amy s wrote:

Breckin is half an elf (like Kha).  She has been a slave of the Horror since she was about 20.  (On both sides of the ring)  Since I imagine her to be about 50-60 years old, that makes it 30-40 years that she hasn't had a Horror-free moment.

'On both sides of the ring'?


But if we believe Sil, a Horror can be destroyed.

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Extended characters: The new software seems to take exception to valid characters outside the USASCII range.  I've been using Greek letters as placeholders and they are being turned into question marks.  For me this is a ruddy nuisance, but for people writing science fiction or anything technical, it could be a lot worse.   Alpha, Beta, Gamma, Zeta, Sigma, Kappa, Epsilon and the rest all have valid codepoints, upper and lower case, in the Basic Multilingual Plane.

-Edit-: Your mobile interface puts the editing window up in HTML, in a 2.6 line by 30 char window.  The character in question is shown as a question mark in the HTML.

I note that you now allow the smartphone user to request and get the regular interface.  Thank you.

Yester-today problem seems fixed.  Thanks

Someone please correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't believe this site will host images, apart from author photos and covers.

That might be a problem for the authors of illustrated children's books.

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Medieval Fantasy Magic group, forum, Sorcerer's Progress thread.

As of this moment of posting, posts 23 through 25 show as "Today" and the subesquent posts 26 through 28 show as "Yesterday".  I think there's a little mixup in your horology routines.

I'm assuming it was after Charm was Charm'd?  I can't imagine Brekin and Slash seeing much in each other?  At least not much that would keep them together.

Why did Horror-Charm allow Brekin to stay with Slash?  Clearly she feels something about him, even if it's only that he can protect her.

I'm not sure now if I'm confusing different versions.  I remember Jaylene telling Sulder that Alda >destroyed< a Horror, but now the Horror resides in that mustard pot, ready to come out when Jaylene jumps in the river.  (AAaarrghhh!)

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Well, you're not a True Mystery Fan.  John Dickson Carr called it The Grandest Game in the World.

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Not that it relates to anything here but I've just been reminded of some words John Dickson Carr put into the mouth of Henri Bencolin:

A corpse (let us say) is found strangled, sitting in a chair by a window, and wearing a domino mask; and all the clocks in the house are found with their faces turned to the wall. You are carefully warned that the blazing clue to the truth is the fact that there is a teaspoon in the victim's side pocket, and that, without all these things being just as they were, the crime could never have taken place.--You follow me? No clue was left merely to confuse; or because it was a reminder of the victim's past misdeeds (that saddest device of all); or because the murderer thought it artistic. Each indication was a necessary part of the pattern."

"What's the explanation?" demanded Bryce, his face lighting up with interest.

Bencolin looked at him. "I suggest you think of one," he said politely. "Or apply yourself to a study of Rose Klonec's murder. But to finish this mask-clock-teaspoon puzzle. Now, suppose at the denouement the identity of the murderer was revealed--for the simple reason that his fingerprints matched those on the collar of the strangled man. Would you feel cheated? That's exactly what might happen in life; but would you feel cheated? You know damned well you would. There is no doubt as to the identity of the murderer. He admits the crime. Then he shoots himself. Consequently, you never know the significance of the mask or the reversed clocks, or what deduction you should have drawn from the teaspoon. Page 315, 'The End.' What would you do? You would strangle the author, lynch the publisher, and shoot the bookseller. Yet why do you complain? You know the identity of the murderer, don't you?"

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Say, why did Charm/Breckin take to Slash, anyway?  And before or after Tazar had his balls?

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Well, then I have to rush and get it in!

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So go read the future stuff in Vol 2 while you wait.

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Minor  nit: in the Settings / email page, you spell 'below' as 'bellow'.  I suggest also that the 'email' menu item and page be titled 'email notifications'.

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I have a draft of the new version of CH3.  I'm hoping to get it out in the next 36 hours.  Amy, you'll beat me up on description.  I think this new version will have a litttle more room to insert it after the thrashing.

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Another possible future chapter here.

These occur as I see how characters' paths have to cross and what sort of plot things events have to unfold, and how.  Most 'what' at this time.  It also helps me see what I have to develop in the first volume as I rework it.

