Pffffft.

I write for an hour after work ends. I consider that my time. It's just one hour. Is that so much to ask?

sneak away and write in the closet so the kids can't find you. That's what I do.

I had time and you presented me with a challenge, K. The next chapter of Dictates is up. Attack!

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Fun getting to talk in real time even if it is only one sentence.

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OK, time change. It's 11 PM there, isn't it?

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Why are you awake at 3 AM?!!!!

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I think that he would send a messanger. The rievers you mention have to be mentioned again as a real threat. The keep needs someone in charge and Catherine is gone/ unable to fill in the void. Anthony doesn't matter worth spit. All he does is eat, drink, and spend the keep's money. Therefore, James has to stay. Just make the reasoning clear and you are justified in this character decision.

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This isn't the first time this has been debated by minds bigger than ours. I can't believe no one has mentioned the Myth of Sysiphus by Albert Camus. He poses the question: If there is no god, then how can there be meaning in life? He postulates that suicide is a natural endpoint of the futility of living. I debated this in a morality class and won points on a test because the teacher asked this question: What did Camus debate in the Myth of Syphilus? One answer was 'is there a god' and the other was something like, 'advocating suicide is the only logical endpoint because life is meaningless.'

I won the points because the primary question of the philosopher's posit didn't have anything to do with suicide. It had to do with the question, "Is there a God." Only once that question was answered could the other be debated.

How does this relate, Dirk? It comes down to the person who is in the heads of each MC. If it is God, and he has told the boys that this is their destiny, then he has to be right. This may be because each of them has been chosen, or it may be predestiny, where they are on a clearly defined path visible only to the Maker.  Your debate makes it clear to me once again that you aren't writing about mental illness at all, BTW. 

Personally, the whole concept of free will makes God less omniscient, (IMHO). Man is going to do what he's going to do anyway and God guides rather than plowing the road and shooting anyone who steps astray. I think the second MC is there as backup. If one person doesn't change the world, then the other can pick up the pieces and keep the plan on track.

Does this help?

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You said: I've reviewed a new member's first chapter over lunch today and it made me realise, I'm so fortunate and have come so far because of reviewers like you...

I had the same kind of help in the beginning. I have to say, isn't it nice when you can see your early mistakes in a different work and realize how far you've come? Just the fact that you are immediately aware of a tense of wording issue and know how it could be fixed...

(Sniff)  They grow up so quick!

A

I've got a new short story up for anyone interested. 'The Other Side of the Wall'

(Grins)

I've read the content of others. Good learning experience as I picked what I liked and what I didn't. What I did see is that I have a long way to go to compete with the writing of at least three others. If I win, I won't believe it. The others were that good.

K, have you seen Kingsman? The ending is totally you. Uber violent and merciless to accessory characters.

Next chapter of Dictates is in the pipe, 5x5.

I have an hour to write this morning. And it's my hour...mine...all...mine!

Me either (as you saw via Facebook). Eh, I'd hate it if I was 25 again. Still had a lot of rough edges in my life back then.

NJC,
I'm going to do at least one big rewrite. Got to do a chapter of dictates first. Been slacking too long
Good ideas!

Janet, I rewrote and reordered Mousetrap. Much better now. Thanks for your suggestions!

Have Alina know? Thinking...

I changed the opener for Katerin's short story to explain why Ellie isn't a participant in the crime. Is this better, folks?  You don't need to read anything but the introduction. How is this for an improved opener?

There is something similar to what you are all requesting that is already in place. Ex: if I want to see what is new and yet to be viewed on my current group list, I will go to Medieval Magic and Fantasy, and then about five selections pop up to organize the listed posts. If I click 'Forum' then the new posts appear with a dark blue box next to the left of them. Once viewed, the box will disappear, indicating that they have been reviewed by me.

This system isn't perfect. It only keeps track for about 12 to 24 hours. Then I have to go back and scroll through each to see if there is new material. However, since these are organized by the most recent, I can guess which ones are new. 

The only thing I would find helpful is to have the most recent commenter listed after each topic. We used to have that on the old site, so it might not be a big deal to change. That way, if it isn't my name, I know to check out the post.

I'm behind but will try to help. Talk soon.

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Been visiting in backcountry Indiana with a friend and very slow internet. Coming home tomorrow and might have some time to sit at the computer. Talk soon...

Will think of a few other uses for the cloth to mess w your people:-)