Y'know, the threads here are so much better than that punctuation thread in the Premium group ... .... ..

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Charles_F_Bell wrote:
njc wrote:

But this is not  a scientific paper nor an office document; it is an expressive passage in a narrative.  ...

Yes, if  there is any validity to a claim for artistic license in punctuation it is only that fiction requires more of it in different ways than non-fiction. However, [Phrase];[what could be a complete sentence] = A woman without; her man is nothing  always has poor punctuation in fiction or non-fiction.

And what of poetry?  To quote the Pirate King: And what, we ask, is life without a little poetry in it?

9 Yards.

KH wrote:

I wonder if I can sneak this through before njc gets here.

You did.  But I went the whole 324 inches.

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See Scott Kim's =Inversions= (book and website).

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But this is not  a scientific paper nor an office document; it is an expressive passage in a narrative.  Nor do I consider this 'creative punctuation',  it is accurate punctuation, representing the cadences of a particular vocalization.  That choice of vocalization for the narrative might well have been creative, but the punctuation is its literal depiction.

Norm d'Plume wrote:

... If you fly from one end of Canada to the other, you're practically 1/4 of the way around the world. Apologies to NJC for the rounding error.

Molson's Beer Commercial: Canada is the world's second largest land mass, the first nation in hockey, and the BEST part of North America! ... Thank you.

My patriotic spirit has been rekindled! En garde!

Also the world's longest coastline.

No rounding error.  You're correct to within 1/2 of the stated unit--at the latitudes in question!

No lightning for YOU!

http://www.girlgeniusonline.com/comic.php?date=20090904

(It makes sense.  Just read the previous page.)

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And a tea cozy, and ... just ... one ... spoon.

Oh, by the way, the golden-haired girl =is= the Lady Heterodyne.  The fiction is about her.

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For you: http://www.girlgeniusonline.com/comic.php?date=20151026 (this page and the next).  The green-haired warrior princess hails from a place dedicated to the active worship of Ashtara, who sounds like a rather reckless Aphrodite.  And they have ''holidays''  ...

What the heck, I'll throw this page in, too: http://www.girlgeniusonline.com/comic.php?date=20050523 .  Ho yeah, Ashtara.

Go four pages back and you'll find one of the most brilliant uses of page layout to lead the eye I've seen.

Bottom line: if someone had good evidence that drinking milkshakes tripled you chances of being hit by lightning, would you let that figure into your decision to have a milkshake?

No, he said that an 18% increase on one percent gives 1.18% ... 1.2 percent, an overall increase of (less than) 1/5 of one percent in the final risk.  (He rounded down to 1.1 instead of 1.2, which is an error--of 1/10  of 1%.)

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Wordplay may be within the reach of one person, but beyond the reach of another.  Horses for courses and licenses for audiences.
Joyce is a troublesome example, not because of his vocabulacrobatics, but because of his politics and the JackHenryAbbot excuses that the literary community made for him.  Before I knew of that, I had marked my copy of The Portable James Joyce (Humanities 101) as "The Unpotable James Joyce."  But if that's your mead, drink freely.

Or this explanation of why 18 percent isn't 18 percent: http://datechguyblog.com/2015/10/27/bac … asy-money/

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Currently chapter 66.  Kirsey, Pengrit, Strumpet, with Harriat, Vamp, Parkol, Forsa, and Midlich.

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I just made some minor edits to Sleeping with Wolves.  They don't address anybody's comments but mine, so I won't do a repub unless someone wants me to.

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Joyce was playing a game with the reader in the mechanics of language.  Most of us do not have that luxury; any games we play must stand on rock-solid mechanics.

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KHippolite wrote:

epic, however you mistake me for the continuity police. I'm the character-slayer

Mwaah-haah-haaaah-hah!

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Plugging away.  I've got another 2000 or so words of Erevain in what I hope will be nearly final form (for this round of work ... and for big revisions, period).

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As far as I'm concerned, the root form of 'twitter' is 'twit'.

Reminds me of back in the 70's or 80's when a lot of young people went around in blue jeans labelled to indicate that they had an ache in their jord.  I never did find out where the jord is, and I doubt anyone remembers jord-ache jeans anymore.  Maybe they treat it with ibuprofen now.

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That's my mid-level math background showing.  But then I may be slightly overeducated.  (My definition of overeducated includes knowing the proper, fully inflected past tense for the common Anglo-Saxon verb for defecation.)

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'Axes', plural of 'axis'.

Your point about scenes is well-taken.

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Good points, but again, that's  a specific  bit of action.  It's not the social decision-making process presented in narrative.

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The difficulties I see have to do with flow of topic, question and answer, axes arising between people and groups, tension, the dynamics of coming to a decision ... all the things that get hard when you actually try to depict them.

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There are guides to writing good dialogue.  But what about depicting meetings?  I've struggled a little, and I just completed a review that reminded me of the difficulties.  Does anyone know of any guides?