?

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Kdot wrote:

It's disconcerting

Understatement of the decade!  How can a guy be competent if he cannot plan?  How can he plan if the people he is supposed to trust implicitly--and impress with his competence--systematically undermine him in what shoukd be their best moments together?

Okay.  Now let's find out how the ladies see this.  That is, if they're willing to open up about it.  (Dangerous words, indeed.)

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(1,528 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

Making progress.  I expect to have the easy 4,000 words done by tomorrow.  Then, the hard part.

I'm planning, tentatively, to get very nasty with a feminine habit that can drive men to distraction: The woman who says she doesn't want dessert, but helps herself to the dessert her husband/boyfriend/date orders.  I figure there must be a reason for it besides cussedness and an excuse to yield to temptation whilst virtuously denying it.  Sharing as bonding, maybe?  Or just a desire to strike back at the boor who put temptation in front of her?