Teenage boy, sandy-blonde wavy hair. Bright blue eyes glowing with divine energy. White shirt. Halo framing his face.

For funsies, I fed it in to OpenAI.art:
https://i.postimg.cc/13XvbNcr/image-696du222-1758651486000-raw.jpg

You have to upload the artwork for your paperback and go through the various wizards to prep it and make it available for sale. Amazon won't do this for you, but it's relatively painless.

That said, I've sold zero paperbacks on Amazon despite thousands of digital copies, so I don't suggest paying DTB too much attention

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about Harley Quinn murdering innocent children with explosive video games. This did not sit right with me and many others.

I'm reminded of a scene in Miller's Dark Knight Returns where Joker released his laughing gas into a stadium and kills like then thousand people. I don't recall if the artist depicted children in the crowd, but presumably they were present and also innocent. I don't recall any backlash for it though sad

Welcome aboard!

I wish there was a way to give away points to needy, homeless, and hungry writers...

Would be nice, but gifting points doesn't work, sadly.

I'm watching it on [redacted] and you see writers gifting reviewers for reviews the writer likes. This builds an echo chamber... voices daring to dissent from the lauding masses don't get gifts, so they go review other content that gives them gifts instead.

The greatest thing this site gets right is allowing objective reviews

There should be a bonus for reading new stuff, not new authors

This will only encourage me to name every post "chapter one". You mean I'm posting chapter ten, but I get an advantage for calling it chapter one? Sold! Edit: Well, I concede this is technically incorrect, but I meant it's adding one more way to game the system rather than balance the system

It doesn't work the other way unfortunately. If you post 1000 words, then edits bring it down to 100 words, the story only pays for 100 words, not the original 1k

Dirk B wrote:
Kdot wrote:

Dog

In English? Pffft!
Canis!

I raise you an "Anubis"

Dog

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Heh... the use of caps in this passage is giving me apoplexy
https://janeaustensworld.com/2006/11/29 … lery-maid/

Can you make it more thriller-ish?

Chronicles of Connor has a nice sound, but might be a little too zero'd in on MC

Fear not, I will find loopholes in everything or my middle name isn't trouble

The Lesser King
Better suited to LOTR
The Lord's Shepherd
kind of screams 1940 salvation / lost sheep Baptist reprisal

Backing away from the choices for a moment, you might be handcuffing yourself on titles by trying to join up Connor. A more accessible foray treats a wider sample of characters.
Here are the premise questions in the version I read.
a) Search ( a-1) For Christ in Connor. (a-2) for abducted child
b) Choice. eg Antonio vs lover or Campagna vs alcohol. Both of these might traditionally be considered wrong, so choice= 7 deadly sins.
c) AC. This term is the elephant in the room that will be challenging to use in a unique title
If I do not err, the above three are the central themes.If so, may I offer:
Connor versus the AC
Of course this could be considered deceptive, but more so than anything else? Most laymen assume Return of the Jedi is about Luke.
Scion of the Endtimes
kinda bland. I'd initially thought of Child of the Endtimes, but I bet that's been done to death.
Seven deadly choices series
This one is a lot of work, but doable over three books.
Don't use any of these... I'm just brainstorm examples of detaching from the MC

For the series title, I'm considering changing it from Satan's Last Stand to The Holy One.

The Holy One is less than ideal as a title for a thriller. Doable? Yes, certainly... but seems like it'll hobble itsxelf

Didn't rly notice it. As I recall, the cannon doesn't have a huge footprint going forward, so it may be a waste of energy to chase the terms around

The Fiddlers = No

The Ultima = I can work with this, but the constructions will get weird

Terminati = Ok

Domini sounds like leaders to me

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I think I should switch tracks back to my "main" story. I'm a whopping 25 chapters ahead of TNBW in my revisions there.

It will take me about 80 chapters to bring this beast to heel, which will probably land at a monstrous footprint of 250k words. Word-count is irrelevant, however. I plan to drip this as a serial when going to Amazon, maybe 2 chapters per week? At that rate, I already have 15 weeks of posts. Once I hit 52 weeks, I should be safe to start posting.

I'd rather have the complete revisions done up so I don't have any deadline/guillotine swinging over my neck

Rise is better than staff

which story are you working on these days? Seems like Connor edits?

"Your destiny is to create Neo Eden."

I wish to present my original theorem that we all get kicked off, not just the one mod

kicked off again if it helps

I was kicked off too

Wonder if it kicks everyone out, not just that one moderator.

I'm yet to find a definitive pattern about being kicked out, but I'm starting to spot tiny trends

Did you ever formally define a 4D or 5D critter?

If by this question you ask were they a specific race, then yes mine were the "Eldren". They were typically 4D beings, and kind of immortal galactic rulers, and somewhat hostile if not indifferent to the mains.

They could slip out of the 3D ("plane" if you will) and observe from outside. It was impossible to withhold secrets as they could necessarily see anything they choose to look at such as the inside of a safe. No walls could stop them should they choose to introduce themselves right into the heart of your fortress. They could also duplicate themselves, if you can picture a 3D person folding a 2D space so he intersects it twice, thus appearing in two different places to a 2D creature.

To counteract their power, I made gravity harmful to them and upped their energy requirements so they need hot stars and will gradually freeze in the deep orbits. This essentially keeps them off Earth-like worlds, giving my cast some breathing room

(name of prominent boy)-gang