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Charles_F_Bell wrote:
njc wrote:

My understanding is that a descriptivist grammarian seeks to find the patterns that we use in organizing and arranging words, ...  By this definition, a descriptivist studying those languages may need other categories.)

I call him simply a grammarian.

njc wrote:

My understanding is that a prescriptivist grammarian, working from some blend of knowledge of the language as it is spoken by a broad range of individuals and his own preferences, judgement, and prejudices, provides instruction in the use of the language.  In chosing to advocate some constructions over others, the prescriptivist is taking the role of arbiter of the language.

And I call them Corra and their womyn of the '90's.

njc wrote:

Note that I have tried to leave aside questions of whether a description or prescription favors some groups of people over others, or some types of ideas over others.  I acknowledge that these are valid questions, but not useful in determining the meaning of these two words, and the antithesis that they appear to represent.  I hold that ... to have those words we need to have substantial agreement on their meanings. ...

Predict how successful Corra and their womyn of the '90' will be in eliminating grammatical gender. This is not a yes-or-no question but rather one that requires some historical precedent. Inserting new words like latino and african-american which otherwise would not evolve naturally  is not at all the same as changing grammar. We no more understand how grammar changes than we know how Man evolved from some species of simian now extinct,  but it certainly was not by direction of some orchestrators.

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But introducing new words and meaning is not an issue of grammar, but of lexicon.

I seem to recall (am I in error?) that through at least the 17th, 18th, and 19th centuries there were people who sought to instruct people in the language as a certain group spoke it.  That certain group was generally the wealthy and powerful, and the instruction included grammar, lexicon, and diction.  These people studied the 'inferior' dialects only for the purpose of reducing their use; they prescribed the 'approved' dialect.  It seems reasonable and useful to call these people prescriptionists, although their activities reached beyond grammar.

In my own time, it seems to me that the teachers who taught me how to know whether to you 'he and I' or 'him and me' (and never 'him and I' or 'me and him')--truly matters of grammar--were prescriptivists, though you might prefer simply to call them teachers.

Watta' place!  I don't even hafta toot my own horn!

Anant the review: not sure what flattery will get you, but it's good for something, I'm sure.

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A few more edits to Kirsey and Melayne visiting Master Threkesrom.  I do hope these are the last for a while.

Amy, I might have gotten the bit about the curtsy right.  To answer a point from your review, the Academy was born in the wreckage of the great Sundering.  It was assembled from world-fragments, and some of those were recyled rather roughly.  (That doesn't mean your concerns are invalid.  Heheheh, you wanted clooz.)

Meanwhile, I have some changes to B1 in mind that might send Glaselle to Pazot and Lifpynth in Book 2.  I mean to get her out, and a small, disconcerting trip might be a good start.

Some reviews tonight.  (Amy, don't you wish you had something out there for me to review ... smile ?)  After that I'll see again if I can get things fitting around Erevain.

Snuggery.  Hidey-hole.  Scofflaw's den/burrow/lair/nest.  Bolt-hole isn't right, since it's for an escape ('bolt') route.  If you have any historical fiction on your shelves, flip through it.

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Very well.  Let's leave aside the French Academy, which is only an example.  Let us focus on prescriptivist and descriptivist.

My understanding is that a descriptivist grammarian seeks to find the patterns that we use in organizing and arranging words, including but not limited to such categories as parts of speech, inflection (declension/conjugation) of word forms, and such organization of utterances as phrase and sentence.   (And I acknowledge that these categories may not properly apply to the languages of China, and perhaps other places.  By this definition, a descriptivist studying those languages may need other categories.)

My understanding is that a prescriptivist grammarian, working from some blend of knowledge of the language as it is spoken by a broad range of individuals and his own preferences, judgement, and prejudices, provides instruction in the use of the language.  In chosing to advocate some constructions over others, the prescriptivist is taking the role of arbiter of the language.