I changed the wording to be that 'she whacked Slash in the noggin with a pitcher.' Better?

Alda is now carrying a spear, and it clatters to the ground (along with Elston's weapon) when Elston answers the door. Poof. Spears appear.

In the damaged, supperating noggin.  Actually, I'm sorry I suggested 'noggin', since it's not your voice.

Alda has to avoid Slash's renewed injuries and his mangled mug, his damaged dial, his disfigured phiz.

I was afraid the spears had gone into into HammerSpace

A classic version control question.  After you version-control the components, how do you create/manage a unified version for the whole product?  The software world has tried a number of different models.  Some work well, some are clunky, and some seem slick but are fraught with problems, often because the descriptions contradict the user's mental model.

Anyhow, there is a fair amount of prior art, in the working model, in the interface functions, and in the back end.  The back end part is probably less useful because many systems store changes as deltas.  That presumes certain ratios of storage and storage access to computation power.  Unless you are running a truly massive--and effective--RAID system, the cost of storage access--disk transactions and head movement--has gone up relative to the cost of storage and computation.

If you're going to work on it at some point I encourage you to open the dicussion to users and to emphasise walking through scenarios to see whether it works as expected--and provides the benefits expected to the user.

If you're going to take this version control step, you might deepen the hierarchy to multi-volume works and multi-section multi-volume works.  The step from three to four is usually easier than from three to four, and that is much easier than the step from two to three.

If we're determined to keep the inline review system, and if reviewers are convinced that it's a better way to enter reviews, then I'll ask for a couple of things.  First, the option to display the whole set, with whatever replies, in a format suitable for printing.  Second, for relief from the length-of-reply limit on the individual 'tweet'.

But I still think a way to link a single-body review into the text, with at least two display options, would be better.

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It's a sketch.  Do the plot/milieu questions hit you like a big pizza pie?

I also found some things that won't work between the timer and the flasher.  The timer turns the flasher on by supplying power to it via a MOSFET.  I forgot that the timer output is totem-pole, not open collector/drain.  Fixable, but at this point I need to rearrange some things and find the most economical way to do it.  I don't have much room left for parts and connections.  I just had a thought on simplicating it.  Write it, think it, then get to reviews.

That's the flasher portion, about 1/3 of the parts and nodes.  An astable multivibrator to time the flashes, a monostable m.v. to set their duration, and another astable to fire narrow pulses directly off the power rails for max brightness in each flash, pulse width widening as the batteries run down. The pulses run from 140 usec at low voltage to 75 or 80 usec at max, and you need bells, whistle, and a gong or two to make the mutlivibrator run cleanly at those narrow duty cycles.  The first astable, on the other hand, needs a bell (but not a whistle) to avoid the lockup that ASMVs are prone to.  I'd hoped to use a shared emitter resistor--it's worked for me before--but it didn't work here.

Oh, 630 to 640 usec between the pulses, varying slightly with the pulse width, and about 7.4 msec for each flash.

It's up now.  I suspect TNBW hasn't got their caches right.

Communication is feasible on the phone.  Reviewing is harder.  I would attempt only the most minor of story edits because I don't thinkthe Android's physical interface is up to the challenge.

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Thanks..  Will check it out.

---It looks good!  Sorry for the delay in getting back to it.

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But I've just copy/pasted from a 'source' window, and I'm using that as my referrence for correction.

I'm not seeing it.  Are you sure you uttered all the right magic?

I have to get to bed now.  I spent the last few hours trying to fix a design problem, and before that I put the sketch of the far future chapter up.

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You're adding more than little bits.  Of course, you've got it all wrong anyway. smile  Merran is prone to anger, not tears.  But she's pretty phlegmatic overall.

You're not going to get the kind of teen-frustration you want.  Merran's romantic interests aren't going to wake up on schedule, and she's denser than Jaylene around Elston.  (Have I got the names right?)

But I'm hoping to do a fairly thorough pass over it.

In the meantime, I've put a sketch of far-future stuff up in Book 2: a meeting between Kirsey and Pike.  Just as your story has undertones and unter-clews, so has mine.  They talk a little about them, and other things.