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(10 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Girls can fight Girls, and Women can fight Women, and Girls can fight Women, and Women can fight gay men. But if you want a real "cat fight" you will have to really go out of your way to convince the reader that they should still respect your heroine after that shredding of dignity. Especially if said fight is caused by arguing over a man.

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Tom Oldman wrote:

I'd like to enter either "You Only Live Twice" or "The Long Trek Home", but I doubt if I can whip them into shape for the competition before the deadline.

~Tom

You only need the first three chapters polished! Definitely see I you can! It is easy and you never know what the judges will like!

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njc wrote:

Objective case, thee and me.  Unless you're a reigning monarch, then us and thee.

I like that: Queen Rebecca. Has a nice ring to it.

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(9 replies, posted in Fantasy/Magic & Sci-Fi)

"Thou and I"

smile

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Write a detailed history for yourself so that you get a feel of your world, the history leading up to the story, and the characters (or their parents/ancestors). Then write the novel with that history as your guide. Feel free to change and evolve things as you go. Just because it is the fist thing you write doesn't mean you can't alter it! If you want feed back on the history, go ahead and post it here or on other sites where you can get other writers responses, but put "Not to be included in novel". Plan on publishing the novel without this history but do not throw the history away. If your novel takes off and becomes a hit, you can add the history in as an "extra" in a tenth anniversary edition. smile

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(7 replies, posted in Historical Fiction)

Thanks Dunecan! 

Definitely enter Fire in the Blood in the contest!

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PByrd wrote:

I started a new story, Auctioned, and entered it in the Strongest Start. I probably should have waited on that one because I haven't completed the book yet, but I'm pantsing it (i.e flying by the seat of my pants).

You only need the first three chapters to enter. (Actually, you really only need one chapter to enter!) If you win, they hold the prize for you until you are finished writing it.

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njc wrote:

"I was born in 1085.  It was the worst day of my life ..."

1085 was when the tax men were compiling the "Doomsday Book" in England. That would make an interesting story.

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What are your entries for the the Strongest Start Competition?

Mine is Soothsayer! It is about a girl who decides that her tribe has some wrong ways of thinking/doing things and goes about changing them!

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What are your entries for the Strongest Start Competition?

Mine is Soothsayer! It is about a girl who changes the way her tribe thinks!

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(7 replies, posted in Historical Fiction)

Anyone have an entry/entries in the Strongest Start Competition?

Mine is The Soothsayer

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(10 replies, posted in Historical Fiction)

April

I like your thoughts on own research!

People can give you all sorts of advice based on their own ideas of what history is. But we really have to check things for ourselves.

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I think the biggest trouble with movies is that everything is exposed. You can't be vague but must make critical decisions. Often because the people making the movies don't know to do the research or don't think it matters, they make the wrong decisions.

In a book, the narrator can say "he put his armor on" but in the movie we see the armor, so the art director or head of costuming has to decide what kind of armor it is. When that person doesn't understand the historical context, they pick incorrect things.

I'm reminded of this when I think of the (all around poorly made) King Arthur film of 2004. The head of costuming had all of these creative and fantastic ideas about incorporating the knights' heritage and personalities into their clothing. But all her incredible work fell flat the moment the audience realized what she never thought was important. That as Roman cavalry men, the "knights" would have standard Roman armor and weapons. It wasn't that she didn't work hard at their customs (she certainly did!) but that she didn't realize that the factual history was important enough to research.

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Congratulations, Janet!

That is a huge step!

KHippolite wrote:

All the blue face paint had me wondering, then when they said Romans vs "Pict" I was like "Hey, they forgot team Drech"

Might totally steal this look for Kimberly Rose (minus the face paint)

Haha! Thanks for the thought! If they are still fighting the Romans it is too early for my Beast of Caer Baddan/Pendragon stories. smile

I'm not liking the whole "woad" paint look for Kimberly but I only read the first part of her story. She might go through a huge transformation that I don't know about...

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William the Conqueror's wife was into spanking... But I think they are a little early for this novel. smile

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I didn't get the kiss as rape.

Considering the era perhaps Catherine could feel that way, but it is a character choice and the character was written a different way.

It is also a characters choice for Matthew as well but again  the thoughts go a different direction.

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Janet Taylor-Perry wrote:

Hey, Rebecca, there are only 3 chapters.


Ah! I see! Okay. I'll take a look.

Amy

It isn't that I don't like magic
It is that I do not be understand the explanation of how it works.

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Janet

I just realized frombthe character list that their last name is Aiden!

I had forgotten that!

Please disregard everything I said about changing names!

smile

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Sorry Janet! I'm behind as it is on two of your stories! If I add another book to my reading list my head will explode! sad

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Don't fall back on stock characters.

Think about them as people and try to bring out their true qualities.

Stereotypes are for children's books. Not novels.

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Okay!

So glad! You have a great story!

KHippolite wrote:

Ignore the multi-genre comment. It was only a tag so Sol could find it. I'm hammering at his inbox with site ideas and need to direct him to this point in the conversation.

My basic concept in this series is that single forum threads should be allowed to exist in multiple groups. Eg, a group never has ownership of a thread, but acts as a categorization channel for them (much the same as it works with our stories - any given story can belong to multiple groups, so why not forum threads too?)

Oh that makes sense.

Wait...

Are you using my plight for you own political gain?!?

Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

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(28 replies, posted in Romance Inc.)

Love actually was a great movie!