Note that I have tried to leave aside questions of whether a description or prescription favors some groups of people over others, or some types of ideas over others.  I acknowledge that these are valid questions, but not useful in determining the meaning of these two words, and the antithesis that they appear to represent.  I hold that arguing the purpose of the acts and practices requires having words that describe the acts and practices, and that to have those words we need to have substantial agreement on their meanings.  (Since you and I can only share mentation through words, our agreement can never be perfect, only good enough to communicate and good enough to improve.)

Now, by your definitions, in what way does the foregoing err?  In what way is it not even wrong?

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Charles_F_Bell wrote:

No, that is not it all.  The anti-concept is created for the purpose to deceive. It is not using a nuanced or alternate meaning but an anti-meaning to the word. As I said, the Progressives/Socialists have been adept at this ...

If you reject the word as well as the anti-concept for which it is used, you make it impossible for me even to ask where the deception is in the terms 'prescriptivist' or 'descriptivist', which makes it hard for me to learn to what you are objecting.  What is the deceit or false claim?  What is the lie?

Remember too that assumptions and beliefs are bound up in terms (e.g. human being/human life).  You may reject the beliefs and assumptions, but you will never convince anyone if you so completely reject the words that you will not even name them to refute them.  You will never even succeed in telling people what you do believe.

All of this is my belief and opinion, and perhaps my limitations.  But my limitations are part of who I am, and if you mean to communicate to me, you will most likely succeed if you communicate to who I am, rather than who you would like me to become.

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Some edits to B2Ch33.  Some of them address Amy's comments; some do not.  All add w$rds.

We noticed.  smile

janet reid wrote:

If it's backstory, then it's not the start of the novel. That much I can say. The novel needs to start, well, at the start. (I know, I know, I'm really clever sometimes, and helpful - not).

Hence, saith I, it is stage-setting, and not full-blossom narrative.

janet reid wrote:

Apart from not being able to really contribute, most of the time, I have no idea what you guys are talking about in the forums too.

What happened then, well that's the play ... .  Skip to about 2:20 if you like.

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If it were not aimed at an age group, what would its genre be?  Is it a coming-of-age story?

amy s wrote:

I agree that it needs to be trimmed. It seemed to wander IMO, but I got all the necessary info into the chapter. And I got to put Kha into a diaper. Nothing makes me happier than making that man squirm.  It is one of my true delights in life.

Poor Kha.  (Weeps bitterly.)

Now that that's out of the way, I think you've got a lot in there that you don't need.  You don't need to tell a story, you need to set a stage.  You may need a short story to do it, but it should be a short short-short.  The ideal would be to fit it on one page with space left over.

I've done a cursory check.  Depending on the source, the curtsey (spelling varies) may be accompanied by a bowing of the head, or the head bow is considered part of the basic movement.  So the head bow isn't wrong, but it may be an ancillary obeisance.  And since Melayne was taught it as a child, in case she had to face royalty, I expect she would have been taught it with the head bow.

In ballet, the bow extends to the shoulders, with the arms bending toward each other.  (But this isn't ballet.)

Oh, channeling Bimmy: There's an ad running on WFAN (NYC's original sports radio) for a plumbing supply house: "Are you suffering from frozen nipples?  From your nipples to your ballcocks ...."

(Oops, wrong thread.  Well, let it be.)

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Amy, thanks.  I know I grumble, but often it takes the form of "You have to be clear that they're going to the right," and I reply "No, I have to be clear that they're going to the LEFT!"  I may make a few edits today but I need to work on the Bright Idea that I had.  And I captured the visage of a woman who, I think, is a good model for Dianen (for reasons that will become clear).  I am not an artist, unlike your husband.

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Hmm.  So what I though was a category error report was instead a rejection of my use of the word in attempting to explore the boundaries you attach to its proper use?

Even with that, I'm going to have to go a long way to follow you.  First, words often attach to multiple concepts.  Somewhere (I'm trying to recall where) C. S. Lewis gives a range of different meanings attached to the word 'romantic'.  (Falling in love is not among those meanings.)

Your position seems to me to be something like a form/content distinction, in that misuse of the content denies that the form is that form.  It is (as I now see it) as if a process-server carrying a writ that is improperly issued is no longer a process-server.

Your husband's a talented guy!!

Let's keep talking about the prologue.  The author of =The Little Prince= was also a pioneer aviator who famously said, "Perfection is achieved not when there is nothing left to add but when there is nothing left to take away."  (I need to take his advice more.)

janet reid wrote:

Disclaimer(s): Haven't read Acts or Mandates. It can be a good thing. Or maybe not. Also, fantasy isn't exactly my thing.

You haven't read Acts?  Read it.  It's a whopping good story.  There are a few chapters near the beginning that read too slowly, but after that it's a roller-coaster.  And there's a romance involved--ROMANCE--and lots of hard-to-spot clues.  Primo stuff, and not typical fantasy.

The reaaon to cut it is not to slow it but to speed it.

We have, in the three story threads, a handful of characters who remember what happened at Earthwound.  Starting each story, we should know what they know about the event that launches them into this.  And maybe we should know a little more, like the way their stories are linked at the start and a detail or two of what they will uncover.  We will learn soon that Kha was grasping the Black Staff, and both Acts and Mandates have early plot sequences revolving about it, with open mysteries about why Kha did it.  So putting it in time sequence without letting any of the other secrets out would prime the reader for the early events without letting anything big out.

But, IMO, we don't want to make this a full chapter.  It's backstory, and should be abbreviated.  It gets us to the start of the journey, and there are questions yet to be answered.  "What happened then, well that's the play ..."

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Charles_F_Bell, I would like to understand what you mean but you seem to regard every question I ask as a category error, and your attempts to take me past the difficulty seem to lead me back to the same difficulty.  I would like to understand what you believe here, but my efforts seem fruitless and more frustrating to you than to me.  You've set your beliefs out, but I can't do you the consideration and give you the respect  of considering them!

I suspect that I would agree completely with about a tenth of what you say, and partly with another half.  Regardless, it would be satisfying to achieve what I've been told is called stasis (hard-long 'a'):  agreement on what the issues are, what our respective beliefs are, and where they diverge.  That doesn't seem to be possible now, and I count it a loss.

In short, I don't understand, I don't now expect to understand, I thank you for trying, and I hope that this statement is useful for you, if only to know why I've stopped bothering you on this topic.

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Grumpble.  New Big Idea involves showing how Erevain's perceptions prejudice him ... and doing it in compact dialogue.  I've gotta do a good impersonation of a Good Writer to pull this off.

See the first few hundred words of Wilkie Collins's =The Woman in White=.  Even as the narrator tells us how ugly the woman is, he makes us fall in love with her.  BRILLIANT writing.

Oh, feck!

Stasis (long hard 'a') achieved!  (Translation: we agree on what we disagree about.)

I too suggested character trimming in the intro/backstory material, but not so severely as KH.  Because it's a teaser for the whole set, and because I suggest using it to tie the timelines, I think we can name extra characters.  But KH has a point, too, in that we should be able to recognize the protagonist, and distinguish same from the supporting characters.

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So you use the term in that sentence to mean not a particular instance of 'anti-concept' but the anti-concept as a category?

Do you then regard prescriptivist grammar as a product of Progressivism?  If so, I think you are mistaken.  The warhorse example, the non-splitability of the infinitive, is held originate in applying the grammar of classical languages (and especially Latin) to English.  But the classical education, involving medieval and classical Latin as well as Hellenic Greek and old Hebrew, was shunned and dis--valued (sorry, can't find the word just now) by the Progressive movement, so it seems unlikely that the atomic infinitive is as recent a development as Progressivism.

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Charles_F_Bell wrote:

Even in the most autocratic regimes language evolved on its own until the introduction of the anti-concept by the U.S. Progressives.

To what anti-concept do you refer in this sentence?